Teacher Gangbang

[munchy]

i wake up on top of mr.v i to the side of him.

mr.v: good morning, i had fun with you at school, time to turn you into a cumdump. we kiss with tongue. Mr.v get out of bed to get his phone.

mr.v stay in bed im going to call some guys for the gangbang. i wait in bed ....

mr.v: sweety are you still nude?

me: yes im still nude. i see mr.m and officer b. Hi they both said. they both got naked and mr. b is first to fuck me mr.m puts his cock in my mouth and they fuck my mouth and butt. mr.b fucks faster and faster and mr.m fucks my mouth. mr.v jacks off watching us then mr.m cums in my mouth mr.v cums next in my mouth. mmmm that was yummy i said. mr.v and mr.m smile and kiss me. mr.b cums in my butt. then mr.m fucks me. Mr.m fucks me hard and mr.b puts his cock in my mouth and i slurp up the rest of his cum. Mr.m cums in my butt and i slurp his cock too. Mr.v fucks me last i the feel cum sliding out of me. mr.v cums in my mouth. This was a very fun time for us. they put me to sleep.

mr.b: can i take the boy with me?

mr.v: yes you can take him with you. what do you think officer b is going to do with me?

[seaguy]

Seems like you are missing the first part of the story on how they met and then having similar names like Mr. A, B C makes it harder to follow who is who at least for me that is.    It seems like you were trying to write this in conversational format but then wrote it in story format.  

 

Just thought I would leave this critique.