bearbandit Posted November 19, 2014 Author Report Posted November 19, 2014 Guys, thank you for all your comments on this: my next step is to edit it into something possibly novel-shaped, more likely "dirty book shaped" . If anyone has issues over continuity, flow or content, please let me know: next month I plan to start editing with a view to sending selected "beta readers" the edited version in a few months (I've got a house move coming up so I can't do the job as quickly as I'd like: it's more important to find adequate living space). Thank you for reading and (I hope) enjoying: your having a quick one off the wrist while reading gives me a hardon!
Guest Deviantlad Posted November 27, 2014 Report Posted November 27, 2014 Hey bearbandit, that was one of the best stories I have read on here and took me back a few years at the same time. Thanks.
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