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I am now expecting the unexpected from you. Didn't see the BB twist coming, but it fits into the overall story line quite well!  I believe you have captured the inner workings of some (through BB's story) of those in politics who express their dislike and even hate for members of the LGBTQ community.  The one who pops to mind is a certain senator from SC...🤣 Thanks for this installment and looking forward to the next...

4 minutes ago, Scanbu said:

Thanks! These two were just to perfectly in alignment to be realistic. They needed a LITTLE contention between them. 

Can you tell I hate having to wash the dishes? It's a perfectly legitimate reason ti argue in my book 

 

 

I agree...😃 This is why I have had a dishwasher in every place that I have lived...😉

Adding appropriate context in erotic stories is a difficult task to do while keeping the overall story line progressing at a good pace to maintain the reader's attention. This dream chapter provided a great way to develop the emotional bond between Zeke and Tommy--teaching them and us what really matters in relationships.  Another well-written and thoughtful chapter!

Love the introduction of the twins to the story!  I really like and hope that future chapters tell us how successful their plan to infect the R party's young and older men was/is.  (They might even rename the party to the "P" party....🤣 ) Can't wait to read more! 

7 hours ago, Scanbu said:

You want to know the truth? Comments like this make it worth the effort. It's so good to know people like what I write

 

Thank you 

I believe in rewarding people for doing great and pozitive things.  Writing sounds easy, but it takes skill and talent to do it well, and you accomplish this with every new chapter!  😀

Outstanding writing with intriguing twists in the story line!  Love how you develop characters over several chapters.  (We are still learning more bits and pieces about Mike and Jeff. ) This takes tremendous skill and wordsmanship to do and keep the readers' attention, especially leading up to and through the Kip fuckfest!  Well done, @Scanbu!

I must agree that you can write stories that are truly amazing and arousing! Your words bring the characters to life in my mind and take me along in their journey(s).  Please keep sharing these stories.  They are some of the best erotica on this site! 😀

Kudos for keeping us readers glued to your excellently written and erection-producing chapters.  I really liked how you introduced and incorporated Jason into Tommy and Zeke's life and assuming his role as a gifter in the baths.  Looking forward to learning how Alex responds to becoming Zeke's sex slave and how this will affect his relationship with Jason.  Can't wait for your next installment!

Nicely written and a good transition for Tommy from a total bottom to a gifter!  Hopefully, Tommy will embrace this new role and spread his gift to other neg guys both young and old...☣️ 

I think we all have an "evil" side just like Tommy.  Most never get a chance to allow this side out completely.  It's great to see Tommy allow "Evil Thomas" emerge and express himself in public.  Your description gave me a vivid mental picture of Tommy in his leather gear walking through the festival led by Zeke and in the hotel with Ed and Zeke.  I think having Tommy fuck Ed with his almost certain toxic cum would have further punctuated the "evilness" of Thomas in both Zeke's and Ed's eyes and increased Ed's desire to refuse no load as he returns to the festival.

Looking forward to Zeke and Tommy's wedding and what sexy things it will involve.  How will Zeke and Tommy consummate the marriage? There are so many pozzibilities?!  Thanks again for continuing this fantastic story line!

Love how you have integrated these two story lines to make a very engaging and sexy chapter for Zeke and Tommy while keeping Mike and Jeff "alive" and giving us readers more details about their life together.  Thank you for sharing these stories and your writing skills...😀

Enjoying this story line just as much as your others...😀  Each sentence keeps my interest.  Looking forward to see where you take Zeke and Tommy!

Like others, I was surprised with the ending. Not at all what I expected, but quite appropriate and thought-provoking for us readers.  Thanks for the amazing writing and attention-grabbing story line! 

The level of detail, in my opinion, depends on the characters and their importance in the chapter/story line, but I believe (since this is a gay sex-oriented site,), there can't be too much detail when it comes to describing sex scenes, especially the first pozzing of a neg guy.....😉

Each chapter adds a new "twist" and dimension to the story line, and always keeps my attention and cock bouncing...😉 Excellent writing!  Keep the chapters cumming, @Scanbu!

A fantastic conclusion of the initiation.  Oh how I dream to to be the Pledge!  Now, it's time for the Pledge to become a full member of the Brotherhood by recruiting new Pledges and expand the Brotherhood!  Thank you for a story line that celebrates Cock and his Glory and Power of Life--the Sacred Cum.

My same sex experience started with my younger brother when we were teens.  Once I found out that he had a bigger cock (8 inches hard) than me (I was 7 inches hard).  I hounded him to let me suck him off, which I did several times.  I very much enjoyed servicing him, but since he is/was straight, he got a gf, and unfortunately for me, she took over sucking duties.  We didn't try fucking.  I wanted to take his cock, but he resisted.  I am sorry that he didn't want to breed me, but I am glad I got to have his cock and cum in my mouth.

A younger cousin and I got naked once and stroked each other.  I was ready to suck him, but we heard our moms coming down to the basement, so we stopped and got dressed.  Sadly, he and I did not have another opportunity to finish what we started.  What is really funny is I believe he is gay, but still in closet and totally hot, since he started going to the gym.  I came out years ago, and I wonder if he would have come out too, if I had sucked him off that day.  

Long before Eliot and I started chatting (roughly 6 moths ago), I admired him for his witty and honest comments.  Then, one day he sent me a message regarding the tattoo on my ass and how much he liked it. We subsequently exchanged messages about various issues and our views on being HIV+ and chasing.  He was (as many of you know) very unapologetic and honest, which I admired so much.

In late August/early September, family obligations took me away from BZ, and when I returned, Eliot's messages and comments had stopped.  I feared that his health issues had taken a turn for the worse.   He had confided to me that his health was failing, but he was facing it with his Brooklyn attitude.  Even though we only exchanged BZ messages, I developed a bond with him. and am forever grateful for his advice and guidance.  Rest in peace, Eliot.    

A fantastic story line and excellent writing!  One that has played repeatedly in my own fantasies.  Like Jamie, I , too, yearn for a poz, toxic top to dominate and breed me over and over until I convert.  Taking control of my destiny and marking me as "his" with his tainted DNA!  I suspect, but would love to know, if Jamie develops a desire to not only recharge Alec, but also poz neg guys in the same manner as Alec.

I saw the cherries moving as you did and thought it was quite appropriate for the lyrics in the song...💦🍆😉

1 hour ago, badubydo said:

Wooooooooow after hearing some of those songs. 

 

Now I need a dude to pump me full. 🙃

I had the same reaction...😉 🍆💦

New country music singer, Dixon Dallas (aka. Jake Hill), has released several gay themed songs, and they contain lyrics referring to bareback sex and cumming inside men.  I never thought a country singer would ever sing about gay sex, let alone gay bareback sex.  His songs include "Lookin Good," Fill Me Up," and "Keep Riding Me,"  and can be found for free on Youtube. Dixon is my new favorite country music  artist!  🤠🎵

This is definitely what I had in mind for these two at the end of chapter 1.  Keep it going!  It's a great story line!

Yes, keep the story going, please.  So many pozzibilities that come to mind.  Will Leon and Sam become a pozzing couple? Or just a pozzing duo for Jon's future conquests? Thanks for this last chapter!

On 3/1/2023 at 9:14 PM, atlfukbud said:

I think men are evolutionarily predisposed to cheat -- awesome when you can enjoy it and make it HOT for everyone!!

I agree with you that most men are "wired" to fuck as many "partners" as they can.  I believe it is a primal instinct to ensure that their DNA is passed on.