bearbandit Posted November 19, 2014 Author Report Share Posted November 19, 2014 Guys, thank you for all your comments on this: my next step is to edit it into something possibly novel-shaped, more likely "dirty book shaped" . If anyone has issues over continuity, flow or content, please let me know: next month I plan to start editing with a view to sending selected "beta readers" the edited version in a few months (I've got a house move coming up so I can't do the job as quickly as I'd like: it's more important to find adequate living space). Thank you for reading and (I hope) enjoying: your having a quick one off the wrist while reading gives me a hardon! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Deviantlad Posted November 27, 2014 Report Share Posted November 27, 2014 Hey bearbandit, that was one of the best stories I have read on here and took me back a few years at the same time. Thanks. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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