Van Rubenheim's diary

[ConversionPiglet]

WOW!  Thanks folks for your comments and your lack of understand this comment I posted...."Just my opinion so no need to spam nasty comments if anyone disagrees please."  Thanks and have a great evening.

[Guest takingdeepanal]

12 hours ago, Shotsfired said:

Wow. What an entitled couple of cunts you two are?! 

First, I've read an epic fuck ton of stories here. There are soooooo much worse. Oh, and since both of you smug little assholes have comments to make about the free story on the free website, you could present a story each?

What say the rest of you good breeding brothers? You both will write  a story about a jerk who gets a comeuppance, or maybe you get voted out of the Brotherhoood?

If this were my site, and I depended on the good will of amateur writers to fill my empty space, I would incite this very rule or something similar. If you pay for an erotica collection at Amazon and it sucks, gripe away.  If its free in a community space be thankful, constructive or shut the fuck up and move on.

If I was the writer I would tell you both to suck a fart out of my ass. Your comments weren't constructive, and came with no intention except to hurt a stranger you know jack shit about. Uncouth people like you are tearIng this country a part and you should be ashamed.

@Gymguy8 (114 posts and 2013 positive ratings points at the time of this comment) writes a LOT of really good stuff on this site. He wasn't being vindictive - just voicing his thoughts (and constructive comments) ...

Edited May 30, 2020 by takingdeepanal

[TheAficionado]

Man, the sparks are flyin’! And that was one punishing beat down!

Oh, wait. I forgot what I came here to read…

[tepegodf]

I like it.  It has all the components of a great story.  Money, Power, Control.  The essence of a true MASTER over a true slave.  Please continue.  Who cares what others say.  When writing a story, do it in your own way.  I know your story is going to be good.  It made ME hard already with anticipation of how one takes control over another.

[Sharp-edge]

It was only two days later that the prey, known as Leon, received a  call. It was an invitation for a casting about a vitamin supplement commercial. Leon headed to the location of the appointment, which was inside a skyscraper, one of the most famous of this town. It was the centrals of a pharmaceutical industry and its sight was enough to make him nervous. 
These guys seemed to have more than enough money to hire a well known model or even a famous actor or something. Why him? Was it the chance of a lifetime? His chance to become a reputed model? Or to make some serious money? After passing the security control he went inside the building only to find a crowded place with an information desk located at its center. The secretary led him outside an office and told him to get inside. And so he did. Inside there was another woman who welcomed him and ask him to wait. Moments later she asked him to proceed to the office inside.
Van Rubenheim was sitting in his office anticipating for him. From the very moment he saw him his tongue wanted to touch his lips. And his hands craved for his naked body. A small dialogue between the two men helped them break the ice. Van Rubenheim told him about this new campaign and his words were  music to Leon's ear. This campaign was promising enough for both money and reputation. And he would do his best to achieve this goal.
He typed something on his computer and the secretary entered his office. She would escort him to the "casting" although it wasn't really a casting. He had this place from  the beginning. Van Rubenheim watched him from behind as he left the room. He was already having fun.  He wanted to taste him but he was not in a hurry. Sooner or later he always got what he wanted. It was not about the money. Sure it helps, but his mind was his strongest tool. Plotting was his very speciality.

Leon was asked to wear a bathing suit. Photos of him were taken constantly without having him noticed. Semi-naked,  fully naked,  with socks, without socks, every possible combination was  photographed. He and the other guys and girls formed a line and  asked to  memorise a tiny script and hold the vitamin containing bottle in a particular wait. Everything was smooth and gentle and the plan was working well.  He got to talk with the other guys and girls. Most of them were already brand ambassadors of this company and were invited to try several products. This knowledge made him quite nervous. He was the only one not experienced with this company. But a guy asked him to realex  and assured him that has both the looks and the atittude for this job.

Van Rubenheim was receiving constantly photos from his very loyal assistant and was getting excited and aroused.  He couldn't get  enough of that guy. He would sure jerk off to these photos. They even had some other guys around him hagging him and touching him pretending to be his friends for the "concept" of this commercial. Nasty thoughts were coming to his mind, one after another. He needed a party.
Leon was informed by the end of the casting that he took the job. His joy was beyond words. But he would receive even greater news. The coming Saturday he was invited to one of Van Rubenheim parties. The reason for this party would be the success of a previous campain were all the models, scientists and some other stuff would be informed. He was strongly encouraged to attend, since this would help him to better understand how this company works. But he needed no encouragement at all. A mansion with endless drinks and luxury with him surrounded with some sexy  models would be the best meal for his every hungry greed.
"This Saturday" said Van Rubenheim. He talked to his loyal assistant. "I'm horny which of them should I use"?  andhe scrolled down towards a menu with the photographs of several sexy men. 
"Whoever you fancy the most Sir" he replied. Van Rubenheim laughed. "You're not helping". The cursor of his computered stopped in a particular guy. 
"that one" he said." Have him ready" he ordered. And bring poppers, spray, a piece of cloth and a pipe.
But Sir you've got an appoint in almost half an hour.
"Don't be so stressed Jack" Van Hoenheim. Besides i need a small break. 
"Yes Sir" Jack replied.
 

[Sharp-edge]

Regarding your comments

Initially I would like to thank you for your replies. I'm not a native speaker but I hope I'm  fluent enough to write (type maybe?) a decent story (grammar-syntax-wise).
It's supposed to be in many parts so you can't really say there is no chem sex since no sex happened at all. And it's a free story so by "blaming me" what do  you earn? You won't get a refund 😛

But please feel free to make further comments,  I'm anticipating for your feedback.

[Rosebud69]

On 5/29/2020 at 10:20 AM, Shotsfired said:

Wow. What an entitled couple of cunts you two are?! 

First, I've read an epic fuck ton of stories here. There are soooooo much worse. Oh, and since both of you smug little assholes have comments to make about the free story on the free website, you could present a story each?

What say the rest of you good breeding brothers? You both will write  a story about a jerk who gets a comeuppance, or maybe you get voted out of the Brotherhoood?

If this were my site, and I depended on the good will of amateur writers to fill my empty space, I would incite this very rule or something similar. If you pay for an erotica collection at Amazon and it sucks, gripe away.  If its free in a community space be thankful, constructive or shut the fuck up and move on.

If I was the writer I would tell you both to suck a fart out of my ass. Your comments weren't constructive, and came with no intention except to hurt a stranger you know jack shit about. Uncouth people like you are tearIng this country a part and you should be ashamed.

Very well stated, thank you for putting these comments in perspective!