It is a pity because the guy was a good writer but he did get WAY too enthusiastic in that last part. There is going up to the line of what is OK and then there is smashing straight through it. He did the latter so I absolutely understand it being removed. Austin is right - its a shame his talent couldn't be reined in. From writing elsewhere I know some of the fun is writing 'to a brief'. Getting your message across in a more subtle way can sometimes end up being even hotter to write and (hopefully) read.
