BoYGaSM

That was a nice story.. I enjoyed it.  Thank you for showing a glimpse Into your story.

FUCK FUCK FUCK…. That’s incredibly hot!

FUUUUUCK…. This is making me so hard!

HOLY HELL!!!  I’m friggin loving this story man.  I am hooked!

FUCK THATS HOT!!

GREAT LITTLE STORY!

Aaaah.. I think I’m done reading this one lol.  I have a pretty good imagination and the visual is not making my horny.  Safe to say this isn’t one of my “into’s”. 

“No one I went to high school would’ve guessed that shy little Adam would’ve gone away to college and in three months be shaking his booty at hotel staff on his way to turn a trick for money.”

This part made laugh, it was really cute!

LOL i couldn’t help but giggle reading this first part.  Love the first part already (huge smile on my face)!

HOLE-EEEE-SHIT!  That last paragraph….   WOOF!  Love where this is going!   As usual im so hooked on this read, AMAZING dude!

I meant to say this on day one of page one…. I AM A HUGE FAN!  I love the stories you have posted and now your art work is great at helping visualize the story.  Very talented dude!  Everyday when i check BZ I look forward to seeing if you updated your story with the next chapter, thank you for sharing your piggy hot content lol.

Just giving ya feedback that you may have never heard before, i certainly never reacted to a story in this way from the first piece so that was new.  And its nothing to do with how you write it, just felt like if more were give and not left off where it was, id have probably reacted better.  But I'm just one reader and this is all info you can or don't have do anything with.  Still going to come back later and read it from start again and the rest of the chapters.  Always interesting to see how people react and this was new for me…. Reaction shared! 😃

Aww noo.. im so sorry, not happy with this already.  Just brushed me the wrong way.  Ill come back to it when many chapters are completed so i can get a continuous feel for it.  So yeah, maybe it would have been a better introduction to start with maybe the first three chapters or two at least.  Just putting that one out and ending it like that didn't sit well.  
 

On a side note, thank you for taking the time to put your work up here for us to read, it is appreciated!

WOW this story is crazy hot!!

What a great friggin story!!   Once in a while I stumble upon these amazing pieces of literature that truly  capture my attention and really gets my imagination going, this is one of them!  I'm blown away by the talent the creativity, and the willingness to share it with people freely...  such selflessness and generosity that I felt I needed to commend and say,

"THANK YOU, I SINCERELY MEAN IT AND THOUGH I FEEL THE SAME FOR MOST EVERYONE WHO HAS SHARED THEIR STORIES, I FEEL ESPECIALLY GRATFUL I AM PRIVIED TO YOURS AND THOSE FEW OTHERS WHO ARE ON ANOTHER LEVEL!"

I'll end with this interesting discovery with regard to my behavior (or maybe lack of lol) while reading the stories that fall into the category of which, in my eyes, warranted the writing of this post.  I noticed that I rarely, if at all, stroke a long with these specific stories (unless of course the heated parts are so crazy like other stories here where it's the main body of the entire thing), I think it's because I'm pulled into something much bigger, like it's the wHOLE story that tells so much more (dare I say, like a novel). And I think that says something!  CLEARLY, as it seems to have caused me to randomly take action and ramble in this post about this story which was the tipping point of reading enough of these pieces of literature to just keeeeeeeeep typing lol.  ok enough....  I may also be kinda high as well at the moment  HAHA

Like what it did there with "wHOLE"?  Being an insatiable hungry bottom I just couldn't help myself LOL

-- Peace Out Girl Scout --

BoYGaSM

PRETTY HOT DUDE!

Part 2..... YES PLEASE!!

WOOF  this story keeps me rock hard throughout reading it...  LOVE IT!

Keep it comin 😃

Vanished?  I'm confused about the ending of that chapter lol

omfg this is so hot, please continue!!  Need to read the rest lol grrrrr

I’ve read this story somewhere before, maybe on this site… long time ago!

LOL Another amazing chapter and nothing but huge smiles on my face!  Awesome way to start my day!

Holy fuck that little story got me so boned up!  I wish there was a longer and deeper version, this is the kind of story i look for.  Thanks

MY GOODNESS…. It’s rare, so rare to be able to pull a person into your writings SO deeply to FEEEEEEL even a speck of what the reality/feeling really is like when attempting to get the the reader to understand what it’s like..  What Battles has lived, seen, done..  what so many of our brothers have unfortunately experienced!  You have to be one of the only writers to have ignited so much emotion with the word you chose and the way you laid them out and in such a small paragraph of this entire story…. Magnificently done!  Im overwhelmed!  And I feel so Lucky to have stumbled onto your talent and am “gifted” with the opportunity to be able to read your awesome masterpiece of work!  

Please keep it going!  >=)