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40 minutes ago, kspozcum said:

Voting is actually already closed… as stated before, there will be three stories this round (a,b,and c). Unfortunately I was in a car accident this morning and will be delayed on writing and posting until Monday.

Wow!  I hope you are ok.

Great start to your story!  I like your style and how you portray the innocence of your lead character about events that will soon make him a real man and change him forever.

Phenomenal chapter!  I love how Reid was brought to the realization that his fate is sealed to where he can’t go back.  He didn’t freak out or resist the pleasure or intimacy given to him by G when reality hit him hard at the same moment.  Beautifully written!

Ugh!  Making us wait here is torture, but in a good way.  Of course, I hope we don’t have to wait too long.

Very interesting!  I love reading and hearing about real life stories just as much as fictional tales.  Maybe more so actually!

Welcome back!  Love this story and your new chapter is just as piggy as the previous ones.  It’s like there never was a gap.

Where can I find this clinic?

5 minutes ago, PupLucky said:

just to clear up time line issue, I did state in part 11 that Gray had returned home around dawn on the night he and his team entered the Gentech building and that 14 hours passed, night had fallen again allowing the creatures to escape under cover of darkness to hunt him.

I will be returning to Gray and his predicament, but I'm also trying to show the spread of the infection though the city, working to find the balance between meaty story but also giving the meaty dirty sex people log in here for.

This is something I do as a way to wind down from work stress so, I will try to keep releasing a new update each Tuesday for people enjoying it and I just want to say thanks for all he comments I do take them all on board 

wishing you all a positive day 😉

That’s right.  Thanks for clarifying that we are into the second night of the escape.

I love your story and look forward to each new chapter you post here.

Hmmm… again I’m not getting any inconsistent monster abilities, but I get your point on the Connor timeline though as rushed as it may be it still works in the timeline of one night.

As for Gray, I think of him as the protagonist too, and perhaps @PupLucky has a twist or two in store for us thinking one outcome will befall him when in the end we’ll be surprised by a different one.  We’ll just have to let @PupLucky tell us that in his own way.

I love the story and hope it goes into a lot more “meaty” issues too, but I’ll gladly take as many piggy sex scenes he wants to throw in as well.  I’m not gonna complain about that.  😉😀

Chapters 14 and 15 may have been fillers in story telling but I loved them because in the long wait we had for new chapters, I had several fantasy scenes play out in my head one of which was a jogging scene.  So when @PupLucky gave me that, I was thrilled and thinking we were clearly on the same wavelength.  I would have found it ironic and beyond hilarious had the author had the 23 year old stud jogger been listening to Toxic by Brittany Spears when assaulted from behind and impregnated by the Grey.

31 minutes ago, leatherpunk16 said:

Did you jump ahead a day in the story and then go back? The timeline has had us believe this was all occurring in the space of a single night. It's good that it's finally going somewhere, but the pacing is inconsistent. The Grey Ones are going to lose their prey completely if they keep stopping to spread their corruption. 

I suggest you read the previous chapters again.  I perceive no inconsistent pacing.  To me, it is all clearly still the first night of the creatures escape from the bio-lab.  The setup we’ve been given about these creatures abilities makes it easy for them to spread their seed while pursuing Gray.  The author has mentioned the pheromone trail they can detect even while very faint.  I’m very confident that Gray will soon be a Grey.

I love a positive true romance.

Excellent new chapter!  I like where you are advancing this story and introducing for us the culprits responsible for creating this new bio weapon.  At least, that’s what it appears like to me.

Loving the start of this one!

I just can’t get enough of this fantastic story.

So damn hot!

13 hours ago, leatherpunk16 said:

I guess that's ONE way to lose weight! 

Hahahaha!  I was thinking the same thing.  It’s certainly a quick and efficient way to lose weight.  I much prefer this method than the traditional ways.

Welcome back @PupLucky!  Fantastic chapter continuing one of the best stories posted here.

14 hours ago, PupLucky said:

Sorry guys life caught up with me been a wild few years, but have been working on this for a while and next instalment should be out Tuesday 

Fantastic news @PupLucky!  So glad new installments are on the way.  And life does get in the way time to time, so you don’t need to apologize for that.

Fantastic next chapter!  Worth the wait.  I’m loving this twisted story.  Can’t wait for Joey’s new orientation camp.

Awesome!  I love this story.  Keep going!  These guys got to complete the mission of making their house another poz den.  Another generation continuing the tradition and need that Omar’s house is providing.

Well, clearly you can’t stop here.  Majority teaser with this intro.

Excellent poz love story!

Fantastic story!  Can’t wait for Aaron to entice and convince his house mates to join the club and make their group the next generation carrying on the tradition of Omar, Harry and Sid.

Interesting start here!

Good young piggy is being born!