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Excellent the way you brought Tommy's brother into the story.

21 minutes ago, Scanbu said:

It's something the family didn't talk about because it hurt to much so this is the first mention. All will be explained in the next chapter

Aah okay and thank you. Look forward to this new character.

Whoa, did you mention a dead brother before? I will have to go back and reread the early chapters - good excuse

Loving it, of course.

@PozTalkAuthor. All good things come to those that wait . I am pozitive we can all hang in there until you find the time to carry on.

Loving these little side stories ☣️

Nice segue into Dale's story

Sorry @Oracle1100. Did David  take Jesse back?? Last line. Cheers

I am not a writer/story teller and never will be so I come on here to get my daily fix like everybody else. I know it takes a lot of effort and imagination to write these stories and for those authors who write multiple chapters, you have my admiration because the pressure to continually create and add to your "baby" must be immense until you reach "the end".  I chat to one such author who has had to take a break because of writers block. But the follow up comments continue relentlessly. There is a saying -"patience is a virtue" - so have some patience and lay off, He will return when good and ready.   

As others have already said, it gets down to personal taste. I see lots of stories which do not appeal so I just move on. Why bother putting negative comments on someone's creation just because you do not like the subject matter? Some comments can be downright nasty. 

So you armchair critics and keyboard warriors, get off your high horse and how about offering the authors some encouragement and praise instead of vile comments. If you can't do that, move the fuck on. This site seems to have lost a lot of great writers, some because of "rules" but I imagine a lot due to the fuckwit negativity as well.

There that is my 2 cents worth as well, probably gone off on my usual tangent as I can do. Be kind people.  

Awesome story as always, thank you

So is or isn't Preston ☣️

Of course we are enjoying your story telling. Please it up. But I did think that you might have had ulterior motives lined up for Dale 😁

Nice beach - In Oz?

Hahaha so Angel turns out to be a little slut on the prowl too, Love it. And Tony's gift would be the icing on the cake for him not that he knows it just yet !

Love them, please continue

Hot, another new story. Thank you

Wow, I certainly never expected an ending like that. Sad but beautiful. Well done and thank you @Scanbu. I look forward to more stories/spin offs from you

A story on Tony's adventures would be awesome, both pre and post Mike's possible conversion of him

Fuck I just love the way you write your story. Reminds me of another author on this site. The way you set the characters, their strengths and compassions, the detail,  the love story, the sex, the pozzings. So please continue as far as you can take it because I know it will have to end eventually. But in the meantime fucking amazing.

Holy fuck @Scanbu.

Fuck yeah

I too, would really like to see Beth get her comeuppance for the way she treated Andy but can't really see that happening unfortunately.  UNLESS Andy and Dave were somehow able to "seduce and poz" the ex now current boyfriend Phil. 😁😁☣️

Wow 6 years old @losolent and still as hot as fuck 

Hot stuff and thank you @ijoey

Fuck, that was a turn up.