negchaserlooking

great

Holy fuck that was a lot to take in from those two chapters. A thrupple now? Can't wait for Uncle Tommy's words of wisdom and see how much further you take this

Fuck. I hope you continue. And just your first try at fiction? Loved it.

1 hour ago, MackyJay said:

To my fans:   Sorry I haven't added more to my stories in so long.  Had planned on starting to write more again quite some time ago, but seems like every time I get ready something crazy comes up and my time just disappears.  UGH!   I do have plans to add more to this and a few other stories of mine, it's just been complete hell around here ( so bad that it's now been well over a year since the last time I got fucked and WOW, do I need to be bred and hopefully not very much longer).  Please stay tuned and I am really hoping to get back into the swing of things soon.      Thank you all for your very kind words.

@MackyJayI am sure you will get around to it when you are able.  

Super fucking hot. Please continue

WTF?  The intrigue!

hot

Just read Part 1. Good start setting the scene. Got my interest piqued. 

Simple really - didn't like the feel of a condom. Although I knew the risk in being fucked raw, that was negated by the feeling of a cum load being deposited up my pussy.

51 minutes ago, daddybear54 said:

@negchaserlooking  still much more to come!

Excellent news

That was awesome. Are you going to continue or leave it there @daddybear54?

Wow that is some consequence. I gather "fin" is the end to this tale of yours @bbbbob??

Enjoyable? That more than enjoyable. Was bloody great. Like the way you are including some background on the characters, fleshing them out. So looking forward to the next part.

Fuck, that was a totally hot part 2. Not much protest from Cody though 🤣. Like a duck to water.

Late or early, any new chapter on this excellent story is worth waiting for.

Fuck

Remember reading this for the first time awhile ago and it was so hot. Would have been nice to see it continue for a bit but it is a pretty good self contained story nevertheless @bbpissslut

7 hours ago, Heir2012 said:

The next chapter I was going to post was continuing on as Will comes back to Dominic, but an idea hit me which I'm going to go with instead. I'm writing a side chapter for the next chapter in which we will go back to see the first time Dominic saw Will at the gym. It's from Dominic's perspective, giving a bit of insight into everything leading up to him pozzing Will's hole. I'm still writing it, so it'll be a few days before it's posted. Then, I'll post the chapter continuing the story. 

I've also considered writing a prequel story about Dominic and how he was pozzed. Not sure if I'll do it, but it's a possibility. 

I've still got plenty of new characters to bring to you first. Glad to know so many of you either want to fuck Will or be fucked by Dominic.

Love the new ideas @Heir2012

Can't wait to see how you embellish this story around Logan's adventures and conquests. Epic story telling @ComingUpRoses. Thank you

Super fucking hot, thanks. Remember fucking around with my brother on occasions but it was never like that.

Fuck this is such a hot story. Love it

Part 2 sounds like a good thing to me. Hopefully soon.

Well I suppose this story could end there with his positive result but I hope you continue @Talurim

Fuck that was different and soooo hot. Can't wait for Logan's journey to begin.

Wow