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You are correct; this story is perfect just as it is in terms of plot, characterization, and length. A "sequel" would not be a great idea - you did everything just right the first time. However, it is always one of my favorites... I keep coming back to it! You should definitely write new stories

There are no rules about who can start and finish a story. I enjoyed what I'd read and tried adding something new to it. If there are rules against finishing an open-ended story (which is common practice everywhere), then I am unaware of them. If that is the case, I will willingly withdraw my contribution. By definition, a short story should not supposed to have too many installments. Parts 2 and 3 were not as strong as the opening bit, in my humble opinion. And the author had such a creative plot. Consequently, I ended the tale the way I liked. However, it had been a while and no continuation or ending to this story came about, so I ended it the way I saw fit. Probably not the way you would have ended the story, but then, if you don't like the ending, write or your own story or finish this one the way you'd like instead of passing off judgments on something so subjective and personal... Especially if you are checking this site several times a day - you have the time! Incidentally, if orlandoneg completes his story, then I will definitely read and enjoy it. In the meantime, I will wait to read and comment on your story in terms of content, structure, style, and originality.

[Moderator's Note: I split this continuation by a new author off into its own thread. The first 3 parts are here https://breeding.zone/topic/30506-chaser-roommate-convinces-roommate-to-chase/ ] PART 4 : THE FINAL TEST Ryan did not respond to Gabe's text for the longest time. He read over the text: "What do you say? I know you want it. Even got a hot buddy with me if u r interested. Big muscle black POZ guy ready to breed you raw." Ryan just sat there carefully massaging his dick while thinking about Gabe. He found pleasure in stroking his ever growing cock, knowing that he could so easily let their VENOM invade his hole. He was ignoring the third and fourth texts he had just received from Gabe. He desperately wanted to invite the two POZ guys over and take a rough fucking, but he was still somewhat scared. Something was holding him back. "So, boy. You there? Can we cum over?" Ryan typed "YES" several times, but would always delete his response just before sending it. He wanted Gabe badly, but didn't want to put himself in a precarious situation. "I'm not home for long," he finally typed. "Maybe another time." He resumed jacking off. He imagined how good it would feel to have Gabe and this nameless black predator fuck him... Gabe messaged again: "Horny. We r cumming over 4 a quickie." Ryan took out his poppers and sniffed intensely. Feeling slightly light headed, he typed "OK" but still hesitated. But slowly, as the poppers started affecting him, making him feel horny and uninhibited, he pressed the SEND button. For a good quarter of an hour he sniffed poppers and jacked off, pleasuring his dick and massaging his hole. Out of the blue, he heard a knock at the door. Getting over his initial shock and surprise, he got up, looked through the peep hole, and saw Gabe with a muscular black man in a white tank top. He knew their one mission was to breed and convert his ass. Another knock. Ryan stayed silent, not wanting to alert the two men of his presence. Maybe Gabe and the sexy tough black guy would just go away, he thought. During these slow seconds, he continued stroking. He slid his hand on his fully erect cock and slid up and down, moaning Gabe's name. He could see Gabe a few feet away from him, and his strokes intensified. Gabe would be none the wiser. Until, that is, Ryan saw Gabe type something into his phone and the chime of the phone not far away went off. FUCK! Another text: "I know ur there!" Gabe and the black guy both continued: "Open the door, fucking bitch! We didn't come here for nothing." More knocking, now almost a pounding on the door. Ryan had no choice. He could call the cops, but that would seem pointless. He also didn't want those two guys to stay at his entrance and attract unnecessary attention of his neighbors and passers-by. He reluctantly opened the door. And there stood Gabe and the stranger, with all their sex appeal. Gabe was the same beautiful olive brown with the same attractive body which seemed even nicer than he had remembered earlier in the bathroom. On the other hand, the black stranger was a muscular, thick, charcoal dark skinned man probably in his mid-thirties, with long black hair and smooth muscles bulging from his tight jeans and T-shirt, and a hard cock visible through his pants. Gabe stepped inside, the other guy following suit. They quickly brought Ryan to his Donald's room and, once there, took out a large mirror that Donald usually kept under the bed. "This is so you can watch us as we fuck the shit out of you." Gabe pushed Ryan on the bed and started taking off his victim's clothes. Ryan was petrified; he froze. While this sexy new stranger was holding him captive by the wrists, Gabe got Ryan completely naked, lubed his thick dick, and teased warmed-up Ryan's hole. Ryan told himself that maybe he could just let Gabe penetrate him a few seconds, and only with the tip of his cock, and that would be all. He was losing his mind with the anticipation and the poppers. His heart was pounding in his chest. He was scared, but oddly excited. This is what, after all, he had wanted. Gabe rimmed him briefly Ryan's usually tight hole was quickly spreading open. The black guy was gradually letting go of Ryan's wrists as he held the now open bottle of poppers under Ryan's nose. Ryan took a few deep breaths. And that's when Gabe slid in: slowly, but purposefully and forcefully. Ryan gasped. He had never taken a cock before, let alone a raw dick. He was shaking from nervousness. But oddly, he enjoyed the feeling. The poppers were doing their work. "Fuck yeah! You want it. I knew it," confirmed Gabe. They fucked. While Gabe was pinning Ryan's ass to the bed in a doggy position, holding the thighs and sliding his rod in and out faster and faster, Ryan couldn't help but moan. It was actually quite painful, but it felt sooooo good. And the poppers were making him lose control - fast! He then looked up and saw, in the mirror, a hot man guy ramming him. FUCKING HOT, he thought. This guy is powerful. And he was scared no more... FUCK - I have to find a way to stop this. But somehow it felt so good. To have this guy plow him mercilessly. It was taboo; he shouldn't let this happen. He wanted to stay NEG. But he couldn't bring himself to end things just yet. Then, from the side, a dark hand turned Ryan's head to the side and shoved his mouth onto a hard, throbbing black shaft. And that is when he saw the black guy's face contorted in sheer pleasure. This guy was now forcing Ryan to suck him off. "Suck it, bitch! You know you want to." "Are you ready, bitch?" Gabe asked. He was getting close. Without thinking, Ryan replied, "Yes. Fuck yes. Give it to me. Fuck me. I want your dirty seed!" "You're gonna get it, Gabe roared. This moment reminded Ryan of the first night he had heard Gabe fucking Donald. Ryan moaned and moaned. "Beg for it, ordered Gabe. "Fuck me, daddy...Breed me." "Beg for it!" repeated Gabe. "Give me your cum, man. I'm your whore." Ryan was now completely into it... "BEG FOR IT, BITCH" shouted Gabe. "POZ ME, STUD!" And Gabe did. Mercilessly, Gabe's animalistic urge to destroy Ryan's tight hole took over. Gabe rammed one last time and shot his thick load inside Ryan, and then used his finger to massage it deeper inside the willing bottom. "I knew you would eventually let me breed you. Don was right." That is all Gabe said before he got dressed and left. "Call me for another session." Ryan was barely able to turn over before the black guy moved and turned Ryan onto his back. "So, are you ready for a second dose of VIRAL and UNMEDICATED cum?" he asked. DAMN, thought Ryan. But this chocolate dream was already sliding his 8-inch dick inside Ryan's spread wet ass. Something primal within Ryan was set free. Maybe it was the continual rush of poppers, or the joy of being fucked by two hung sexy hung men. "Fill me up!" That was all Ryan could say. He merely stayed there, taking hit after hit of poppers, letting this gorgeous black beast drill him with his highly infectious seed. As the top got closer, he murmured into Ryan's ear. "Here it comes, boy. Fuck your tight on this horse dick. You're gonna make me blow my deadly bullets into your virgin pussy, white boy. Oooohhh, your ass feels so good wrapped around my raw meat. Take it !" Ryan heard this and was ecstatic. He knew the moment was rapidly approaching. He felt the squishy sensation and realized that the lube must be mixed with Gabe's POZ cum and, most likely, some blood. "Fuck my unprotected hole, you twisted pig... Make me your condom," he ordered his new-found top. Unlike Gabe, this man only murmured in Ryan's ear. It felt seductive and hypnotic. He told the willing and submissive Ryan: "You white bitches are all the same. You all want to make my thick gun unload inside you. So then take my death stick, boy. Come on, bitch. You know your white hole wants it. Seal your fate and kill yourself on my black shaft like you deserve. Let loose and accept my POZ gift." As Ryan looked deep into the stranger's eyes, he felt a warm sticky sensation deep within him - the second load of the day. The GIFT that would take over every cell of his body. He knew the deed had been done. Ryan suddenly came to his senses and felt so guilty, but it was too late. As he looked up, he saw his room mate Donald stroking the last few drops of his load out of his cock. When had he arrived? His room mate had seen him taking two TOXIC loads. Donald smiled, and said: "You're so predictable. I knew you'd let Gabe convert you." Ashamed, Ryan got up and went straight to his room. His ass was torn and sore. He couldn't do anything; it had happened! TOXIC loads had found their way directly into his system. His body surged with adrenaline as he realized that his NEG and healthy days were now numbered. His conversion was inevitable. And, deep down, he'd loved it. He was a cum whore. And soon he would get the gift; he would join the brotherhood. And find a few more POZ tops and maybe a few other bottoms. Since he hadn't cum yet, he quickly remembered his boner and, still full of adrenaline, he jacked off until he blew his (hopefully) last NEG load all over himself.