socalboi88 Posted August 20, 2017 Author Report Posted August 20, 2017 (edited) I think here might be a good place to leave the story, with everyone getting a happy ending:) Edited August 20, 2017 by socalboi88
NLbear Posted August 20, 2017 Report Posted August 20, 2017 I would still want to know who the married stranger and the anon roommate are!
seasqrd Posted August 20, 2017 Report Posted August 20, 2017 Hell yes, I'm ying to know what happens next!
barekinkfun Posted August 21, 2017 Report Posted August 21, 2017 story gets better and better. i'm betting simon and the boyfriend todd know each other ;-) lucky cheatin' boyfriend. always wanted to get fucked blindfolded and not know who it was.
BrisFuck Posted August 21, 2017 Report Posted August 21, 2017 Please don't leave us at such a critical point in the plot !
socalboi88 Posted August 22, 2017 Author Report Posted August 22, 2017 Wow I can't believe so many people like my stories! And that you care about the plot and the characters and stuff. That's really incredible:) They're fun to write. I wonder what my neighbors would think if they knew I was putting them in my stories and people were jacking off to them, haha. The real-life "Simon" walks past my window every day, maybe I'll run into him someday:) I don't think I'll keep writing, though. Someone keeps changing around everything I write without asking me first, which is frustrating. And a lot of times they're making mistakes, which is completely ridiculous. Who edits the editors? Sigh. On the plus side, if I leave it here, everyone gets a happy ending (unless my editor decided to change that, too), even though of course every one of these bastards is guilty as sin:) 2
NLbear Posted August 22, 2017 Report Posted August 22, 2017 Only moderators can edit your stories and they only sometimes make minor changes like spelling or grammatical errors. At least that's what I read. Please write one final chapter that ties all loose ends? Like who are the strangers that fucked him, what happened to his relationship with his bf? Etc.
socalboi88 Posted August 23, 2017 Author Report Posted August 23, 2017 Wow I am totally flattered and blushing right now:) Okay hopefully you're cool with PDFs because I have many more stories I want to write. I'll try to get the next chapter up in the next day or two. It involves Simon pushing the main character's limits even further into the taboo, making him do things he never thought he'd do, with people he never thought he'd do them with...and Simon possibly starting to have his twisted influence on the not-so-innocent boyfriend Todd, too. I'm looking forward to writing it, haha. Oh and I will eventually write about who the married stranger is, that'll be a fun one. And maybe the mysterious roommate, too. Anyway, here are the first four chapters as I originally wrote them, and I'll get started on chapter five:) My Twisted Neighbor Lets Me Crash at His Place.pdf 1 5
socalboi88 Posted August 26, 2017 Author Report Posted August 26, 2017 Okay here are chapters 5 and 6, enjoy:) My Twisted Neighbor 5.pdf My Twisted Neighbor 6.pdf 7 8
BrisFuck Posted August 26, 2017 Report Posted August 26, 2017 Thanks for continuing to add to your story ! 1
Fistcumslut Posted August 26, 2017 Report Posted August 26, 2017 12 hours ago, socalboi88 said: Okay here are chapters 5 and 6, enjoy:) Thanks for your contribute, you know how is frustrating to read a story interrupted without a end. But since you have found a way (via pdf) to deliver your original versions to your readers why you aren't so kind to post a copy here, no matter what the moderators will do, so you will grant to all members to easily read here your story and even compare both version...
bjbottom Posted August 27, 2017 Report Posted August 27, 2017 I have not read chapter 5 & 6 yet, but I am glad you continued your story. I will read your original chapters 1-4 in pdf format just to see if it is any better, but I doubt it could be. 1
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