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I assume they went to the baths for a reason…. So far all of this could have been done at home 

hopefully they will open the door… and all three of them will be gangbanged with anonymous cock

oh … and yes …. Very hot to have the son seduce the father 

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Thanks so much @versmetropig. I value your opinion. I do think the algorithms are getting better very quickly. I don’t feel I can take much credit for the story. I started this without any advance planning. Just tried on the spur of the moment to give it a try. From conceptualization to finishing the fourth chapter took about 4 hours after a sleepless night. Then, after sleeping a while and watching figure skating (yes, I’m that guy), I threw together a prompt for chapter 5. I haven’t given the story much more thought today, but I would like to try something a bit fresh. Maybe fresh will have to wait for another story. But I’ll finish this one first. It would be ideal to come up with a strong, somewhat self-propelling plot. The story idea I’ve been most taken with lately is The Poz Hotel. What a remarkable concept!

Anyway, all ideas are welcome. And trust me, there’s not enough of my work in this story to react to any criticism as anything other than valid. No feelings will be hurt!

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15 minutes ago, onlyraw said:

hopefully they will open the door… and all three of them will be gangbanged with anonymous cock

That’s certainly where I thought this would go. I’ll try to figure it out tomorrow. 

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1 hour ago, seattlebbbtm said:

The coach angle turns me on

Oh, me too. My top fantasies are family fun, bathhouses, and coaches. My dad was a coach. And Coach Simmons was the ultra-hot basketball at my high school. My other fantasy, the PNP, is something I haven’t yet tried. 

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I like where @Versmetropig   is going with this .... but would be awesome if the day who so far has been left out of the fun ... were given same treatment as the son got .... at the bathhouse ,   maybe plus a bit more plus the back story of hot times that boy had getting poz.... and love this story.  Thank you for writing   @Pozzible ...     cant wait to see how this turns out.

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