seattlebbbtm Posted March 12, 2015 Report Share Posted March 12, 2015 I like this story because you are mixing in some pussy and that added element is extra hot 1 3 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Negasswhore Posted March 12, 2015 Report Share Posted March 12, 2015 Fuck rjb56 this is some super hot story you got going here! I really hope you want to keep writing more of this, can´t wait to hear about how they get these boys crying hard to get more from them. Thank you for the story! 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
breedbaltimore Posted March 12, 2015 Report Share Posted March 12, 2015 So hot! had me rock hard and dripping precum! 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
HighlyCurious Posted March 14, 2015 Report Share Posted March 14, 2015 I do hope you keep this story going. 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Frenchpig Posted March 16, 2015 Report Share Posted March 16, 2015 amazing story, keep writing it's fucking hot 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sleazebugga Posted March 16, 2015 Report Share Posted March 16, 2015 fuck shot a good load over this 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
nethingtwice Posted March 17, 2015 Report Share Posted March 17, 2015 No way. This cannot be your first story. It was perfect in every way. I just shot a massive load. Had to stop myself several times from cumming cause I wanted to make it til the end. Amazing job. Recommend you write more. 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
rjb56 Posted March 17, 2015 Author Report Share Posted March 17, 2015 Thank you for the feedback on my story. I assure you that it is my first shot at writing. I am writing a conclusion for this story and working out an idea for a new story. I really appreciate the comments, they get me excited about continuing to write. 2 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
xtranicegayguy Posted March 18, 2015 Report Share Posted March 18, 2015 I agree, writing is outstanding, you develop the story in such away that if you experience some of the impacts/effects you say right away "oh so true, I know been there done that except never harder than poppers but would love to explore something harder to see what the impacts are yet not become addicted, been successful so far with not getting impacted by smoking or drinking....I could go into which ones but each person is different so it's not relevant here.....keep up the writing, impatient to see where you go with it...... 2 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CABARE49 Posted March 27, 2015 Report Share Posted March 27, 2015 I hope the next chapter comes soon. This is really hot! 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
rjb56 Posted April 2, 2015 Author Report Share Posted April 2, 2015 I'm currently writing a new story called Austin, but I'm having a tough time finishing the story of Caleb and Paul. Anyone have any suggestions of what they'd like seeing happen to our two young former virgins. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
wnt2bslutty Posted April 3, 2015 Report Share Posted April 3, 2015 They need to get totally into it. As well as his girlfriend! 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Docebrown Posted April 5, 2015 Report Share Posted April 5, 2015 Excellent story. Blew two loads reading this first part. You have to continue to finish it. 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
needpozzed Posted April 7, 2015 Report Share Posted April 7, 2015 They need to lose their innocence and become complete sluts begging for cock. Then... Enter the rugby team. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
redhotxxx Posted April 7, 2015 Report Share Posted April 7, 2015 Fuck! That was a fantastic story! Please keep writing. They need to be trained until they completely surrender and become total cum sluts. 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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