Belfast-Bottom Posted April 19, 2014 Report Posted April 19, 2014 EXTREMELY well written story! Masterful manipulation of the pacing and sexual tension! I guess you must write professionally? I can't wait for the next chapter!
selnsf Posted April 20, 2014 Report Posted April 20, 2014 Well HOT. You got my ass twitchin and my dick hardening. Nice job. 1
assTronomical Posted April 21, 2014 Report Posted April 21, 2014 Very well written! Fucking hot erotic and sensual!
pozpopperpig Posted April 21, 2014 Report Posted April 21, 2014 Fucking HOT! Need to live next door to these TOXIC Studs!
PhiDeltStyle Posted April 22, 2014 Report Posted April 22, 2014 Fucking hot wish I had them for neighbors
pghpigbtm Posted April 22, 2014 Report Posted April 22, 2014 beautiful - absofuckinglutely beautiful. blew a huge load. bring on chapter 3 and Tristan.
Guest Gigicxuogphof Posted April 24, 2014 Report Posted April 24, 2014 Wow can't wait for the next installment.
pozcubsf Posted April 28, 2014 Report Posted April 28, 2014 Love this story. Can't wait for the slamming to start
SmoothguyLA Posted May 1, 2014 Report Posted May 1, 2014 Why didn't I have neighbors like you when I was 18, hell make that 13. Beautifully written, by the way.
rawrawraw76 Posted May 1, 2014 Author Report Posted May 1, 2014 Thanks, guys! Glad you're liking it. I'm working on the next chapter -- hope to have it up this weekend. In the meantime, here are a few pictures I'm using as inspiration for various characters... DALTON TOM (the narrator) JESSE (Dalton's pozzed-up buddy from school) TRISTAN (the dealer) WILL, Tristan's latest in-house chemwhore, tied up and slammed up and pimped out for whatever cock will pay for the privilege of breeding him 10 18 1
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