Tempusfuget Posted May 26, 2024 Report Posted May 26, 2024 Wow! I stumbled onto this story about a week ago and have quite enjoyed it so far. Was horrified by the Weeble rape at firat but then took the time to appreciate his grief and the just revenge of his brothers to the gentle bantering of Bravo and Charlie. I particularly enjoyed Lamont on his 4 day leave and wouldn't mind seeing more interaction between him and Assmunch. Would also like to hear more from the lesser characters like Alaska or Olympic. Take your time on additions to the story but please try not to leave us hanging as some stories have gone with no ending. 1 Quote
Assmunch Posted May 27, 2024 Author Report Posted May 27, 2024 20 hours ago, Tempusfuget said: Wow! I stumbled onto this story about a week ago and have quite enjoyed it so far. Was horrified by the Weeble rape at firat but then took the time to appreciate his grief and the just revenge of his brothers to the gentle bantering of Bravo and Charlie. I particularly enjoyed Lamont on his 4 day leave and wouldn't mind seeing more interaction between him and Assmunch. Would also like to hear more from the lesser characters like Alaska or Olympic. Take your time on additions to the story but please try not to leave us hanging as some stories have gone with no ending. Hey man, thanks! Weeble’s rape was a pivotal moment for him where he was forced to choose between seeing himself as other men’s toy with no control or a man who decides for himself whether the comfort he gets from other men using him defines who he is as a man. He could have let it break him. And before he joined the Bravos, it would have. Lamont is a dirty whore, and I really love that about him. LOL. He’s trying to battle his inner nature by creating ‘rules’ to self limit his sexual activities. I’m sure we’ve all gone through that stage. It’s funny, but he thinks he’s on the same level as Assmunch in terms of leadership but he’s nowhere close. They will have a few more interactions, but after the confrontation during Assmunch’s torture, Assmunch has lost a lot of respect for him. The other Bravos like Alaska and Olympic will get their moments too, eventually. What still surprises even me is that we’ve only seen three months of actual story time… Late November is when it started, and it’s only February of the following year. It seems like so much has happened but it’s all been just a small amount of time for these men. Infantry doesn’t slow down, it’s a never ending cycle of training, class, and activity. They don’t have a lot of opportunity to satisfy their sexual urges so getting creative is a challenge. I’ve had more than a few comments about the lack of sex in some chapters… but hey… the buildup and frustration makes the actual sex even hotter when it does happen, at least the way I see it. Constant fucking, everyone getting their dicks out everywhere gets kinda boring after a while. It’s way more fun and exciting if you’re left to wonder when it will happen and how they’re going to get their rocks off without exposing what they’re doing. Anyway, I’m glad you have enjoyed it so far. 1 1 Quote
BoYGaSM Posted June 21 Report Posted June 21 Hey ASSMUNCH…. Why haven’t you added your most recent chapter here? Nifty has one that was added back in March. I always look forward to the next chapter, i was excited to read this new one. As usual, another great read!! Quote
SlampaBay Posted 3 hours ago Report Posted 3 hours ago "Finally Potter spoke. “Zeus…Gabriel… you can’t come. You think you want to kill these guys, but when the moment comes it’s not anything like what you think. Your first kill changes you, and there’s a piece of you that dies too. Some guys think it doesn’t matter and can keep going always looking forward, never back so they don’t have to think about what’s gone inside themselves. I don’t think you can lie to yourself like that, not in the way it would take to make it not matter. Other guys, like Battles and I, we accept the brutal nature of killing, of ending a life because as much as we don’t like it, it’s sometimes necessary. There are some who find they enjoy it too much, and they change too and who they were before never comes back. But all of us…we know we’re killers. This is not some act of justice, or vengeance or self defense, or following orders. It’s cold blooded murder. I can wake up tomorrow and run, eat breakfast, focus on the instructors and the Jumpmaster, come back and sleep just fine. You won’t. Two more deaths for me won’t matter. No matter which way it goes for you, you will dwell on it, relive it, see it again and again on repeat in your head. You wonder how many times you have to watch him die before he stays dead and goes away. Before the moment you’re certain. When the moment comes you’re either high on adrenaline or terrified. Some guys, their hands shake so bad they can’t pull the trigger. After that round leaves the barrel the doubts begin to sing. They sing loud, and they don’t stop. The image of their body going suddenly lifeless and dropping to the ground stays with you for days after, sometimes weeks. And this won’t be an enemy bent on killing you first. This will be two American soldiers, subdued and begging for their lives. You will have enough opportunities to kill if you see combat. I hope you don’t. No one knows who they’re going to be when they come out the other side. This is not for you, not this time, not this way. You aren’t ready.” This is some the most powerful, seeringly honest, direct and beautiful writing I've ever read anywhere. Quote
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