Knightfalconer

1 hour ago, JC3275 said:

It was a great story until the boner-killing shemale.  I enjoy your writing style, but anything fem is a full stop.  No hate, just an honest personal preference in my feedback.  Look forward to more chapters/stories by you, without that element.

Totally agree with this sentiment.

Wish there were more tales of a leather / rubber clad top, taking control of a naïve / nervous younger neg guy. Seducing him with reassuring words and false promises to 'play safe, persuading his target to come over to the his place / lair for 'just a bit of fun'.

Knowing that once he steps inside, the front door will be locked and the younger guy will be led to the bedroom. Soon, his foolishly trusting young victim, will be totally helpless , through the application of bondage straps; a gag; blindfold/mask etc. Even (if necessary), an injection of something to crush any remaining resistance within the younger guy, and replace those feelings with a deep hunger to get fucked......

......fucked by the top's large, bare cock.

Ultimately, the top blasts his poz seed deep into the younger guy's ravaged arse, and in doing so, claims his latest victim..

On 5/13/2025 at 10:35 PM, SubManDan said:

Then opens his bag takes out some rope and a leather gag and orders me upstairs.

I was gagged and tied to the corners of the bed

Love tales involving some bondage and use of a gag.

5 hours ago, JWC1202 said:

don't try to saddle them with your baggage. 

I attacked no one specific, so get back into your pram!.

I don't have baggage.... unless travelling.

Know what else I (all other gay men don't have.......

A VAGINA!!!! 

(aka CUNT; PUSSY; TWAT; SNATCH; BEAVER; VULVA; CLIT; MUFF; MINGE etc.

To refer to such during man on man sex, is meaningless (unless one of the men is undergoing surgery to 'change'... or as Victoria Wood (RIP) once described it:

"Having the full conversion. You know... pipes re-laid....... all on-site rubbish removed!"

I'd briefly used k whilst learning to take a fist for the first time, but then I stopped using it.

Several years later, I dropped in on a FB mate whilst on my way home from work. He was in  'Tom of Finland' attire 😚 as he'd been playing earlier. We just chatted over a drink, but then my mate stood said he was tired and was going to bed for a few hours. He then said, that if I wanted to stay until he woke up, I was welcome to use the toys; lube; porn etc to 'entertain' myself. Before he went in to his bedroom, he added:

"Oh, there's a ready made slam on the side, you're welcome to it if you want!"

Whilst I was disappointed not to be playing with him, a slam in conjunction with the a toy and some porn, would make things enjoyable for me whilst on my own. Unfortunately, my FB had forgotten that he'd mixed k in with the slam. The result was I spent the next few hours, holding onto the sofa, wondering what the hell was happening. When my FB woke up, he realised instantly what had happened and was very apologetic.

He made it up to me afterwards 😉, but I've avoided k ever since.

On 6/14/2025 at 2:03 AM, cumfillthishole said:

He moans and throws his head back. He says yes that’s right faggot. I release his dick and jump to my feet. I exclaim that I am not a faggot. I may be queer but not a faggot. I just like to suck dick, take dick and get cum shot in my holes. He laughs and reaches up toward my body. He pulls down my underwear and frees my dick. He laughs at it and calls it my clit. He flicks it and says whatever queer, get back to work.

A good story, I hope it continues?

That said, I've played top/vers on the BDSM scene for over twenty five years now, yet I can't understand why some (mainly North American) authors, use the word 'faggot' in a story, as its so derogatory and negative. There are plenty of other words which can be used by a top, to display his dominance / control of a scene / over a sub guy, without needing to repeat such a pejorative and abusive term.

Similarly, why make reference to 'pussy'; 'cunt'; 'clit' or even 'man-gina' etc? Man on man, gay sex doesn't need to be feminised in this way, unless a story has a specific TV/TS theme. 

On 6/6/2025 at 8:07 AM, Malicon said:

Florian:"Now, take your shower, Henning. I leave this toothbrush here for you. You know what to do with it."
Just before closing the door, Florian smirking: "And only come out when it turned red."

mmmm can't wait for the next chapter.... especially as having used the toothbrush, Henning's arse will be 'fertile' for Florian's next deposit of poz seed.

Shame that there isn't going to be another chapter, with Max fucking Danny again, (maybe restraining and gagging him because he's a bit reluctant this time). Then, just before Max blasts another toxic load into Danny's arse, Max reveals that he's impregnating Danny with poz seed!

Sounds novel..... 🙂

On 9/1/2012 at 10:32 AM, HotSeed said:

With that, he grabbed my legs and held them wide, exposing my ass. He bent down and began licking and then rimming my hole deep. No one had ever touched my hole before and now this full grown man had his tongue in it. He then mounted me and without saying a word took his very hard cock and drove it into my virgin boy cunt. I yelped as his bare cock forced open my hole for the first time. He put one of his hands over my mouth and forced his raw cock all the way into me. It hurt like hell. He began fucking me and as he did my hole began to relax and open up. He felt my hole open up for him. He told me I was a natural bottom boy. He pulled out and spit on his cock and shoved it back into my hole. The more he fucked me, the more I relaxed. I began feeling quite good. I began to really get excited that he was fucking me. He fucked me for a very long time and kept telling me what a good boy I was. As he fucked me faster, I knew he was ready to cum. He looked at me in my eyes and didn't say a word, but eventually buried his cock deep in my bowels and let out a deep , load moan. He had shot his seed in me and I was no longer a virgin.

Wish something like that had happened to me when I was young and naive.

A decade on, and is anyone still waiting for the next two chapters?

On 6/7/2025 at 3:24 PM, Bluey02 said:

No 1 is more realistic... I mean there were 7 others before this guy. I'm both a realist and romantic, but sometimes you just gotta stick to the rules. 😉

Quite true.

Besides, No 8 now needs find his first victim and begin a tally of his own, whilst Ross will invariably shift his focus on ensnaring No 9.

On 12/24/2024 at 7:43 AM, HVLpoz88 said:

That would be good 🥵

I've been thinking about it, but realise there isn't much time left, in which to write it.

On 4/7/2023 at 6:28 PM, BootmanLA said:

Here's another way to think about it.

When you get a moving violation ticket, you may pay a fine (or a few days in jail, which may be suspended) and lose your license for, say, 60 days. After that, you're free to drive again. But the ticket stays on your record - and your insurer will see it for (typically) three years or so; if you get another ticket within that period, the insurer is much more likely to jack up your rate or cancel you, because you have a history. They wouldn't know about your history if the ticket were taken off your account as soon as you paid the fine and your sentence/suspension was over.

I understand the point you are making, but should a middle aged driver still be penalised for being a bit of a speed freak when he was a teenager.

I know someone who received had a clean driving licence for thirty years and then accumulated several speeding tickets in a very short period of time. The total was sufficient to have lost their licence (& their career), but a friend knew that the person's mother had died just before the tickets started accumulating, and too lose their licence, would make them even more depressed. Accordingly, they took some of the points and the person has not had a speeding ticket in the years since.

I think this 'penalty points' system is reminiscent of being at school. It is quite churlish!

It doesn't matter if the points can only be seen by the profile owner and the administrators. I'm sure anyone receiving points for doing something accidentally/unintentionally (like posting in the wrong area or using unacceptable language), bitterly resent being treated this way. We all make mistakes (even if its just pressing the wrong button on a keyboard) and a person is usually willing to forgive. That appears not to be the case on BZ where any transgression is penalised, whether clearly intentionally or not.

Simply moving or (as necessary) deleting a post is surely quite sufficient in most cases.

On any other site, your account would simply be suspended for a period (with the right of appeal because administrators do make mistakes). After several infractions & suspensions, you would be given a warning that your account will be deleted unless you adhered to the rules.

On 1/3/2016 at 6:43 PM, logan43 said:

“Feel my balls against your grundle you whore? I’m fucking all the way in you, you cum slut.”

Grundle?? WTF??

Even as a native speaker of British English, this was a new word for me. Never come across its usage (on a gay, medical or any other scene for that matter). Which is surprising, as when I looked it up in a dictionary, it said it was:

slang for the perineum (the area of sensitive skin located between the genitals and the anus.

A hot story.

I love the inclusion of some bondage and a gag on the neg victim, I hope the next chapter will see these items continuing to be used... perhaps with an added hood or blindfold?

'The Ripper' - I think there's potentially a series of stories here..... each with a different victim!

On 2/7/2024 at 2:38 AM, BootmanLA said:

then it helps to regularly attribute the quote to a particular character, by name. As in: "I really like the way you fuck," Peter said.

And try to avoid too many cases of "he said" when you haven't specified, in that paragraph, who's speaking. It doesn't have to be by name necessarily, as long as the context makes it clear. So "The cocky jock paused as he looked over my bookshelf. 'I didn't know you liked to read science fiction,' he said, as he pulled one book after another from the shelf." works even without repeating that "cocky jock" means "Brandon".

With fifteen or twenty lines of dialog in a row, it can get difficult to keep track of who's saying what.

Totally agree.

Its less complicated when there are only two people in the scene so a simple dialogue is like a game of tennis - batted back and forth. In such cases, only periodic additions of 'he said' or 'muttered Adam' are required.

All I would add is an advisory to always place each character's lines on separate line from the other characters last statement. i.e.

"You're hole is twitching with hunger isn't it?" demanded Chris.

"Yes Sir, it is!" replied Phil.

"What does it want boy?" As he asked this, Chris climbed on to the mattress and knelt between Phil's splayed and restrained legs.

"It needs to feel your bare cock inside it please Sir" came the reply, accompanied by a wiggle of the arse.

Well structured dialogue can enhance a scene by helping the tension to build, as well as slowing the inevitable temptation by an author, to rush towards penetration and orgasm.

10 hours ago, Scout said:

“Here it comes, Andy!” he shouted. “Here comes my poz load! Take it.” And with a deep, guttural roar, he emptied himself inside me, thrust after thrust. With each inward pulse, I pictured the ribbons of toxic cum shooting deep into me, mixing with my blood. I was thrilled as I  thought, We just mated. Stuart just impregnated me. His toxic babies will grow inside me.

A very horny story indeed, with a deep connection between the gifter and recipient.

Personally, the fem/jewellery aspect turned me off (but its clearly something the author enjoys).

My only small criticism is that if they guys were not suppose to reveal their names to each other, then Stuart would have waited until they were alone in the bedroom before asking Andy what his name was.

Sadly, yet another story with a hot start, great potential... then everything goes limp!

Two more examples (slightly out of date now though):

'Gatorade' is a brand of sports/energy drink (popular in the US), often referred to in these stories. Despite its introduction into the UK in 2008, its still far less well known (I'd never heard of it until joining this website), or widely available here. People of an older generation are more likely to refer to 'Lucozade', whilst younger generations will probably refer to 'Red Bull' or 'Monster'.

In the latter half of the 20th Century, 'Durex' was (& remains), a well known brand of condoms in the UK, but at the same time in Australia, it was a brand of adhesive tape! The tape is no longer produced under this name due to a growing awareness of its connection to a type of contraceptive.

On 1/5/2021 at 4:13 AM, rapazsolitario said:

Part II

 

A week after I talked to the guy I have fucked and stealthed, he called me. I was at work, so I couldn't answer it. But when I got home later, I returned the call to see what he was up to and if he wanted me to fuck him again.

"Hey, man, what's up", I said when he answered.

"I'm kind of desperate", he said. "I went to the doctor last week and today I came back there to take the results of some exames..."

"You better? That flu is over?", I asked.

"Man, I have HIV", he said. "It's so fucked up, I'm gonna die."

"It's not the end of the world", I said. "A lot of guys have a normal life with the virus, you will get used to it. Why have you called me? Worried that I caught it from you?"

"It's kind of the opposite", he said. "Are you sure you are neg? I mean, you are into that bareback stuff"

"I'm poz too", I said. "But you didn't get it from me, we used a condom"

"You sure it didn't break without you seeing it?", He asked.

"Man, I would feel if the condom was broken, I checked it after we had sex. I'm telling you, the condom wouldn't break by itself"

It was not a lie and I did check it. The condom was broken because I broke it. And I indeed checked it after we had sex.

"I always had oral sex without a condom on, it must be that", he said.

"Man, it's not healthy to be thinking about that. What passed is past. What you can do now is taking care of yourself. Wanna come over? We can talk, you will see that I have a normal happy life, living with the virus. And maybe we can have a little fun".

"I don't know, man, the doctor said I shouldn't".

"I can't get it again, and now we don't need condoms anymore. It will be fun".

"Can I crush at your place?", He asked. "I really don't want to be alone and I don't have any friends in this city. I'm freaking out a little bit".

"Take a bag and put some clothes in it, you can stay here for the time you need me. I'm here for you, we are part of the same brotherhood now and we protect each other".

"Thank you man", he said. "I really appreciate it. And I'm sorry about that, but you were good to me the other day and I don't have anyone to talk about this shit".

"I get it, I freaked out too. Come oven and we will talk. I will message you the address."

I had a huge smile on my face when we hang up. I could have pozzed a lot of guys by now, but he was the first one that I knew for sure that I did it. My first-born. Pregnant with my toxic babies. It was really hot and my cock was rock hard in my pants.

Half an hour later, he was knocking on my door. His eyes were red like he was crying and he hugged me tight.

"It's gonna be ok", I said.

I lead the way to the living room and we sat on the couch next to each other. He hasn't talked yet and I had my hand on his back.

"How it happened?", He finally asked.

"I think we will never know, but I assure you that it's not the end of your life."

"I knew it was risky to let strangers fuck me, but I was always careful, I swear. And I use a condom when I top too."

"Well, it will always be risky, condoms can break, cum can leak, you can get it from a blowjob...", I said. "But now you can treat yourself and you won't have to worry about it anymore".

"You say it like it was a good thing".

"It's not bad either. You can have a lot of unprotected sex and you will not get it again".

"I swear I'm so pissed right now that I could have a lot of sex and pass it on to other guys", he said.

"You can do that, I sure did", I said.

"When you found you that you have it?", He asked.

"About ten years ago, I was young and naive, but look at me now, I'm still here and don't plan on going anywhere".

"The doctor said that when you take your pills, after some time, you can't infect other people", he said.

"He is right, but when people don't know their status, they are dangerous. The risk is higher when you have sex with a person that don't know their status. Or when a guy don't take those pills, like me."

"Why would you do that?", He asked.

"The side effects are not that good for me, but it changes with each person.", I said.

"And you still have bareback sex!", He was surprised.

"Well, everyone knows the risk, I'm not fooling anybody. When the guy is smart, he asks for a condom, like you did."

"Yeah, and look where it brought me", he said. "Man, I really want to fuck around, am I a bad person?"

"Not at all, they did it to you, so you want to give it back, it's absolutely normal. And a little hot, you must admit it", I said.

"Man, I'm horny since I got those results, I don't know what's going through my mind, I'm messed up.", He said.

"Being poz make you horny?", I asked. "Because I'm poz too, and I think we are both horny now."

"I don't know, bro. I'm still freaked out. I think I will never have sex again in my life", he said.

"Or I could raw fuck you now, pound your ass here on my couch, make you feel so good that you will forget everything. I want to put my poz juice inside of you. What do you say to that? Wanna share this bond? We will be connected forever. Let it out of your mind, be a proud poz gay. Or you can be a pussy and hide in the dark, it's up to you, your choice only."

"I was looking for poz on the internet today and I found some videos of people into this stuff", he said.

"And how did you feel?", I asked.

"I'm so embarrassed with myself, but it was hot. I didn't know that it was an actual fetish. I wanted to cum so bad, but I didn't, it would be wrong."

"You saying that your cum is inside you since you discovered your new status?", I asked.

"Yeah"

"I have a new plan, I usually don't bottom, but fuck that. Give it to me, I need your cum inside my guts. After that, if you are still turned on by this shit, I fuck you too and we mix our fluids. Deal?", I asked.

"I mean, I guess we could try...", He said.

"You are already horny, I am too. Let's do it and tomorrow we think about what is coming your way."

The guy was still confused by the situation and a little shocked for felling horny about poz sex. Everything was happening really fast. But I knew I could talk him into it, so, I started kissing his amazing poz lips.

This is a well written and realistically convincing bit of conversation between a poz stealther and his latest victim.

Sadly, the author of this erotic tale hasn't logging in since Nov 2022.

So a fifth chapter is unlikely to get posted. :-(

Would love to hear our protagonist meet up again with the 'hot leather man' (who it is revealed, sports a bio-hazard tattoo) for another horny session!