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This chapter is as good as, if not a bit better, than the earlier chapters. Reflecting all the activity of that afternoon and evening, this chapter moves right along — in fact, I had to slow myself down a couple of times. A perceptive reader — and if you’re on this site, aren’t you a perceptive lad? (/s) — will appreciate the description of the steps you took to safeguard your belongings when party time arrived. And there’s always a snooty nosed guy who thinks his feces don’t stink, and your description of him is great. I’m a little surprised none of you decked him when he made the remark in the hall, but then he’d have wanted the police which would be inconvenient. Do you get the idea that I really liked this installment…? I shudder to think how many pens you used in writing it down in the notebook. Thanks again for sharing…1 point