Beastboy42

Mmm very nice 

like a story told largely from the tops point of view

I’d love to help if possible.

id be lieing if I said I’d not thought of ways the story would continue;)

Have to say I am seriously loving this story. The rampant armpit inhaling, the piss play, the foreskin heavy cocks with ripe cum baked in... only thing that could make it better would be more Verbal Poz play, but even so loving it!!

So ducking hot

now that he has converted I hope he starts to spread his strain to others 

At first I thought this was some homage to the famous "Five minutes to AIDS" 
but it feels very much like the full first part of the story is copied? 

Hoping this still may continue, need to see this boy embrace his destiny 

Hot, love the start. 

Not really sure about the language use.... if find “Asian boy” hotter to read than “chink boy” but like where this is going 

Was hoping for the almost 'romantic' quality of the story, and was a bit jarring when the kid gets knocked out and tied up. Love for a top to talk a bottom through the conversion experience, it shouldn't have to be forced. The said, still an AMAZING hot chapter and hope to see more 

Such a fucking hot story

always hoped for a part two where he converts and starts to spread his seed to others 

Nothing like having a doctor secretly working for the Brotherhood to help spread the virus

Oh I like where this is going

Sounds like the doctor may be joining the Brotherhood soon as well

Oh please let there be more!

he is so close to accepting his new destiny 

Spread the seed

spread the strain and make a new son

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 The boy's ass tightened, drinking the dark gift that began burning his innocent cunt.  As wave after wave of diseased seed flowed into the boy's guts, Eric felt him relax.  He'd felt it before, a man getting his first taste of poison cum, suddenly realizes the gift.  Eric's seed was doing its work, passing into the stud's veins, burning into his soul and converting him.  Eric thanked his Lord for the boy impaled on his cock as he continued to shoot streams of burning seed into him.  The boy was a man now, a brother; forever a servant, branded with the dark seed. Eric's work was done for the night.

This is and forever will be one of the single hottest conversion stories on the site ever.
That line above takes the act of Pozzing to an almost mystical, spiritual experience.

Something making a bond between the souls of two people. If only more people wrote like this, 

puts a new spin on getting "Fucked to Death"
I remember a similar themed story where, after getting fucked, the "Prey" was melted into more poison cum from the inside out that the top 'Drank' into his cock

On 6/1/2018 at 10:21 AM, drscorpio said:

Apologies to anyone who thinks it improves the story, but I am so tired of Vengeful, Sadistic Masters. It’s totally cool when you know that’s what the story is about, but this really good incest, coming-of-age story just suddenly took this weird turn. 

I agree as well

i was really really liking how this started, but as a top myself, I dislike seeing bottoms constantly being abused or treated like garbage 

Very very hot

wish it was being told by the tops POV instead . Hopefully the bottom converts soon and can start passing his seed to others

Very very hot

i love slow gently conversion stories like this! Just hope the Poz processes takes a bit longer before they both succumb to the infection 

I do hope this leads to them converting together. Sharing a single strain and becoming a part of the Poz Brotherhood 

oh man how does this story not have more responses?
only thing hotter then someone converting,

is TWO Holes converting together

love the relationship between the three guys. An older Poz top showing the way to the next generation

shame this story never continued.
A whole family devoted to converting others into members of The Brotherhood... 
fucking hot as hell, nutted more than once to this story. 

On 10/20/2017 at 8:38 PM, shinelover said:

Oh yeah, it keeps getting hotter. Thanks and keep it cumming!! 

Fuvk yeah!

just blew another nutt reading this story again. Seriously hope it get another chapter 

God I hope there is more

Re read the story and shot a fresh nutt.. fuck this is hot and keep hoping for more chapters now that he converted 

Fucking amazing!!! Didn’t know there were more chapters, already nutted reading the new ones!

hopng we get much more! Maybe next his conversion will set in and he can start spreading his poison to a new generation