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  1. 6 hours ago, Chubbytransguy said:

    The more times I read this, the more I wish the biker hadn’t gone back 🤷‍♂️ Still hot, but I don’t feel as much sympathy for Micheal when he obviously wanted it so bad. 

    The other ending would have been quite brutal for Michael. He definitively didn't want to die. Although I had this in my mind at first, I chose another path for him.

    Maybe I should have left him there bleeding out of every hole possible - and leave it to your imagination, what could have happened next.
    Would he return home? What would he tell his mom?
    Would he recover from the blows and escape to another life? Even as a hustler or whore?
    Would he become a cum slut or would this event change his inner course.... maybe he would look for love instead for sex?
    Who knows....

    By the way 'snuff' was (and is) not an option on BZ. 

    And a little bit of romance.... can be nice too.

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  2. 8 minutes ago, ffWhole said:

    Well, I ended up traveling as a nomad for years on end, then having some sort of career, nomading, career, traveling for work, nomading again, etc, etc.
    Visiting a lot of saunas, and slowly adjusting and becoming more of a slut.

    That's nice.... 
    I can imagine being a slut in the 80's must have been a cool thing. It was all real.... 
    I also enjoy thinking back how young and innocent we were.
    Most stories I write are with these thoughts in the back of my mind.
    You can't fool today's twinks.... at least not the ones growing up in the city.... but the lads on the countryside....
    Oh but I don't want to open up this box - it would only lead me into temptation to write another story. Hehe.
    Times have changed.

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  3. 18 hours ago, ffWhole said:

    During the early eighties, just 21, I started traveling hard... backpacking, hitchhiking first around Australia. And I did get a lot of attention of gay guys...

    Wish I could go quickly go back to that time and with what I know now and with the experience and mindset I am in now, I would have probably turned into one extreme cumslut... and been taken advantage off by those guys.

    All the events in my further live would have turned out quite differently. 

    Bit sad for the wasted years. Now I can only reminisce on: 'what if...'

    I understand you.... but look at the bright side.... hitchhiking in Australia especially though the outback back then could have left you, after a nice hard fuck.... oh yeah... dead?!
    I remember so many stories about backpackers who met their destiny in Australia, while traveling through that great country. But not in a good way. 
     

  4. On 2/5/2025 at 11:37 AM, Chubbytransguy said:

    I’m not a druggie, but I would certainly take that gamble. Worst case scenario, I get paid to have my ass ripped apart; best case scenario, I get $20k and freedom to get fucked however I want!

    Did you just double the money? 

    Nice try.... 

    Although the story was never finished, I still see the dark path in front of me the twink would have wandered alongside with the two AIDS blokes. 

    In the end, he would have been left behind, wrecked and empty handed....

    ( 10 k for a fuck? As if we have money to waste... *smiles wickedly* )

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  5. 1 hour ago, FFun2BB said:

    @Scorpion - WELL DONE for the missing part of a very HOT story and your additional chapter is GREAT ... 

    and I am certain that all other agree , that we would love this story to continue !!!!

    Thank you mate,

    I hope @daddybear will forgive me, that I continued with his story without asking.
    It seemed abandoned and I loved it so much. I wouldn't do this anymore though, without the consent of the original writer that is.

    It has to do with respect of the work he had and the effort he made. 

    But I have to say.... writing this chapter gave me the initial energy to start writing other stories I had in mind. And I let all of you have a glimpse into my twisted mind.,...


     

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  6. 3 hours ago, Mysteryman10 said:

    I loved this set of stories, I'm very fem & a quiet type so I couldn't stop thinking about how the guy manhandled raped & pimped out the blind guy.I don't think I wanna get beaten like that but constantly fucked & filled up evenpissed in/on might be fun. I just gotta re read these stories as I can't stop thinking about them-great writing dude

    Beggars can't be choosers....
    You gotta take what's coming to you, even if it is a good beating.

    Just teasing.... thanks for reading my stuff. Many guys fantasize about being the twink who is getting manhandled and being abused. 

    There is a fine line between fantasy and reality. One side is, being safely in your cozy bed, reading my stories and wank on it. The other side is holding your swollen right eye, moaning 'ouch ouch ouch' while your ass getting reamed out, and your hole is getting even tighter.

    The reason could be my black leather belt strangling you slowly, while I look down at your body with an indifferent look, keeping up a nice and steady pace fucking your worthless cunt.


    ...just saying hypothetically....    😈

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  7. 14 hours ago, worldfamous said:

    Always wish we could check back in on these guys. It’s probably hotter not knowing but your twisted imagination is always a couple steps ahead.

    Hehe.... thanks @worldfamous

    I didn't actually think of returning back to those guys.... the stories were supposed to be short stories - to show the beginning of their troubled way, inflicted by Scorpion. He doesn't care what happens next to those guys. He uses them and leaves them behind for others to have their ways with the lads.

    He is just looking for his next fresh fuck hole. It would be a nice idea though, to drift by... witnessing a tragic ending, or an ongoing abuse?

    I had so many other stories in my head.... the next one was about two brothers and their experience of loving each other in a way, they had never imagined before (and never wanted to try it out).  

    It was such fun to see them struggle, who should be on top and who should be on the receiving end.....

    In the end they got both got royally fucked by Scorpion.
    But at least... they returned home.

    That's an Happy Ending.... right?
     

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  8. 11 hours ago, Anone said:

    I have been so turned on by your dark and hot stories @ Scorpion. You have been around for quite sometime but you are always so detailed and perverted in the way you build your chapters. Bring it and do more when you can

    Thank you @Anone

    I am from Germany as you may know.... actually my parents came from the former Yugoslavija.
    So English is not my native tongue. 
    I think part of my 'quality' was, that I did not try to pick up phrases (english idioms) I did not know, or trying to look for a precise word... instead I was describing the whole scenery. So instead of saying it with one sentence I used a whole chapter to come to the point. This helped of course a bit to build up the tension and dive into the story.... 
    It is a nice compliment to me and my work, that you actually enjoyed that kind of writing. 
    Even after all these years it is a pleasure to know, that I am not forgotten.

    I do remember the first time I joined the old chat, after releasing my first story chapters and people whispered to me and told me how much they enjoyed my 'dark style' and that they would be a fan of my work. 

    Nice memories of the past.

     

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  9. On 9/11/2024 at 10:54 AM, Rod21 said:

    I'm filthy but the blind man's story is by far my favorite

    It was mean indeed.... loved writing it.
    The Hitchhiker stories were appealing to me, because it had one protagonist, but different story lines, that were not connected to each other. And they were sort of short stories. 
    It was a pleasure to wank over those poor unfortunate twinks....

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  10. If you'd be one of my 'Twink Chars' in my stories, I would advise these three things:

    1. It is best to go along with a stranger. You don't have to perform your best. Just keep focus on satisfying his cock and everything will be fine.
    2. always be positive about, that nothing negative will happen
    3. be trusting - if you are really scared of a disease, offer the Top bareback sex but only if he is negative. Believe what he tells you. I am sure it will be the truth. Why should he lie anyway?

    But if you would be my friend... I'd tell you...

    You want to fuck the first time.... Try to find a nice bloke you can fall in love with and even if it is just for a 'gay summer' and then enjoy sex the way you want to experience it - and always think twice before riding raw.

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  11. 13 hours ago, Smudger said:

    I wish there were more of these incredible stories from @Scorpion 

     

    I've never wanted to go hitch-hiking more than I do right now 😈

    Thanks Smudger. 
    I was very fond of this series, although it was never highly regarded by my fans.
    It is good to know, that you enjoyed them. 
    I think I had most fun writing the one with the future lot lizzard.... but also the one with the blind guy was quite.... hot also.
    You've got an excellent ass - cunt by the way..... really nice....

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