Surrender — hide if you must, but nature always prevails.

[bareback-flipflop]

47 minutes ago, foryouruse said:

Hey, as I see it, it is a great story that we wouldn’t have seen if you didn’t try to translate it. I don’t know many people who could translate a story written in English into other languages without hiccups. We run into a similar issue with people who have never done any stories complaining about some of the stories here. Please don’t get discouraged or upset. I think you are way ahead of what I could have done and I’m hoping to see more.

Thanks for this comment. But note I was just another commenter and not the author. 
I usually don’t use translator apps (except for some very complicated sentences or terms). I write originally English. So it’s because of my English language skills if you find any incorrect wording or grammar errors 😄

[fagsluT-Ian]

Dear Readers,

Before continuing or restart the story, I want to thank everyone who responded to it. You should know that this is the very first story I’ve ever written and published some kind of THAT kind of story. That makes me all the more grateful for the honest feedback—especially from those who pointed out what didn’t work. Only when I’m aware of my mistakes can I grow and improve. To all of you I promise to tery to avoid such things which happened to my story. 

As many of you have correctly noticed, I write the story in my native language, German, and then translate it into English. Starting directly in English wouldn’t work for me, especially when writing scenes with sexual content and at least I have to pause for a moment given the level of horniness. Certain provocative words—like “fag,” “slut,” or “slave”—can have a strong personal impact on me, and I’ve found that modern tools like Copilot often refuse to translate such passages due to their explicit nature.

With this being said, I use now the Microsoft Function in WORD. I habem, this time it gives a better result. Also I learnt to wait a day or two before publishing, even it makes me horny to write and share my sexual ideas and fantasy story. But it would also mean, that it takes longer for a new chapter. But my ideas in my head are way far from empty.

While reviewing also the rest of the story, I realized that some logical inconsistencies whih needed to be fixed and revised. You’ll see the results in a remastered version in which I hope this time you’ll enjoy it even more. Now I am wondering if I should restart the story within this story, or should I restart the story as a total new one. Sorry for so much confusion, but please feel invited to dm also, when you see things to be corrected or so.

[TaKinGDeePanal]

@fagsluT-Ian - if you send a message to the moderators, you may be able to ask them for help in editing. That way, you don't have to start again.

[fagsluT-Ian]

16 minutes ago, TaKinGDeePanal said:

@fagsluT-Ian - if you send a message to the moderators, you may be able to ask them for help in editing. That way, you don't have to start again.

Thanks but maybe it is easier to start ove new. The chapters are alreay separatly done

[wolfcub01]

If you do start it over link to the new one here would be awesome and appreciated. Personally my reading comprehension is enough that I was able to easily understand and get turned on by your story as is.  Id read it with a translator if you published it if German it's a good story. You could post both if you wanted even. Great first story BTW