dazzasboy Posted September 16, 2022 Report Posted September 16, 2022 Mate this is an amazing story excellent writing, here’s to your next chapter in this man’s life.
Guest Posted September 16, 2022 Report Posted September 16, 2022 18 hours ago, billy88666 said: Well done... excellent writing! You painted a very vivid picture of the events of your story. As someone who was subjected to a brutal assault in my 20's, the story seemed very realistic. I remember at the time being in a state of shock and it almost felt like an out of body experience. I reacted in a similar way to the victim in your story. The mind almost goes into a state of denial, in a bid to block out the pain during the assault. Thank you! I was a little worried when writing the first two chapters that people might be triggered, so was trying hard to toe that line between hot but also somewhat disturbing but also never crossing the line into flat out glorifying but also accomplishing what I needed to for the story to go where I want. So this means a lot!
Guest Posted September 16, 2022 Report Posted September 16, 2022 8 hours ago, negchaserlooking said: Another amazing chapter. It seemed to be an ending of sorts to the story or do you intend to continue with our "hero's" descent into pozdom? Nope, definitely intend to continue his journey into pozdom. Right now he’s still in denial, so we’ll see how he adapts and changes!
TallKinkyBttmSlut Posted September 16, 2022 Report Posted September 16, 2022 Damn, this is hot! I am looking forward to reading more!
PozTalkAuthor Posted September 17, 2022 Report Posted September 17, 2022 It'll take time I suppose but soon the denial becomes a sense of liberation
Anders4 Posted September 18, 2022 Report Posted September 18, 2022 I like the buildup, and the slow corruption of the MC, how his horniness puts him into more trouble.
Moose143 Posted September 18, 2022 Report Posted September 18, 2022 👏👏👏 well done got a ride out of me for sure
shinelover Posted September 19, 2022 Report Posted September 19, 2022 Fuck, this story is AWESOME! More please!
maryann Posted September 19, 2022 Report Posted September 19, 2022 Great story .... I would love to get fucked like that .... I would just add a blindfold so I would never know who knocked me up with his sweet hot poz cum ...!
Guest Posted September 19, 2022 Report Posted September 19, 2022 This is so fucking hot definitely keep it going!!
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