JWC1202

Just now, JWC1202 said:

Wow. This is an unusual thing to find here, an actual love story. Not romantic in any usual sense, but a love story all the same. "One of these guys is gone" suggests that this is an exercise in grief, and, if so, it is a privilege to be allowed a glimpse into this powerful relationship. The flow of the story, even its patter of repetitions, give it a feeling of confessional poetry. Although I was hard throughout the story, especially at the erotic language describing the slam, this is something other than mere porn. It is raw and sad and powerful, something to reflect on, not just jack-off to. 

Oh...and the photos....often a distraction to a good story, are a touching addition. 

Wow. This is an unusual thing to find here, an actual love story. Not romantic in any usual sense, but a love story all the same. "One of these guys is gone" suggests that this is an exercise in grief, and, if so, it is a privilege to be allowed a glimpse into this powerful relationship. The flow of the story, even its patter of repetitions, give it a feeling of confessional poetry. Although I was hard throughout the story, especially at the erotic language describing the slam, this is something other than mere porn. It is raw and sad and powerful, something to reflect on, not just jack-off to. 

Jeff is going to have a great summer, lucky boy. I love an initiation story, and this one is off to a promising start. In every good story there is usually one line that grabs me and pulls me in. Here it is: “I just want to make one thing clear, little bitch. When you have sex with us, we will hurt you. And I will sometimes hurt you a lot." Sexy and sinister, a winning combo. 

"And my faggots don't get safewords because I own them."

Nick has such great dialogue. I wish that tops in porn could convey this level of authority and menace. So sexy. I'm looking forward to more. Much more. 

"You look so pretty, Chase, bent over my stool....wearing my ropes.....crying for me." 

Mm, very hot beginning with lots of promise. I suspect that Chase's innocence will not remain intact for long, going the way of his formerly tight sphincter. The best narratives have a convincing storytelling voice, and that is just what Chase has, which pairs well with Nick's subtle menace.

(It doesn't hurt!, either, that the author is fucking sexy!)

I so desperately need this story to be continued. The pictures only heighten that necessity. Please, please, please: more Justin and Jeremy!

Awesome! I like that the story subverts expectations. Rather than the older, gay guy with drug experience corrupting Mark, it is the young, straight, inexperienced Mark leading Kyle out of sobriety and into a world of sexual degradation. It's hot that this young dude is finding his Dom persona with the help of tina, and is unapologetically using his father figure to explore this new side of himself. A fun read.

1 hour ago, LiamHudsonXXX said:

Sir, your story telling is legend. I have read this through a few times. My mind visualizing nights at the east side club here in NYC. If you ever get an itch to revisit Coop and his journey, I would love it. Coop maybe getting together with Grant or Luke on his own. Letting dad watch via cam... or the guys take Coop and DP him.  Coop's graduation sex party....  My imagination is running wild.  All in due time. 

Yes! I swear, I compose sequels to this story in my head constantly. There is real magic between Cooper and his Dad, and I only wish there were more chapters of them together. A Cooper and Grant sequel would be amazing. The story hints darkly at Coop getting excited at the thought of raw dick. I'd love to learn that Paul recognized that Grant and some of the others using his son's hole were poz, and allowed, even encouraged Coop's stealthing.  Paul loves his son, but is eager to covert him into a poz slampig. One of my favorite stories by one of BZ's best authors! 

Just when I think I have exhausted the hottest stories on this site, I stumble on a real winner like this one. Sammy's tale of being re-cunted is rare among the more typical stories about young pigs being corrupted. His conflict is compelling, but he cannot resist the urge to have his cunt filled after too long and resuming his proper role. An exceptionally well-written story. 

So jealous. I wish someone had taken me in hand and initiated me that way.

My favorite story on BZ. I hunger for more. It's been awhile, and I hope and pray that does not mean that the story has been abandoned. Justin and Jeremy deserve at least a few more chapters to deal with the revelation, their incestuous desires, and where they go from here. And their fans deserve a bit more fun from this great story and this terrific storyteller. Please, please, please...!

A surprise and a treat to find this fun story resumed unexpectedly....!

I'm eager to witness Jason's "journey of discovery." I love a slow burn story that takes its time with world and character building, and this is one. Blake's confidence practically drips off the screen, and is as palpable as Jason's naiveté. I am eager for more! 

I began sucking my cousin off shortly after I turned 15. He was 14. The first time was in my family's basement rec room during a family Christmas get together. He had some experience, having  jerked off with friends before, so when I told him that I was gay, he asked if I wanted to blow him. I sure as hell did! Weirdly, when he asked if I wanted him to "do it" in my mouth, I assume he meant cum. When I nodded yes, he started pissing down my throat. 😲 So, I'm the unusual fag who tasted piss before ever tasting cum. We would continue screwing around, mostly oral, for the next 8 months, culminating in him fucking me for the first time in his family living room (while my parents celebrated their 25th anniversary with all our family right across the street). By this I had started seeing a 25-year-old dude, so I cooled things with my (otherwise straight) cousin. 

'Tis the season for a new chapter to this promising story! Robbie knew what Baby Boy was getting. We seem to have a family tradition here in need of some exploring. 

In Breeding Season 3, Dayton O'Connor slices his sub's chest with a blade, leaving it covered in blood. After unloading up its ass, he slugs it in the face several times, which I love! There is a scene in another TIM movie in which Brad McGuire gives John Sullivan several post-coital face punches, too. So hot.

I saw that someone else said that Christian seemed very unfriendly when encountered in public. By his own admission, Christian is extremely shy. As a rather shy dude myself, I know we sometimes come off as unfriendly or rude without meaning to. I adore Christian. Watch his getting fucked by Sean Hunter in Built to Fuck. Christian is simply beautiful. 

A definite yes. The main problem being that I love swallowing nut so much that I usually slurp the load down before I can share it. The best scenario is passing a top's nut  back and forth with another cum-greedy bottom while he looks on, enjoying how much we relish his seed. I have not done that anywhere near enough. Just thinking about it has me rock hard.

Wow! A fully original story here is unusual, but this one is just that. A vampiric love story with an AIDS subtext and a touch of hardcore raunch make this a great read. Lucas was chosen to partner with Demitri, unlike the lesser boys, who are simply drained for nourishment and disposed. Beautiful!

On 7/2/2023 at 11:01 PM, azncumbucket said:

all I could think about is how it felt so good to be with Jack instead of Ben at that moment.

This is what makes a follow-up chapter necessary! The wedding ring has been trashed amidst the mess of Tony's apartment. Ben will be getting a video of his nasty chemwhore husband getting fucked on the piss-covered floor of that same apartment's bathroom. I need to see this play out. I'd love for Tony and Jack to invite Ben to fuck his husband up, to really destroy him...for the usual $20 fee, of course.

The story is as well-written as it is filthy. I especially loved John's dialogue, and how he switched from tender daddy to sadist from moment to moment. I was hoping his son's would join him in roughing up the cheap cunt. Maybe next time. 

PartyandBreed consistently does one of the most difficult things a writer can do: he keeps the excitement building so that the stories just get better and better as one continues to read. Just masterful. I wait eagerly for the next chapter: for Chad's conversion, for Greg's reaction, for unprecedented loads of cum...!

Funny and sexy at the sane time. I hope it continues. I'm eager to see how many loads Caleb can take before school lets out! PE coach? Principal? Fellow students? Those hook-up apps can lead one astray. How many of those loads he's taking are poz? Let's find out!

As a neg guy, it is interesting reading over these responses, especially on a site that lauds bug-chasing fantasy. I appreciate all the honesty here. I was not very safe as a bottom throughout the 80s, just lucky. I was never a guy who took multiple loads per night, but I was sexually active, rarely used condoms, yet remained negative, even though I had boyfriends who contracted (and, in some cases, succumbed) to AIDS. I am not terribly active these days, nor on PrEP, and I sometimes think that being + would be easier, at least sexually. But hearing about the reality of medical insurance, meds, opportunistic infections, etc. make me prefer the fantasy to the daily struggle of a poz life. Still, that toxic spooge holds an appeal, doesn't it?

I so want to hang with that family. A Dad and his sons getting high and fucking a fag together is so hot. 

On 9/23/2016 at 6:58 PM, rawrawraw76 said:

I turned to Jesse. “OK, we need to step this up a few notches. You have that second slam?”

He nodded, then flashed an evil grin. “This one’s…a little bigger. Can I administer this time?”

“Fuck yeah,” I replied. “I’ll just keep teasing this faggot’s cunt while you plunge some more meth into his vein.”

Jesse went right to work.

I love this moment! Partly, because I really like the idea of Dalton getting slammed by one of his high school classmates, but also because I appreciate Tom telling him to "plunge some more meth into his veins." I appreciate the lack of euphemism. The word meth is used so seldom here that it actually has more power in those instances when it is used. 

It is simultaneously a good thing that we don't live in a world in which gay men can chem, rape, and poz innocent high school boys without consequences...and a deeply regrettable thing that we don't live in a world in which men like Tom, Brian, Jesse, and Tristan (that fucking sexy bastard) can chem, rape, and poz boys like Jace and Dalton without consequences. A fantastic, gripping story!