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  1. From a story.... called "The Slut" although I am not sure which way it will lead....

    here is a short part of it.... just started it

     

    “Did you cry again?” his dad asked him with a growling voice.

    Mitch never knew, if his stepdad was also sad about his mom’s sudden death. He never showed a sign of mourning and never talked to him about this loss.


    “No!” Mitch replied in a whiny voice and his eyes showed instantly a wet shimmer.

     

    “Sit down” Paul ordered and pointed to one of the chairs. He rolled his eyes and took a deep breath.

     

    Paul leaned against the counter. Dressed in his tight jeans and wifebeater, he crossed his arms before his chest, showing off his muscled body.

     

    “We need to talk about some rules from now on. Since your mom died, this house looks like a pigsty.” his Dad said and Mitch followed the movement of his Dad’s hands and saw what he meant.

     

    “From now on – you will be responsible for our well-being at home. This means – you will clean the house, cook the meals, do the dishes, wash our clothes and simply be there for me, in case I need anything...”

     

    Mitch looked confused.

     

    “But DAD… that’s not fair! I’m going to school - I can’t study and keep the whole house clean” Mitch complained.

     

    His stepfather moved into his direction and stooped down a bit, to look his step-son directly into his eyes.


    “Don’t call me Dad! From now on, you call me Sir! Is that understood?” Paul said calmly.

     

    “Without me working, you wouldn’t have a roof over your head… be grateful and stop whining about your responsibilities…” his stepdad snarled dangerously.

     

    Mitch gulped hard and nodded his head in response.

     

    “You will get up early in the morning. You will prepare my breakfast and make sure I get everything I need. Then you will go to school. After that you will return immediately! Then you will do all your chores and cook something nice for us to eat – you got to maintain my penetrating power after all. And after that, if you have the time, you do your homework and then you will check on me, in case there is anything I might still need… and then you can go to sleep… Now – that your mother is gone, you have to adapt to fill her space” Paul ended his monologue.

     

    “Yes Sir.” he looked down at the table.

     

    Paul raised up again and looked down at the pathetic boy, who never made it into his heart.

     

    “So - what are you waiting for… do the dishes…” Paul ordered him and went to the living room, to watch a football match on the tele.

     

    Mitch got up from the chair and went to the sink. He started cleaning the plates and the cutlery.

     

    It didn’t bother him to do the house chores, it just didn’t feel right, that he should change his whole life now… and that his Dad didn’t pull on the same rope.

    Cleaning the dishes was one thing, but he never thought about doing the laundry.

    After doing the dishes he checked on google how to actually use a washing machine.

     

    The next morning Mitch got up early and started to prepare breakfast. He heard his stepdad singing in the shower. It was the first time, since his mother passed away, that he was actually singing in the bathroom.

     

    A few minutes later his dad entered the kitchen and without Greetings, he walked up to his son and put both hands at his outlining of his bulge.

     

    “Do you know, what this means?” he asked in a stern voice showing his thick tube, covered by his jeans.

     

    Mitch was speechless, as he recognized how very well equipped his Stepdad was at the lower compartment.

     

    “It means, that I don’t have any fucking clean underwear left in my drawer!” he growled.

     

    Mitch looked up at his father’s eyes and then down again to the massive bulge.

     

    “I thought, I made myself clear, when I said you are responsible for everything your mother did… what part of it, didn’t you understand?”

     

    “I… I… I wanted to do the laundry today after school… I checked google how to use the washer… you can check it on my mobile Dad…” Mitch mumbled.

     

    He saw the mad expression in his father’s eyes.

     

    “I mean Sir…!” Mitch added quickly.

     

    “You better start collecting all my dirty underwear at once, or else….” Paul said while eating his breakfast casually.

     

    Mitch rushed upstairs and threw every underwear he could find into the laundry basket.

    After a couple of minutes, he entered the kitchen again, while his father was making a telephone call.

     

    “No… it is nothing serious, he just doesn’t feel so well today. I guess he is still traumatized… yes… yes… That’s really sweet of you…. No – only for this week. I think he might be settled next week then. Thank you so much…. highly appreciated. Thank you again Mr. Ramirez… Bye-bye for now” and with that he ended the connection to Mitch’s school principal.

     

    The boy looked puzzled.

     

    “You are excused for this week from school… now you have plenty of time to bring some order into this house” his father said and continued with his breakfast.

     

    Mitch couldn’t do anything but stand there and stare at his dad with an open mouth.

     

    “Come here” Paul barked.

     

    Mitch moved closer to his stepfather, while Paul turned a bit around on his seat with his legs spread manly.

     

    “Down on your knees” his stepdad continued.

     

    The boy obeyed and had an exclusive look at his stepfather’s huge basket.

     

    “Last night I thought we two had an understanding….” Paul almost whispered.

     

    “There comes more responsibility with the title ‘Lady of the house’ than only doing the dishes. You will have to take care of all the things your mother did….” he continued.

     

    “ALL OF IT….” he emphasized it.

     

    Mitch understood, he made a mistake by not staying up all night and cleaning everything in the house and he felt sorry about it.

     

    “Do you get it…?” Paul asked agitated and a rain of his spittle met the boys face.

     

    A tear fell from his eyes and ran down his cheek as he nodded again.

     

    “I don’t think you do, but that’s okay. Your mom always said, you are such a bright kid… I can only see empty holes in you…” Paul said it in a spiteful way.

     

    Those words hurt the lad so much.

    Mitch didn’t dare to get up and so he just sat, between the spread legs of his stepfather, with his head hanging down.

    1. a6uldeve84u

      a6uldeve84u

      Scorpion, I look forward patiently to hearing from you.

      Bill

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  2. From a story.... called "The Slut" although I am not sure which way it will lead....

    here is a short part of it.... just started it

     

    “Did you cry again?” his dad asked him with a growling voice.

    Mitch never knew, if his stepdad was also sad about his mom’s sudden death. He never showed a sign of mourning and never talked to him about this loss.


    “No!” Mitch replied in a whiny voice and his eyes showed instantly a wet shimmer.

     

    “Sit down” Paul ordered and pointed to one of the chairs. He rolled his eyes and took a deep breath.

     

    Paul leaned against the counter. Dressed in his tight jeans and wifebeater, he crossed his arms before his chest, showing off his muscled body.

     

    “We need to talk about some rules from now on. Since your mom died, this house looks like a pigsty.” his Dad said and Mitch followed the movement of his Dad’s hands and saw what he meant.

     

    “From now on – you will be responsible for our well-being at home. This means – you will clean the house, cook the meals, do the dishes, wash our clothes and simply be there for me, in case I need anything...”

     

    Mitch looked confused.

     

    “But DAD… that’s not fair! I’m going to school - I can’t study and keep the whole house clean” Mitch complained.

     

    His stepfather moved into his direction and stooped down a bit, to look his step-son directly into his eyes.


    “Don’t call me Dad! From now on, you call me Sir! Is that understood?” Paul said calmly.

     

    “Without me working, you wouldn’t have a roof over your head… be grateful and stop whining about your responsibilities…” his stepdad snarled dangerously.

     

    Mitch gulped hard and nodded his head in response.

     

    “You will get up early in the morning. You will prepare my breakfast and make sure I get everything I need. Then you will go to school. After that you will return immediately! Then you will do all your chores and cook something nice for us to eat – you got to maintain my penetrating power after all. And after that, if you have the time, you do your homework and then you will check on me, in case there is anything I might still need… and then you can go to sleep… Now – that your mother is gone, you have to adapt to fill her space” Paul ended his monologue.

     

    “Yes Sir.” he looked down at the table.

     

    Paul raised up again and looked down at the pathetic boy, who never made it into his heart.

     

    “So - what are you waiting for… do the dishes…” Paul ordered him and went to the living room, to watch a football match on the tele.

     

    Mitch got up from the chair and went to the sink. He started cleaning the plates and the cutlery.

     

    It didn’t bother him to do the house chores, it just didn’t feel right, that he should change his whole life now… and that his Dad didn’t pull on the same rope.

    Cleaning the dishes was one thing, but he never thought about doing the laundry.

    After doing the dishes he checked on google how to actually use a washing machine.

     

    The next morning Mitch got up early and started to prepare breakfast. He heard his stepdad singing in the shower. It was the first time, since his mother passed away, that he was actually singing in the bathroom.

     

    A few minutes later his dad entered the kitchen and without Greetings, he walked up to his son and put both hands at his outlining of his bulge.

     

    “Do you know, what this means?” he asked in a stern voice showing his thick tube, covered by his jeans.

     

    Mitch was speechless, as he recognized how very well equipped his Stepdad was at the lower compartment.

     

    “It means, that I don’t have any fucking clean underwear left in my drawer!” he growled.

     

    Mitch looked up at his father’s eyes and then down again to the massive bulge.

     

    “I thought, I made myself clear, when I said you are responsible for everything your mother did… what part of it, didn’t you understand?”

     

    “I… I… I wanted to do the laundry today after school… I checked google how to use the washer… you can check it on my mobile Dad…” Mitch mumbled.

     

    He saw the mad expression in his father’s eyes.

     

    “I mean Sir…!” Mitch added quickly.

     

    “You better start collecting all my dirty underwear at once, or else….” Paul said while eating his breakfast casually.

     

    Mitch rushed upstairs and threw every underwear he could find into the laundry basket.

    After a couple of minutes, he entered the kitchen again, while his father was making a telephone call.

     

    “No… it is nothing serious, he just doesn’t feel so well today. I guess he is still traumatized… yes… yes… That’s really sweet of you…. No – only for this week. I think he might be settled next week then. Thank you so much…. highly appreciated. Thank you again Mr. Ramirez… Bye-bye for now” and with that he ended the connection to Mitch’s school principal.

     

    The boy looked puzzled.

     

    “You are excused for this week from school… now you have plenty of time to bring some order into this house” his father said and continued with his breakfast.

     

    Mitch couldn’t do anything but stand there and stare at his dad with an open mouth.

     

    “Come here” Paul barked.

     

    Mitch moved closer to his stepfather, while Paul turned a bit around on his seat with his legs spread manly.

     

    “Down on your knees” his stepdad continued.

     

    The boy obeyed and had an exclusive look at his stepfather’s huge basket.

     

    “Last night I thought we two had an understanding….” Paul almost whispered.

     

    “There comes more responsibility with the title ‘Lady of the house’ than only doing the dishes. You will have to take care of all the things your mother did….” he continued.

     

    “ALL OF IT….” he emphasized it.

     

    Mitch understood, he made a mistake by not staying up all night and cleaning everything in the house and he felt sorry about it.

     

    “Do you get it…?” Paul asked agitated and a rain of his spittle met the boys face.

     

    A tear fell from his eyes and ran down his cheek as he nodded again.

     

    “I don’t think you do, but that’s okay. Your mom always said, you are such a bright kid… I can only see empty holes in you…” Paul said it in a spiteful way.

     

    Those words hurt the lad so much.

    Mitch didn’t dare to get up and so he just sat, between the spread legs of his stepfather, with his head hanging down.

    1. a6uldeve84u

      a6uldeve84u

      Scorpion, I am so very pleased to hear from you that you are working on a new story.  I am VERY interested in reading it when you are ready to publicize it.  I know there have been issues with BZ editing stories.  Do keep me apprised of when this will be available and where.

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  3. Today is my birthday. 

    Worship me!

     

    1. a6uldeve84u

      a6uldeve84u

      HAPPY BIRTHDAY, SCORPION!  I do worship you from afar.

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  4. exactly the way i like getting fucked .. pinned down and the top rutting hard and deep .. ?

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    1. a6uldeve84u

      a6uldeve84u

      Would twer that were me on bottom!

  5. I am really enjoying your latest story "I Helped Tag My Brother-in-law"... I hope that you keep it coming.

    1. a6uldeve84u

      a6uldeve84u

      There will be one final chapter posted by tonight.

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  6. I am really enjoying your latest story "I Helped Tag My Brother-in-law"... I hope that you keep it coming.

    1. a6uldeve84u

      a6uldeve84u

      It will continue to keep coming as do the characters.  But, there isn't much more.  It's one of my shorter tales.  I just couldn't find a way to keep it going.

       

      Bill

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  7. How can I get a copy of your load tracking spreadsheet 

    1. a6uldeve84u

      a6uldeve84u

      Thank you for your interest.  There are a few requirements none of which are restrictive to my offer but help me in organization.  First, I am sharing these stories so that they can be completed and published on Breeding Zone web site.  What you write, in what direction you take the story or how you finish the story is your sole prerogative.  I relinquish all editing rights.  I also relinquish all claims to the story and require that you never acknowledge that you got the basis from me.

      Second, to help me, you will need to send me an email with BREEDING ZONE STORY as the subject line.  Include your screen name from Breeding Zone.  I need this latter to rename the story with your screen name so that I do not send the story to someone else.  Send your email request to        A6ULDV84U@BELLSOUTH.NET.  I will choose a story and send it to you.

      Third, as for the title, you may keep the same title or change it.  However, if you change the title, please send me the name of the new title.  That would be appreciated.

      I do look forward to reading your completed work.  You will have done me a great help, and that help is greatly appreciated.

      Bill

  8. Thanks for the friends request

    1. a6uldeve84u

      a6uldeve84u

      Thank you for following me.

      Bill

  9. Why are there more bottoms than tops?

    1. a6uldeve84u

      a6uldeve84u

      Why are there more bottoms than tops? Because there are more ass holes than dicks.

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