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Leroy puts the pieces of the poz "puzzle" together and confirms to Jake the hotel's purpose--a pozzing event for chasers and gifters. Predictably, Jake has a wave of mixed feelings, which @pozchaser21adeptedly conveys to the reader. This adds some real life to this fictional story, and it helps confirm the thoughts and feelings that many of us experience about becoming poz. I like the character development that @pozchaser21 does with side stories. Readers get a clearer picture of Leroy and his personality and motives. He clearly is obsessed with Mark. I hope we get to know why. I was a little disappointed that this chapter left Jake at the breakfast table alone. Does Jake's twitching hole determine his next move? I trust @pozchaser21has a plan for Jake in the next chapter(s), so I eagerly await for the next installment of this fantastic story.
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Wow! A wonderful chapter in which Jake suspects that many, if not all, of the loads he has been bred with are probably toxic. I had thought Jake would add things up in this mind to conclude the purpose of the event, but like in the real world unexpected small events happen that reveal major things about the much larger scenario. (Who would have guessed that Kayode's eagerness to know his top's status would trigger a series of events leading to Jake's revelation?) Now, the battle begins within Jake's mind. Will his fear of HIV or his need to be bred win out? I am betting on Jake's new-found love of having bare cocks up his ass...😉 But, not before, Jake goes from safe sex only (even thinking about chastity) to all out barebacking, poz cum slut and eventual gifter. Can't wait to find out what @pozchaser21has in store for Jake and the others!
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Loving the fact that these gifters have strains from different countries. (Fascinated with the concept of men's bodies being incubators for creating new and mutant HIV strains. Ones which probably are drug resistant.) The thought of having men from around the world and their toxic cocks taking turns breeding me with their potent DNA is my ultimate sexual dream/fantasy.
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Once again, this chapter "beamed" me into the room and I experienced what Jake did through two rounds with #12 and one with #4 (By the way, these are two of my lucky numbers. Maybe, they will be Jake's as well!). @pozchaser21does an excellent job of relating Jake's feeling and thoughts, and in doing so, he is telegraphing Jake's evolution as well. (We all know this evolution would come. We did not know how it would.) In an earlier comment, I stated that this story line as told by the author mirrors reality. This was an understatement. The way Jake's evolution towards being a total bareback (& poz) cum dump is so realistic that it is almost biographical for me. I am reminded of a phrase that some guy told me regarding chasers "You know you are a chaser when your need for poz cum overcomes your fear of it." Jake is well on his way of overcoming his fear of men breeding him. In fact, he wanted both #4 and #12 to cum in him! I look forward to see how @pozchaser21will take us as he finishes Jake's evolution and his stay at the hotel.
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This roulette game sounds fun and I would happily play. The question, "Did Jake get a poz load during the game?" remains unanswered due to the helper's unknown status (since the helper disclosed that he had never topped, we can reasonably assume that he is a bottom and a well-experienced one given the hotel's event, so putting together this info, it's a good chance that Jake received another poz load.), but we know that Jake enjoys cocks in his ass and has even thought that he could be a cumdump. Jake is slowly dismissing the standards he once held for sex. His body is telling him the pleasure is too much to disregard. (His fear of STIs is disappearing, and his want/need for pleasure and sexual satisfaction is growing.) What's next for Jake? Only time and the next chapter(s) know...Looking forward to it!
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I applaud your imagination as this chapter really drives into the environment that Jake and the others are in. With this information, the readers are transported into the whole scene. Other than some typos and similar word mix ups (I suspect many are from the use of a voice to text app. or that English is a secondary language of @pozchaser21.), the story is written well and keeps readers' attention from start to finish! I really like how little by little Jake is piecing together the purpose of this event is. Awaiting to see what the roulette games hold for Jake . It can only be something pozitive...😉
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A great "side" chapter that adds much context and connections to the main story. All of this contributes to the main plot and provides details for readers to fill in gaps in their mental images of the story line. Great work, @pozchaser21! My only suggestion is to keep the names of the guys in proper places in the text. (It's not a big deal, and I know when writing, the names of the characters can be mistyped.) I love the photo gallery you created! Your words gave me the proper and enough detail to create very similar images of each man to the photos. Thank you!
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Now, the clock has started for Mark's poz babies to find their way into Jake's blood stream. Will Mark's loads take or has Jake dodged Mark's strain? We do know that Jake is hooked on getting fucked (Cumming hands-free with the intensity as Jake did would hook anyone...😉) One clue to Mark's status was divulged, but not fully comprehended by Jake yet. Looking eagerly forward to the next chapter and learning who is next to fuck Jake. Kudos to the author for his excellent writing!
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The slow and detailed story line enhances the readers' experience of being transported to the scene and gives them a voyeuristic point of view (in a very good way). Such attention to detail makes reading the words all the more realistic and enjoyable for us readers. Looking forward to learning if Mark becomes Jake's first and his poz daddy or just takes Jake's virgin status away. Only time will tell....
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thx for the feedback to the story 😉
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You're very welcome! Your writing keeps me wanting more because it puts me in the scenes with the people of the story. Keep it going!
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Love this story line because it mirrors reality. Those outside of the poz/chasers scene are oblivious to the terms and norms of the sub-culture even those gay men in the wider LGBTQ community. Jake is not a dumb twink, so I am curious when he adds things up in his mind and realizes it's a pozzing vacation for him and the other bottoms. We already know that Jake wants to get fucked by "daddies." The primary question for the author to answer is how, when, and by whom does Jake get pozzed. Is it Jason or another daddy, or will Jake be a contender for the top 10 bottoms list? Looking forward to see where and how the author takes us readers as he tells Jake's story.
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Ending 2 is the one I prefer as it offers more chapters, if the author chooses. I can imagine Ross gets to 15 and grooms his new bf to be a gifter with the goal of both successfully gifting 30 chasers in total. Lots of pozzibities with this "ending!" Thanks for writing this story!
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Wishing BZ a very happy birthday! Truly a great website for those of us with kinky sexual desires/tastes. Thank you to the administrator(s) and moderators for their efforts/work to provide us with a safe and welcoming site where we can explore and express ourselves. Here's to many more years of BZ!
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This is a screenshot from a video that Carrot Top post to his IG account several years ago. It shows his penis hanging out from his running shorts. Happy to hear that he frequented places to let gay men suck him off. I hope he still does. If given the chance, I would suck him. off and swallow...😃
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An excellent story line! Here is a short outline of how I see an Asher series could be developed.. Asher has great potential. I think he is going through the euphoria of his first time and being desired by another man. I don't believe Asher has accepted fully the role Daddy wants for him (for now). Fully developing Asher's character by having him doubt his new cum dump role, but finally realizing that the deed (taking poz loads) is done and there's no turning back. Asher embraces his new role and experiences the fuck flu. Now that Asher is a fully-committed poz cum dump, Daddy uses Asher to "recruit" new college men for his friends, himself, and Asher to convert and fuck.
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