catchdawabbit
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great story so far and don`t worry about too much detail the more the better ... just makes it more vivid
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On 12/23/2020 at 8:11 AM, storymix said:
You have a good idea. Regrettable: Part 4 - 8 boring like so many stories. You actually wanted more, but you had no real idea for Chem. I am amazed at how some people praise you as the best ever. Don't believe them. You can do a lot better. You came back to your idea late: 9.5 inches. The idea with the teacher is not over yet, you can make more of it. Let's see what else you can think of. One last suggestion is good.
Who died and made you the fucking NYT literary critic . Bunch of bullshit nonsense . It`s a great story as is as he`s choosing to tell it . Don`t like it read something else or have the balls to write your own stories .
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some people just don`t seem to be able to chill and let a guy tell a story his own way at his own pace ....... it`s a good start and am more than happy to let it spin out ...... makes it more suspenseful ........ when guys make an effort to write stories for us instead of criticism I think a little gratitude would be nice
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great job man ..... u r very good at telling this story ..... u got me hooked and wanting more ...... please keep it going
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you`ve absolutely blown my mind with this story ...... u have an awesome imagination and display serious writing skills in bringing the story so vividly to life ....... these are not personally familiar experiences for me yet u almost made me wish they were ..... incredible job man
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I absolutely love your stories and how you tell them man. Thks for sharing them.