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Hot and fun story!
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Great and intriguing start to this story.
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Who will be patient 5? Vincent or Isaiah?
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Yet another fantastic installment of this great story. Loved the juxtaposition of one man’s journey to convert but restrained due to fear but deep down not denying his desire waiting for the moment and the man to convert him while we see another man holding his dark desire to convert repressed due to judgement holding him back from his destiny. Then when the situation arises where the inevitable will happen he succumbs to that desire and doesn’t flee. Fantastic writing!
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Fantastic chapter!
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Dark temptation! Great start!
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Anymore chapters coming soon @chunkychains? I’m eagerly hoping and waiting.
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Another amazing chapter! More please! I like where I think you’re going with this. It’ll be hot to see you take us on this journey through the decades showing us the stages of AIDS and its acceptance in the gay community. Seeing the fear of it now knowing that in the present there are many seeking it out and embracing it.
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Good story!
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Awesome story! Great start! I’m eagerly awaiting further chapters to this hard-on producing tale. Please don’t make us wait to long. 😈
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This is such a hot story!
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Fantastic story!
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This is simply a wonderful piece of hot superhero storytelling. Fantastic! Would love to see this depicted in comic book form someday.
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Fuck! This is really hot!
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Wow! This has to continue.
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Hot story! I do hope further chapters are coming?
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Excellent start!
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I’m very pleased you’re back with more to tell in this great story.
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Such a scorching hot story!
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Very captivating start!
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That was a fantastic story! I love your writing.
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A really hot story! Thanks man for wanking material!
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5 hours ago, Heir2012 said:
I've hit some MAJOR writer's block as of late. Originally, Kansas man was meant to be a paragraph long, but I found myself excited to ruin his life in depth. I feel like I keep getting more and more explicit in what men like Hunter are doing, showing how "evil" he really is. I just don't want to go too far and get the story blocked or something.
So far the story is progressing nicely. I sense no writers block other than perhaps the long pauses between chapters. But I’m patient. I can wait. It’s worth it. 😈
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I love this story man. I hope your next chapter comes along much sooner. It’s hard waiting for the next installment.
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Oink! Oink! Such a hot piggy tale! I loved it.