JWC1202
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My Boyfriend, the Diseased Community Cumhole
JWC1202 replied to spermedhole's topic in Bug Chasing & Gift Giving FICTION
Wow! I don't know how I missed this, but so glad it's on my radar now. Even without the purged chapter, this is a great read. I love the character voices, especially: conniving Omar, sadistic rapist #4, Nico's playful Dad. There is the promise of Nico taking more family loads, at both Omar's family reunion and from his own uncles. You write too well Spermedhole to not develop these threads. Nico is a sick little fuck, and he deserves all the dick he can get, toxic and otherwise. And we readers deserve to see him fully converted, whether by anonymous DNA or by the very juice that made him. -
I love this. Verbal tops are the best, but they are rare in porn and difficult to convey in a story. This top's patter is excellent. Would love a sequel in which the bottom does knock up his "little boyfriends," applying a similar verbal litany to that he endured when he was knocked-up, filthy and debauched paeons of depravity to accompany his now toxic babies fucked deep into neg holes.
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Straddling the line between fuck fiction and horror porn, and doing it expertly.
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I have jacked-off to this story probably hundreds of times, but only just today realized that the video Sloane plays for Conrad is of Lance's pozzing is from the author's other great story, Seduced, Chemmed, and Pozzed by My Wrestling Coach. How I wish rawrawraw76 were still contributing these minor masterpieces to BZ. He elevated the art of bug-chasing/chem jack-off fiction to unparalleled standards. Now, I have to review his entire oeuvre for Easter eggs similar to this one. Boy, is my dick gonna raw!
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Wow...first thing to note: this is very well-written, even gripping. Dark-themed stories are not uncommon here, but they usually revolve around the corruption associated with drugs. The drugs in this story have been almost incidental. The feeling of menace is what moves it forward. I love the physical abuse: the relentless slaps and punches. "You'll always wear one of my blacked eyes..." Fuck, yes. I am torn between fearing for our narrator's safety and wanting to trade places with him. Bruises, after all, can be quite beautiful. These Mayhem Riders have great possibilities. I wonder if we'll learn what their "final way" entails....I could hazard a few guesses.
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Shooting Up: Chemical Intimacy and the High of Connection
JWC1202 replied to WhiteBoiMi55ing's topic in Chem Sex FICTION
Oh...and the photos....often a distraction to a good story, are a touching addition. -
Shooting Up: Chemical Intimacy and the High of Connection
JWC1202 replied to WhiteBoiMi55ing's topic in Chem Sex FICTION
Wow. This is an unusual thing to find here, an actual love story. Not romantic in any usual sense, but a love story all the same. "One of these guys is gone" suggests that this is an exercise in grief, and, if so, it is a privilege to be allowed a glimpse into this powerful relationship. The flow of the story, even its patter of repetitions, give it a feeling of confessional poetry. Although I was hard throughout the story, especially at the erotic language describing the slam, this is something other than mere porn. It is raw and sad and powerful, something to reflect on, not just jack-off to. -
Jeff is going to have a great summer, lucky boy. I love an initiation story, and this one is off to a promising start. In every good story there is usually one line that grabs me and pulls me in. Here it is: “I just want to make one thing clear, little bitch. When you have sex with us, we will hurt you. And I will sometimes hurt you a lot." Sexy and sinister, a winning combo.
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"And my faggots don't get safewords because I own them." Nick has such great dialogue. I wish that tops in porn could convey this level of authority and menace. So sexy. I'm looking forward to more. Much more.
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"You look so pretty, Chase, bent over my stool....wearing my ropes.....crying for me." Mm, very hot beginning with lots of promise. I suspect that Chase's innocence will not remain intact for long, going the way of his formerly tight sphincter. The best narratives have a convincing storytelling voice, and that is just what Chase has, which pairs well with Nick's subtle menace. (It doesn't hurt!, either, that the author is fucking sexy!)
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I so desperately need this story to be continued. The pictures only heighten that necessity. Please, please, please: more Justin and Jeremy!
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Awesome! I like that the story subverts expectations. Rather than the older, gay guy with drug experience corrupting Mark, it is the young, straight, inexperienced Mark leading Kyle out of sobriety and into a world of sexual degradation. It's hot that this young dude is finding his Dom persona with the help of tina, and is unapologetically using his father figure to explore this new side of himself. A fun read.
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Yes! I swear, I compose sequels to this story in my head constantly. There is real magic between Cooper and his Dad, and I only wish there were more chapters of them together. A Cooper and Grant sequel would be amazing. The story hints darkly at Coop getting excited at the thought of raw dick. I'd love to learn that Paul recognized that Grant and some of the others using his son's hole were poz, and allowed, even encouraged Coop's stealthing. Paul loves his son, but is eager to covert him into a poz slampig. One of my favorite stories by one of BZ's best authors!
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Just when I think I have exhausted the hottest stories on this site, I stumble on a real winner like this one. Sammy's tale of being re-cunted is rare among the more typical stories about young pigs being corrupted. His conflict is compelling, but he cannot resist the urge to have his cunt filled after too long and resuming his proper role. An exceptionally well-written story.
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Slam Initiation: Turning a Hairy Top into a Twisted Cumdump
JWC1202 replied to RawSlamPerv's topic in Chem Sex FICTION
So jealous. I wish someone had taken me in hand and initiated me that way.
