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It was a beautiful Saturday afternoon and my wife, Florence, and I had taken a taxi downtown to Lacey's Department Store. We needed a new bedspread as the old one was getting pretty threadbare.

 

We went up to the bedding department on the seventh floor, and it was

appalling. They had nothing. Years ago Lacey's had been a wonderful

store. You could find anything there, but no more. Coarse artificial

fabrics, ugly colors, shoddy workmanship. Everything was badly

manufactured and very expensive. We wandered up and down the counters looking and shaking our heads. Where would we ever find what we were looking for? If this was what Lacey's was carrying, no one was even making anything we would want to buy.

 

We decided to go home, but when we got out on the street, it was

absolutely mobbed. We had not been aware that today was the Latin Day Parade, and many blocks were closed off for street fairs. On many of the side streets, there were carts peddling delicacies from all the different Latin countries.

 

We wandered through a couple of blocks, looking at the exotic

merchandise. Maybe we would find a bedspread, but no such luck. At one stand we had some delicious Mexican tacos.

 

We walked back to the Avenue to find a cab, but forget it. The roadways were bumper-to-bumper traffic. Even if we could have found a cab, it would have taken us hours to get home, and cost us a bundle, with the meter ticking away as the vehicle idled in heavy traffic.

 

"What are we going to do, Arthur?" Florence asked me.

 

"We'll have to take the metro," I answered her. The metro was, of

course, the subway. We had spent our honeymoon in Paris, and I was in love with all things Parisian. And so with a slight Gallic

pretentiousness, I had been referring to the subway as the metro for

years. In Paris they, of course, called the subway the metro.

 

In a hundred years Florence would never have thought to take the subway. She was a taxi person. No matter how much more a taxi cost, she hated being underground, and never traveled that way. But now we had no choice. If we wanted to get home, we would have to take the subway. Even a bus was out of the question with this jam-up. We'd get home tomorrow morning.

 

We found an entrance right next to Lacey's and went down the stairs. I bought a card at the booth, and we went through the turnstiles. The platform was so packed with people, you couldn't even move.

 

"There must be something wrong," I said. "It looks like there hasn't

been a train in a half hour."

 

"It's so crowded," Florence complained. "This is awful."

 

We tried to work our way down the platform. It was a tight squeeze.

"It's the Latin Day Parade," I said, noticing the people around us.

It was a very Caribbean crowd. I felt as if I could have been in Havana or San Juan. Everybody was very lively and festive. We continued to move down the platform and suddenly we came to a halt. There were four men absolutely blocking the platform, from one side to the other, and they didn't seem very willing to move.

 

"Excuse me," I said. "You're blocking the whole damned platform.

We'd like to get through."

 

"You hear this guy?" said one of them to the others. "He say we are

blocking the whole damned platform. He would like to get through." He was imitating me. Making fun of me.

 

"You're very rude," I said, shoving him, trying to get by.

 

"Oh. We are rude," he announced to the others, shoving me back. "He

say we are very rude." He held his position firmly and refused to let us pass. Suddenly I heard the sound of a train coming into the station. Thank goodness. Now I would get away from these guys. I was starting to feel a little threatened. I don't think Florence even realized what was going on, that we were in a dangerous situation.

 

The sound grew tremendously loud, and you couldn't hear words anymore. The train pulled into the station and the doors opened. I started to guide Florence toward the open doors, but suddenly I felt as if I were being swept off my feet. I couldn't control my own movements. The four men had closed around me and we moved into the train as a group. I felt their hands supporting me, as my feet flip-flopped around not gaining much traction.

 

I was standing in the middle of the car, packed like a sardine. These four guys around me, one on each side, and hundreds of people around them. I didn't even have a pole to hold on to, but I didn't really need one. There was no way I could fall. There was no way I could move an inch. And where the hell was Florence? We had gotten separated, and she was nowhere around. I was worried she hadn't gotten on the train, I wanted to try to locate her, but I couldn't move a muscle. The train pulled out of the station and the acceleration forced me back against the man behind me. (One of the four.)

 

The guy who had been imitating me was standing directly in front of me, facing me. I looked up at his face and he gave me a scary smile.

 

"How you doin'?" he asked me.

 

"Fine," I said nervously.

 

"Wha's yo' name?"

 

"Look here," I started to protest.

 

"Wha's yo' name?" he insisted.

 

"Arthur," I said. I should have lied. I should have said Edgar or

something, but I was nervous now, and not thinking too clearly.

 

"My name is Pablo," he said. "Pleased to meet you there, Arthur. This is a real pleasure," his tongue dragged on the word pleasure.

 

"Nice to meet you," I answered, smiling tightly, not knowing what he

had on his mind. Pablo was around forty with a black moustache and

beard. He had a red bandanna wrapped around his head, and a black and gray ponytail hung down from it. He was the oldest of the four. He wore a blue cotton shirt, unbuttoned halfway down his chest, and I could see his body was hairy also.

 

"This here is Juanito," he nodded toward the fellow on my left, who was also tall, but thinner. He also had a black moustache and beard, but his jet-black hair was cut short. His shirtsleeves were rolled up, and I could see the muscles bulging in his strong arms. I didn't want any trouble with him. I didn't want any trouble with any of these guys.

 

"Hello, Juanito," I said, smiling at him nervously.

 

"Hola, Papito." He grinned at me. Juanito was good-looking.

 

"And this here is Miguelito," said Pablo, nodding toward the guy to my right. Miguelito was the youngest and the smallest of them. He was short and skinny, but wiry looking. I didn't doubt that he was also very fast and very strong.

 

"Miguelito," I nodded to my right.

 

"Hola, Papito," he said, and gave me a wicked toothy smile.

 

"That tall guy behind you is mi amigo, Angel," said Pablo. I twisted

my head around and studied Angel for a second. He was very lean looking and very mean looking. His dark eyes suggested cruelty and danger. I didn't doubt for a second that he could be a drug dealer or something. Any of them could have been. My neck was starting to hurt, so I faced front again and looked at Pablo.

 

This certainly was a strange situation. How had I gotten in this

predicament? In the middle of a subway car, surrounded by the four of them. Was it a coincidence or had they engineered it?

 

Suddenly, I heard a voice calling from way down the car, "Arthur!

Arthur!" It was Florence. She was on the train, (thank goodness,) and she had found me, but there was no way she could have gotten to me. I smiled at her, and wanted to wave to her, but my arms were pinned to my sides in the crush. She remained where she was imprisoned and smiled back at me.

 

Then I felt something strange behind me. Down low. A pulling. Someone was pulling on the seat of my pants. And then I felt something else. I didn't know quite what it was. I could swear someone was cutting down the seat of my pants with a knife. But that was crazy. But then Ithought I felt the touch of metal on my butt cheek. And was I feeling a draft? A little cold air on my ass? But that was too crazy. What was happening?

 

I looked up into Pablo's face and he seemed to be laughing. "My

friend, Angel, behind you. He's one crazy guy." I twisted my head

around in panic. It was true. Angel had slit my good slacks with a

sharp knife. Bastard! I had spent a lot of money for those slacks. I wanted to scream, but I didn't dare. The man had a knife. I wanted torun, but I couldn't budge an inch. I was in trouble

 

Suddenly I felt fingers feeding through the slit and pressing into the crack between my buttcheeks. He had slit my jockey shorts as well. I could feel his hot blunt fingers on my skin. I wanted to grab his arm and pull it away from me, but I couldn't move my own arms. Why had he destroyed my beautiful pants? Meanness. That was it.

 

His fingers started moving further into my crack. The tips were

caressing my butthole. My God. This was insane. One of the fingers

moved through the muscle and dug into my asshole. Good lord. He was

finger raping me. I wanted to scream, but this was just too

embarrassing. There I was in the middle of a crowded subway car with a guy's finger in my asshole. He was digging it around, right and left, up and down, right and left, up and down. In and out. In and out.

 

"You like that, Papito?" asked Pablo.

 

"No," I protested. "Make him stop it. Make him take it out."

 

"Oh, he gonna take it out real soon," Pablo assured me.

 

Finally the finger did come out, but then I felt some movement against my butt. Something was going on. Was Angel pulling down his zipper? Pulling down his zipper and twisting around. By this time I had a pretty good idea what was happening. Angel had pulled down his zipper and was digging around in his pants to pull out his hard cock. I could feel his body move away from mine, only below the waist, and then I felt the warm blunt head of a large penis feeding through the slit in my pants and my underpants. I felt it going between my cheeks, guided by Angel's fingers, and then the tip of it was pressed against my opening. Now his hips moved forward, and he was forcing it in me, and it hurt like hell.

He just kept pushing and pushing, and my damned asshole was starting to spread around his dick. "Ooowww. Ooowww," I cried silently. The

damned thing just kept moving in, until finally I felt his zipper

scratching my asscheeks. Angel was raping me. Angel was fucking me. This couldn't be happening!

 

There were tears pouring down my cheeks, but Pablo, Juanito, and

Miguelito were smiling broadly in satisfaction. I couldn't see Angel's face, but he must have been beaming as he started to hunch into my ass. What a strange feeling. A big dick moving back and forth in my asshole. The pain was going away a little.

 

The train sped down the tracks toward the next station, and the car

rocked back and forth. Under normal circumstances I would have lost my footing and fallen, but I was held in place on all four sides, and when my body was thrown backwards or forwards, I was either slamming my ass down on Angel's steely rod, or lifting off of it for a second, giving him pleasure either way.

 

Suddenly the lights went off in the car. That happens sometimes, for a minute or two. In the dark I felt hot lips pressing down on my own, and a large meaty tongue digging into my mouth. I was really surprised. Pablo was giving me a deep juicy kiss. How disgusting! Disgusting, but somehow sexy. Sexy and stimulating. My cock was hardening. I started to suck down upon his tongue, and found my cock was getting stiffer and stiffer. Now I could feel his long hard dick pressing against my front, and I became conscious of the two erections, one on my right, and one on my left, that were pressing into my sides, rubbing against me. Juanito and Miguelito. I got so excited, I almost came in my shorts.

 

I closed my ass around Angel's dick, as tightly as I could and started to jack his cock inside my body. I greedily sucked on Pablo's tongue, and--the lights came back on and our faces separated in a flash, but I could still feel Angel in my gut. He was starting to pound furiously. Or as furiously as he could in such little space. And then I felt hot liquid gushing up into my body. It was Angel's nectar. My hole tried to suck out his juices. When he and I had both caught our breath, and I thought it was all over, Pablo said to me "Excuse me, Papito. We don't wanna be rude like you said, but we gotta move around a little. You just stand where you is."

 

I stood firmly in place while the circle slowly pushed against the crowds and moved around me. Now Juanito was behind me, and Angel was on my right. I was facing little skinny Miguelito, and Pablo was on my left. I felt more silent fumbling below waist level, and knew that Juanito was pulling down his zipper and digging out his dick.

 

Sure enough, a few seconds later, I felt another hot throbbing knob dig through my torn clothes, and head towards my rectum. My rectum was wet now. Wet with Angel's hot cum, so Juanito's cock entered me much more easily than Angel's had.

 

"You like a little better now?" asked Pablo from my left.

 

"Si," I admitted. Yes.

 

Pablo laughed a little and whispered to the others, "He like hot Spanish cock."

 

The others started giggling. "Si, si. He like Spanish cock." I was

afraid someone else would hear them, but the train was so noisy, I guess I didn't have anything to worry about. Tall, skinny Juanito started seriously digging his cock into my hole. It wasn't just to humiliate me anymore. He wanted to fuck. He wanted to get his rocks off in my clutching channel. His dick was a little longer than Angel's but not quite as wide, so it was a comfortable fuck and I was enjoying it. They could see I was enjoying it. Miguelito, in front of me, drew down my zipper and dug his hand inside. He closed it around my stiff member and began to stroke. It was heavenly. Someone jacking my dick while someone plowed my ass. Heavenly.

 

"Ay, si. Si," I groaned, lapsing into high school Spanish. A lady whom I had noticed first standing behind Pablo, and who was now standing just behind Miguelito looked at me strangely. She was a middle aged Latina. She had heard me, and she clearly understood Spanish. I quickly looked away from her and tried to concentrate on Juanito's fleshpole digging in and out of my ass. My rectum started to actively participate in the assault. It was petting and stroking the stiff hard instrument with real affection. I wished it didn't ever have to end, but I could feel Juanito's pelvis go into a series of determined short shoves, and more hot liquid started jetting into my thirsty hole. Juanito pulled his cock out and my hole closed in upon itself squirting some of the juice down my leg and staining my shredded pants.

 

Halfway down toward the floor, I felt Juanito's big palm slapping my

buttcheeks. Then I felt him stuff himself back through his zipper, and I think I even heard the zipper zipping up. Miguelito removed his soft hand from my penis, which was protruding through my own zipper. I could feel the metal edges scratching against my hard pole.

 

"We gonna do another ring around the rosy," whispered Pablo into my

left ear. "Now you just stand where you is." I nodded. Once again the circle shifted around me.

 

Dangerous Angel who had slit my trousers and stolen my virginity was now standing eye to eye with me. I somehow knew that one wrong move and I would feel his knife in my gut. Little Miguelito was now on my left, and tall Juanito was on my right, having just emptied his balljuice into my ass canal. I looked at him. He looked contented.

 

Then I felt Pablo's bristly moustache and beard at the back of my neck and along my left cheek. "Now I got the good position," he whispered to me. "This is where I was waiting to get." I felt his large paws caressing my asscheeks. He gave a fast little excited nip on my left ear. I didn't think anyone had noticed, thank goodness.

 

Once again I felt activity below the waste, and heard the sound of a

zipper. And soon another big pole was poking into my private place. But this one seemed very thick. Very very thick. How could that go in? I wondered. I was really curious now, and I forced my arms into movement, so that I could reach behind myself and feel Pablo's heavy rod. It really was thick. "Ay, Papito, si," he whispered to me. "Jerk my big dick. Feel what's gonna go into yo' hot hole. You gonna enjoy that, ain't you?"

 

"Yes," I answered. What was I going to say?'No'?

 

"Put it in for me, honey," he whispered into my ear, practically

licking it. "Put yo' man's big cock into yo' hot pussy." With my

arm bent behind me, I tried to maneuver it into my body. I got it into position and began pressing back on it. Slowly and with difficulty my flesh was spreading apart around it, and it was heading home, nine inches into me.

 

"Uff," I breathed.

 

"Oh, man. So nice. So nice," chanted Pablo into my ear, as he hunched into my behind. And once I got used to the girth of it, it really was `so nice'. I closed my eyes as the train roared forward, rocking me in a steady comforting motion on and off that meaty warm plunger. On and off. On and off. The rhythm of the tracks. I didn't have to think about a thing. It was all just happening to me.

 

"Oh, Pablo," I sighed aloud. And the Latina lady who was now behind

Angel gave me a strange suspicious look. I didn't even care. She

couldn't see anything. And it was all wonderful.

 

"Arthur. Arthur," called Florence from down the car. I smiled at her and nodded. I still couldn't wave. She was watching me as I was getting my husbandly ass fucked, and in a million years she could never imagine what was happening in that subway car. It was funny. I laughed a little. Pablo thought I was laughing from pleasure and began to hammer into me. Each time he slammed forward, I would slam back, but above the waist you couldn't see the hint of a movement. We were just a couple of guys crushed in a subway car on the way home from the Latin Day Parade.

 

"Ay, Papito. Que culo," he said appreciatively. `What an ass'.

This time I think the woman maybe heard the word `culo'. She was

really giving me some piercing strange looks. I kept my eyes blank.

Angel meanwhile was playing with my dick, just as Miguelito had. I

looked at him, but his eyes avoided me. It was like we didn't even know each other. Okay. If that was the way he wanted it. But he kept stroking my penis, which felt very good.

 

Pablo was rotating his hips, trying to invent new directions to fuck me from. One direction hit my prostate hard and I would have jumped a foot in the air if only I could have moved a muscle. He heard me gasp, and started to hammer into my gland.

 

"Arthur. Arthur," waved Florence, trying to edge her way through the

crowd to be at my side. Just what I needed right now. "Stay there,

Florence," I yelled above the crowd in a trembling voice. "It's too

crowded."

 

It was hard to speak with the feelings that were coursing through my

midsection. And I wanted to concentrate on those feelings, not have to pretend that I wasn't having those feelings with Florence jabbering pleasantries at my side, while Pablo's big cock was threading in and out of my ass. "Uff," I said again. The woman behind Angel gave me a dirty look. I think she was beginning to suspect something. Maybe because my face was sweating a little. I just kept a frozen smile on my face and looked beyond her.

 

The woman couldn't have missed hearing Pablo's hardly stifled throaty

"GGGRAAAHH," as his Spanish seed fertilized my assgarden. There was

so much of it, that it began to ooze out around his planted cock, and run down my pants legs. My ass squeezed down on the softening member, hugging it, caressing it, loving it. "Que culo," he repeated.

 

"Gracias," I murmered. The woman was now sneering at me. I took my

eyes off her and looked up into Angel's baby browns. His thin cruel

lips were spread in an amused smirk. He was looking into Pablo's eyes and communicating a shared experience. My ass.

 

I felt Pablo stuffing his cock back in his pants and zipping up, way down below `see' level. Then we played circle again. I stood frozen, while the quartet spiraled into fourth position.

 

I was suddenly looking up into the handsome chiseled face of tall, skinny Juanito.

 

I liked Juanito. He was my type. If there had been room to kneel on the floor, I would have sucked him off. I mean, I've never sucked anybody off, but I was certainly considering that I wouldn't be adverse to sucking Juanito off. To take his big prick in my mouth, and lovingly run my tongue all around it, and then to chomp down, and start suctioning it in, over my tongue, letting it stray back into my virgin throat. Stop. Stop. "Thoughts like this will drive you mad," I thought.

 

"Ay, Papito," whispered Pablo into my right ear, giving it a quick

bite. The woman saw. Angel, who, I think, was a little mad began

licking my neck right in front of everybody. I tried not to react. I was pretending as if nothing were happening.

 

Now little Miguelito was behind my buttcheeks, and I felt the familiar fumbling, and heard the zipper go down. He worked his slender ass away from me (how come so far away?) to get his prick in line. It started coming through the slit, and I felt his finger pushing into my sloppy hole. He had one finger extended, searching for the opening, and then the dick followed. It followed, and it followed, and it followed. It was endless. Was it going up to my navel? It must have been over a foot long. How could such a skinny little guy have such a long dick? It was still going in. My god. It was pressing against my asswalls, but the knob was hitting very high. It was hurting. And then I felt his zipper scratching my cleft. He was ball deep.

 

Thank goodness it was all the way in now. He started to fuck into me, and he was hitting deeper areas than any of the others had hit. It hurt a little. But it was good a little too.

 

I just couldn't remain passive anymore. I took a deep breath and tried to move my arms, which up until now had been pinned to my sides, though I had gotten one of them behind my back for a second to feel Pablo's cock. Now I wanted my hands in front. I twisted and struggled and finally I did get my hands in front of me. I had two choices. I could either play with my own dick, which was hanging there unattended at the moment, or I could be very daring, and try to play with Juanito's dick. I didn't think he'd really mind. And he was so handsome.

 

I made the decision, and furtively began to lower Juanito's zipper, while little Miguelito hammered away behind me with his anaconda cock. When Juanito realized what I was doing, a big smile swept across his face. I knew he would like it. I knew it.

 

"Si, Papito," he said seductively.

 

I dug into his underwear and planted my palm around his heavy meat, which now started to swell and straighten. I worked it through his zipper, and began jerking him gently. What a nice cock. I really would have liked to get my mouth around that thing. I was wondering if after Miguelito shot his load, I could get them to make a double shift so I could get Juanito's sweet pipe inside my asslips one more time.

 

Pablo was looking down. I think he could see what I was doing. He whispered something to Angel who was facing him, and they both started fidgeting, making the tight little area tighter still. They were unzipping. Both of them. They were starting to jerk themselves (do a paja) on each side of me, while I jerked beautiful Juanito, and energetic, athletic, little Miguelito humped and humped my buttocks, as his python penis built a new nest inside my intestines.

 

The one thing that was worrying me, is that we had made several stops and the train was starting to empty out. One more stop and it would look funny that we were all five pressed together in the center of the car. And that woman was still giving me nasty looks. She never took her eyes off my face. It was as if she knew what I was doing in every part of my body.

 

I was also starting to worry that Florence was getting closer. This

intimate little scene couldn't go on too much longer. I heard heavy

breathing all around me. I felt Juanito's hand pulling my fist off his dick and replacing it with his own. Now there were three pajas going on, as Miguelito continued to enjoy my culo. "Mmmmm. Mmmm. Mmmmmm." Everybody was making obscene noises, and I felt hot liquid warmth shoot out around my left hand which was near Juanito's prick. He had cum on me. He was done. He gave a tired happy smile. Then left and right, Pablo and Angel shot off on me. Or shot off on my destroyed trousers. I must look a sight, with gobs of cum all over my clothes. Pablo licked my ear again. The woman frowned and shook her head. Florence was getting closer. It was a race.

 

I tightened my assflesh around Miguelito. I needed him to shoot fast

now. As much as I could, I moved my ass forward and backward to

encourage him. I heard shuddering gasps, and I felt the snake first

stretching inside me and then inseminating me. Hot gush. Gush. Gush.

Gush. Gush. "Aaaarrrrggghhh," yelled Miguelito. I think everyone in

the car turned at that point to see what was happening. I kept my face blank and stared off into the horizon. Gush. Gush. Gush. It was still hosing into me. I frantically grabbed my own dick and did a paja, and in a second I was gushing, myself. My cum was running down my pants.

 

"Arthur," said Florence. She was standing fairly close to me now.

Just behind Juanito. Next to the disapproving Spanish lady.

 

"Hi, Florence," I said.

 

"What a crowded train."

 

"Yes," I answered.

 

"We have to get off next stop," she reminded me.

 

"I know, dear."

 

I felt Miguelito withdrawing that long fleshtube from my ass, and tried not to react. Below waist level, everyone was zipping up. I moved my hands to my own zipper and raised it, after stuffing myself back inside. But my ass was still going to be hanging out. That was a problem.

 

The train was pulling into our station. Florence and I started moving toward the door. It wasn't so hard to move now. Juanito politely moved to the side to let me pass. We didn't look at each other. I wanted to grab him and kiss him, shove my mouth over his lips, lick his sweet tongue, get down on my knees, suck his delectable dick, be his manwhore, be his slave. But we didn't look at each other.

 

"Maricon," the Spanish woman uttered as I passed her.

 

"What did she say?" asked Florence.

 

"Nothing," I said. "I didn't hear anything." I wasn't going to

tell my wife that the woman had called her husband a fairy.

 

We were positioned in front of the door as the train rocked into the

station. I never looked back. If only I could have taken their phone numbers. Something. But this would never happen again. So sad. A one-time thing.

 

The train ground to a halt in the station and I rapidly stepped out,

positioning myself in front of Florence, who was used to walking beside

me.

 

"What are you doing?" she asked.

 

"Just walk behind me. Walk right behind me."

 

"Why?" She had to have a reason for everything.

 

"Never mind," I ordered. "Just walk behind me. Walk one step behind

me." With any luck I would get home with no one seeing my naked oozing ass peeking out through the long jagged slit in my cum-covered, beautiful, pricey, navy blue Ralph Lauren slacks.

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