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RawSubDad

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  1. 3 hours ago, Fradave1960 said:

    Well, you lost me at genital mutilation and blackmail! This started out as a decent story about "seducing" a closet bottom freshman, but has veered into the realm of ridiculousness.

    I see your point and I had forgotten about the initial storyline of 19 year old Todd being seduced with chems but I thought the rest was well done, even if it was far fetched and the Todd setup was wasted.

  2. I can’t be the only one thinking this but clearly I’ll be the first say it:  I love it so far but damn I hope future chapters aren’t this short. I’m just starting my stroke and you’re asking for ideas for another chapter?  Intended to be constructive criticism with just a little sauce. 

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