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wer8472

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  1. Thanks for sharing some of your inspirations and thoughts behind the story and where you're wanting to take it. Already knowing and loving those other universes, it makes me even more excited for you guys to continue the story. And yes, perhaps looking at it as 2 stories with a similar basis rather than the idea of an "original" vs a "new version" is better. Though there are definitely similarities, you have taken it in your own direction. It is very much like 2 people being given the same initial prompt, but otherwise being allowed to take the story in whatever direction they want. Apologies if my phrasing wasn't the best there. Gonna go read this story again to see what sort of Easter eggs I might have missed. And also to get hot and bothered. 😏
  2. Very well done, gentlemen! There's a few stories on this forum I come back and read regularly, and I'm fairly certain this is going to end up being one of those. I especially enjoyed how much you leaned into the ideas of the virus being moldable and controllable in some ways. The intentional destruction or alteration of each convert's psyche ended up being a lot more of a turn on than I expected it to be. I know it's always been seen as a part of the process, whether in y'all's main story or in the original version by Puplucky, but it always felt like a side effect. Making it an option, a choice, added a side to the entire process that is amazingly captivating, and in some ways was the biggest turn on in the story to me. Having variations in the mutations is another great idea, as well. I feel like that could be something you could have a lot of fun with in the story, if you decide to carry it over to the main storyline. Could allow you to lean into some interesting body horror, or different ways to claim more converts. There's this idea that popped into my head, too, when I was reading the parts about the new converts feeding their untainted seed to the brothers to strengthen them and accelerate their conversion. Something about keeping un-mutated converts around to feed the brotherhood. Maybe broken mentally, or participating willingly, with the expectation that after they provide enough untainted seed, they would eventually be turned as well. Starts feeling kinda vampire-y the longer I stretch the analogy out, but still kinda hot. Or maybe somehow a different mutation effects the entire body of a convert but somehow doesn't affect his balls? I dunno, but the ideas are fun to play with. Regardless, I appreciate you sharing this story with us, and sparking so many fun ideas/fantasies for me in the process. Look forward to the next installment of the main story!
  3. This story is great! Have read it through a few times now, and man it is hot! I'd love for it to continue someday!
  4. I'd be lying if I said I didn't check back here pretty much every day, hoping for the next chapter to be posted. 😉
  5. Loving this story! Super curious about what's up with Robert. What is that seed doing to him? 😉
  6. Think maybe it's locked or linked from another website or something? This bums me out, I was so excited to see a new chapter of this story.
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