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I am a procrastinator, but it did help me through an issue which allowed me to drop another load into the ass of the story. I cheated a little in that I bulletized the story line. seen as a whole, it looks a little cheap and demeaning. I have asked the moderators for their preference and opinion but also ask you - does the bulletized story line in the last section advertise me as the lazy slut that I am? Would you prefer paragraphed  text? Jus Askin. I adjusted my trip for less rain drenching on the Can Am, as I check out Club Ottawa, and I'll be so close, probably G.I. Joe in Montréal. Cheers!.

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Golly, I am about to leave for Canada, but my addiction to Breeding Zone makes it tough to pull my lips off of the nipple. I keep getting notifications about status, and I do sincerely appreciate it, but there is one label that will always apply and that is 'addicted slut'. In this instance, Breeding Zone. My Can Am Sea To SKY is comfortable and tuned. I have not yet perfected the fictional resonator mentioned in Sticky but it IS a passion of mine. If you can make it work, the patent is yours. I just want the BETA version so I can insure it is up to my exacting slut bossy bottom standards.

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15 hours ago, DevilDawg said:

I am a procrastinator, but it did help me through an issue which allowed me to drop another load into the ass of the story. I cheated a little in that I bulletized the story line. seen as a whole, it looks a little cheap and demeaning. I have asked the moderators for their preference and opinion but also ask you - does the bulletized story line in the last section advertise me as the lazy slut that I am? Would you prefer paragraphed  text? Jus Askin. I adjusted my trip for less rain drenching on the Can Am, as I check out Club Ottawa, and I'll be so close, probably G.I. Joe in Montréal. Cheers!.

Well @DevilDawg, I have to say that I found the bullet-pointed post just fine. It feels funny even TYPING that - what with 16 years of Catholic School and all the perfectionistic tendencies that tends to bring out in any writer, but no, I actually found the format somewhat refreshing! And bullet pointing turns out is much preferable to the little grammar and punctuation nuns in black and white habits that live in my brain than incorrect or sloppy handling of where to break for paragraphs, or even worse, no paragraphs at all!! 

Summing it up, I'd rather have your hoT story in any form than not have it at all - you just keep on keeping on with this story and any others you'd love to tell us!

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