LegionQuest Posted December 18, 2015 Report Share Posted December 18, 2015 Fuck, this story makes me cum. I think Gary needs some toxic piss to drink Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bareall77 Posted December 18, 2015 Report Share Posted December 18, 2015 This is a chaser's dream-to get toxic loads of cum fucked into you while you're swallowing cum that is just as deadly to you! I loved the way you set the story up at the beginning to give us a reason why RAS exists and why Gary thinks the way he does. Yet you don't dwell on it. Just enough background and then focus on the meat of the story (pun intended)! Hot fucking story! I must say that if I were in Gary's shoes I would DO the EXACT same thing---or at least try my hardest! 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
seattlebbbtm Posted December 19, 2015 Report Share Posted December 19, 2015 Totally depraved and totally hot Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jeff238 Posted December 19, 2015 Author Report Share Posted December 19, 2015 Thanks guys The few times I author stories, I try to leave a little ambiguity so each person can put his own spin on it. I don't enjoy reading stories that put in every little detail. I left this open ended, but not sure If I want to keep going. Maybe after the holidays... 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bareall77 Posted December 19, 2015 Report Share Posted December 19, 2015 @jeff238...I like a little ambiguity too. However, I think you stumbled onto something here. Maybe another story like it...that takes place in the same time period but with different characters and circumstances? Or...perhaps when RAS first started to spread? Or an epilogue to "The Last Chapter." Either way. Happy Holidays and I've become a fan so happy writing as well! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Posted December 19, 2015 Report Share Posted December 19, 2015 Fukkin hot story. It captures the exact sentiment that kept me and many other pigs giving and taking loads with countless men at the baths after turning poz in the early 80: Once you were infected, nothing really mattered except fucking. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
lungfucker Posted December 19, 2015 Report Share Posted December 19, 2015 Love the line in Chapter 4 when Anthony whispered sweet nothings into Gary's ear: "You need to die". Fuck! Why does that bone me? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
seattlebbbtm Posted December 20, 2015 Report Share Posted December 20, 2015 Can they visit the bathhouse? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jeff238 Posted December 20, 2015 Author Report Share Posted December 20, 2015 @seattlebbbttm...spoiler alert Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yeolad Posted December 20, 2015 Report Share Posted December 20, 2015 Hot Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TTFN Posted December 24, 2015 Report Share Posted December 24, 2015 Hot story, would like some rough breeding and maybe some blood. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
setacinrof Posted December 25, 2015 Report Share Posted December 25, 2015 This storynhas the wrong title. There should be MORE CHAPTERS - a least once a day until Gary dies. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
cheshiregay Posted December 25, 2015 Report Share Posted December 25, 2015 so want a poz guy to fuck me like that Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
snaketat Posted December 25, 2015 Report Share Posted December 25, 2015 really great story line and well written. no doubt, for many of us there is some truth in those words. like a lot of sci-fi and horror writing and film, some of the terror is knowing that there is a large amount of truth hidden in the words. i would think that many of us who have made the choice to chase would soon visit a house as described in this story. i do not see that as a death wish. Rather, it is simply understanding that each individual must make the choices that, to them represent the best set of circumstances for them. Any chance of that crew forming a RAS army dedicated to retaking America for those unable to fight the changes? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
backpackguy Posted February 14, 2016 Report Share Posted February 14, 2016 Must admit that this story has gotten me boned....More, more please...so Fuuuckkin HOT!!!!!!!!!!!! ;) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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