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The Day I Pozzed My Brother's Friend
Poztopguy004 replied to Mlo's topic in Bug Chasing & Gift Giving FICTION
Yes, actually. I sort of copied your work, edited a few grammar errors, went a few minor direction shifts from your baseline and kind of pushed your ending a bit further. But this is your story and I have no right to post your work. However if there is some way I can get a copy to you for review, I'd love to have your critique and comments. I'm a professional writer, have been for forty-five years. This work is good. In fact it is one of the better pieces of work here. Some of these stories are not as engaging. Probably I'm stepping out of line and if so, I apologize. It has been a habit of mine to edit adult works because there is so much potential for greatness but most authors would not be caught dead admitting they write what I call "content." I do though I write for myself mostly these days.