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This is the BEST thing I have read here hands down. Absolutely no contest. I was there in the hospice room with Ken and the narrator. I was there in the sling room with Ken and the greedy marine guy. Captivated! 

The entire story structured to an exceptional level writing skill. As 'ejaculaTe' said;

[ But there's a sensuality and tenderness between Ken and the narrator that takes the story beyond mere bug-chasing porn. ] 

And as 'Monster5-8gPA' said;

[ ... to show they are worthy of love and kindness it at times the best thing you can do for another human being ]

Those comments resonate with me. Yes, we are all horny fuckers, yet, at the end of the long hard day, we are human beings, with feelings. I have never read anything on here until now where my heartstrings were tugged, and, emotions bubbled to the surface. Then, the narrator manages to yank me from that place with;

''Until Mark.'', which caused a loud audible laughter. And that in my book is a sign of tremendous talent and creativity, managing to take someone on a journey where the story flicks their emotions from one emotion to another in a split second. 

Thank you VERY much 'Spermpig' 😎

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