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[Breeder] Someone's Poem, For Real


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“If I were to write a poem about you,” someone said about me not too long ago, “I’d write about the feel of your skin, the smell of you, the way you taste on my tongue. You’d be the best poem I ever wrote.”

The poem that came out of that encounter is certainly the best poem I’ve ever read. Thank you for writing it about our night together, Ace. It’s beautiful. And thank you for letting me share it with my readers.

Someday I’ll Read You This Poem and You’ll Fall in Love with Me All Over Againlying beside you crushed

pushing my way inside

hard press pull me through

envelope me deeper and longer

this is not about sex

two bodies rubbed and raw

lubricated by sweat

this is not about sex

me trying to push the other side

so far in I’m nearly out

your nimble back jumps

my fingers trace your nerves

pattern of swirling war pant

the scars from pulling marking

passage of flames and breath

can’t compare your taste

to chocolate can’t

compare your taste to flowers

there is nothing before worthy

nothing to describe pleasure

not sweet not sour not bitter not salt not umami

your taste of the absence of taste

if I sound obsessed it is because I am

obsessed with the sound of you the

way you play upon my lips

you vibrate inside me you shake

around me a drum slowly beating

crooning “row row row” while you

skip at the cool air I blow over you

this is about love

the way it can grow at a moment

a moment grows to a year or more

this is about love

our love will make pulling apart worse

the pain a testament to our pleasure12316001024335229-8605575140195614613?l=mrsteed64.blogspot.com

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