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What are the AI cues that give it away? Where would a natural story be better? For example, when the guy takes his first hit of meth ever, it says: " The smoke was harsh and acrid, unlike any marijuana he’d ever encountered. It hit him instantly, a rush of euphoria that made his head spin and his heart hammer in his chest." Nice writing, but using words that are 10-dollar words. But more importantly, it's wrong! The smoke is NOT harsh and acrid. Meth smoke has almost no flavor at all. Meth smoke is not smoke at all, but a vapor. But what flavor it does have is very distinctive, you won't forget it. Also the effect does NOT hit you instantly. It takes a few hits, not many but not instantly. And it doesn't make your head spin. Just the opposite, it makes everything very clear. It gives you endless energy! And it makes you tingle all over! Especially in your butt! These are small differences, but telltale AI differences that leave the reader trying and failing to remember/imagine his own first time. That should be the goal of any story, to trigger the reader to relate in such a way as to evoke memories of his own.
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I love this story!
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LOVE this story!!
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love this story! I first read "Soccer Boy's Screen Test", which is part two of the series. I should have read "Soccer Boy's Spiral" first. Spiral is Part One. You have to read Spiral first!
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Stealthed In The Toilets At Marble Arch
fistmebaby replied to Tommy Tank's topic in General Bareback Sex Stories
Yeah agreed, when this happened to me, when I started to take loads little by little, I never thought much about it, if a guy used a condom fine, if he didn't even better. But I never considered myself a bug-chaser since that was never my idea. But I do remember the thrill I got every time I was bred. It was like something totally forbidden [banned word] dangerous, and it was like I was HIV negative just thumbing my nose at the danger so to speak. Like many have said, once I started doing that, that was all I wanted to do, it was how I got off, regular sex was insufficient, I needed my thrill. So eventually I was converted. I vaguely remember chit chat around me that I later recognized as guys trying to convert me: guys asking me if I wanted their babies, if they could use a tooth brush on my ass, all that stuff, so that's how it happened. I thought I was unique, so I'm glad to know I wasn't, that others had the same experience I did. -
I totally remember my first time in a sling. I was at Cuffs Bar in LA back in the 90's, and a friend and I decided we would cross the street over to the sex club across the street. We get there and start exploring the rooms. He showed me the room with the sling and I was giddy with curiosity, he said "try sitting in it", so I got in the sling fully clothed and the magic started to happen, I was like a kid playing in a swing, only more fun. So one thing led to another, and gradually I lost all my clothes and my friend started fucking me, and I fell in love with the sling, and that room became my favorite room in the sex club. From then on I knew every sling in LA! That first time was at the Extreeme club on Hyperion.
