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My Twisted Neighbor Lets Me Crash at His Place


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I have read so many stories by to many authors from this site and never once have I took a moment to add a comment to any of them.  This one, however, AMAZING!  You created a story that I could not break from, that I had to read to completion, uninterrupted!  So well written that I want to commend and applaud you for sharing this awesome read.  Thank you so much for contributing it!

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The fact that real people are the basis for your fiction makes your writing all the more authentic. You definitely have a gift for writing. I can’t recall a story of the same length where the author successfully developed characters, a plot, incorporated suspense, sexual tension, and just about every emotion every gay reader has ever experienced. There ought to be a prize, and you would definitely win it. Thank you, thank you for beginning, developing, and finishing this story so well.

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10 hours ago, cumbro said:

The fact that real people are the basis for your fiction makes your writing all the more authentic. You definitely have a gift for writing. I can’t recall a story of the same length where the author successfully developed characters, a plot, incorporated suspense, sexual tension, and just about every emotion every gay reader has ever experienced. There ought to be a prize, and you would definitely win it. Thank you, thank you for beginning, developing, and finishing this story so well.

I tried to get character development in there, and plot twists, and secret identities, and foreshadowing, and conflict, and humor (don't know if anyone picked up on it!); plus I tried to put myself in the characters' shoes to get their motivations and their feelings right; AND to make the sex scenes hot and interesting! Lots of late nights/early mornings writing this story, but it was fun. So glad you liked it!! Thanks for the feedback, can't stop smiling:)

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Wow! Truly one of the best stories I’ve read. I really enjoyed your story-telling, your writing style and your wicked, sexy, fun ideas. Thank you. It takes a lot of work to put this together. You have definitely entertained me and fed my imagination! Keep writing. You have talent! 

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17 hours ago, canvas said:

Wow! Truly one of the best stories I’ve read. I really enjoyed your story-telling, your writing style and your wicked, sexy, fun ideas. Thank you. It takes a lot of work to put this together. You have definitely entertained me and fed my imagination! Keep writing. You have talent! 

Thank you!!!

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  • 9 months later...
On 11/29/2018 at 11:33 PM, Jimmi said:

I’d love for you to write more. Even a new story; you have real talent. If you do, can you let us know on this thread that you’ve posted a new one?  No pressure though. I thoroughly appreciate everything you’ve already written. 

Thanks I'm so glad you liked it! It was totally random that I wrote this story. It just sort of happened one night after "Simon" drove past me one Saturday night while I was going into my building...and then all the guys here encouraged me to keep going. I spent so much time on my story that the lines started to blur a little, especially since it was so close to my real life and since I saw those real-life characters every day....But sharing my fantasy and hearing that you guys like it has been so awesome! And surprising.

But anyway if I do write something else I'll let you know:)

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5 hours ago, ijimmi69 said:

that story made me cum 3x, once hands free

 

Wow I can't believe you're commenting on my story!! I can't tell you how many times I've cum reading your stories over the past 5+ years. They're SO sinful and bad and so fucking hot. Glad I was able to return the favor:)

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