barebackrnb
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This roulette game sounds fun and I would happily play. The question, "Did Jake get a poz load during the game?" remains unanswered due to the helper's unknown status (since the helper disclosed that he had never topped, we can reasonably assume that he is a bottom and a well-experienced one given the hotel's event, so putting together this info, it's a good chance that Jake received another poz load.), but we know that Jake enjoys cocks in his ass and has even thought that he could be a cumdump. Jake is slowly dismissing the standards he once held for sex. His body is telling him the pleasure is too much to disregard. (His fear of STIs is disappearing, and his want/need for pleasure and sexual satisfaction is growing.) What's next for Jake? Only time and the next chapter(s) know...Looking forward to it!
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I applaud your imagination as this chapter really drives into the environment that Jake and the others are in. With this information, the readers are transported into the whole scene. Other than some typos and similar word mix ups (I suspect many are from the use of a voice to text app. or that English is a secondary language of @pozchaser21.), the story is written well and keeps readers' attention from start to finish! I really like how little by little Jake is piecing together the purpose of this event is. Awaiting to see what the roulette games hold for Jake . It can only be something pozitive...😉
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A great "side" chapter that adds much context and connections to the main story. All of this contributes to the main plot and provides details for readers to fill in gaps in their mental images of the story line. Great work, @pozchaser21! My only suggestion is to keep the names of the guys in proper places in the text. (It's not a big deal, and I know when writing, the names of the characters can be mistyped.) I love the photo gallery you created! Your words gave me the proper and enough detail to create very similar images of each man to the photos. Thank you!
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Now, the clock has started for Mark's poz babies to find their way into Jake's blood stream. Will Mark's loads take or has Jake dodged Mark's strain? We do know that Jake is hooked on getting fucked (Cumming hands-free with the intensity as Jake did would hook anyone...😉) One clue to Mark's status was divulged, but not fully comprehended by Jake yet. Looking eagerly forward to the next chapter and learning who is next to fuck Jake. Kudos to the author for his excellent writing!
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The slow and detailed story line enhances the readers' experience of being transported to the scene and gives them a voyeuristic point of view (in a very good way). Such attention to detail makes reading the words all the more realistic and enjoyable for us readers. Looking forward to learning if Mark becomes Jake's first and his poz daddy or just takes Jake's virgin status away. Only time will tell....
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thx for the feedback to the story 😉
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You're very welcome! Your writing keeps me wanting more because it puts me in the scenes with the people of the story. Keep it going!
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Love this story line because it mirrors reality. Those outside of the poz/chasers scene are oblivious to the terms and norms of the sub-culture even those gay men in the wider LGBTQ community. Jake is not a dumb twink, so I am curious when he adds things up in his mind and realizes it's a pozzing vacation for him and the other bottoms. We already know that Jake wants to get fucked by "daddies." The primary question for the author to answer is how, when, and by whom does Jake get pozzed. Is it Jason or another daddy, or will Jake be a contender for the top 10 bottoms list? Looking forward to see where and how the author takes us readers as he tells Jake's story.
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Ending 2 is the one I prefer as it offers more chapters, if the author chooses. I can imagine Ross gets to 15 and grooms his new bf to be a gifter with the goal of both successfully gifting 30 chasers in total. Lots of pozzibities with this "ending!" Thanks for writing this story!
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Wishing BZ a very happy birthday! Truly a great website for those of us with kinky sexual desires/tastes. Thank you to the administrator(s) and moderators for their efforts/work to provide us with a safe and welcoming site where we can explore and express ourselves. Here's to many more years of BZ!
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This is a screenshot from a video that Carrot Top post to his IG account several years ago. It shows his penis hanging out from his running shorts. Happy to hear that he frequented places to let gay men suck him off. I hope he still does. If given the chance, I would suck him. off and swallow...😃
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An excellent story line! Here is a short outline of how I see an Asher series could be developed.. Asher has great potential. I think he is going through the euphoria of his first time and being desired by another man. I don't believe Asher has accepted fully the role Daddy wants for him (for now). Fully developing Asher's character by having him doubt his new cum dump role, but finally realizing that the deed (taking poz loads) is done and there's no turning back. Asher embraces his new role and experiences the fuck flu. Now that Asher is a fully-committed poz cum dump, Daddy uses Asher to "recruit" new college men for his friends, himself, and Asher to convert and fuck.
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This story has all of the elements that I find so arousing. First, a semi-stealthing pozzing (I like it when both poz top and neg bottom believe the other man is on meds, but neither are.). Second, the neg guy experiences the fuck flu and the gifter gives the bottom guy more toxic cum. Finally, I don't know I find getting bred in a STI clinic so arousing, especially with staff. Thanks for this story and for getting me super turned on and wishing I was in it!
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Please keep this story going! I want to find out out how much of a piggy slut this twink will be? How many toxic loads will he take before converting? Will he become a gifter too?
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I agree with you on being fully aware of what is happening during bareback sex. For me, I don't need drugs to enhance my experience. Such experiences are very intense and highly enjoyable. Why would I use drugs to alter my true experience. I believe this is especially true when engaging in serodiscordant sex. I understand experiencing sex is very personalized, and each person must decide for themselves how they want to experience sex.
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