Hotload84 Posted June 26, 2013 Report Posted June 26, 2013 Some additional comments. Yes hot story with a storyline that begs more reading. Could have used a good editor to catch the accidental name changes, and bed changes. I tripped on some of those mistakes. But aside from that one of the better stories I have read here. Your right, JizzDumpWI. It took me several readings to find the name-shift. I gotta agree, the story definitely needs some editing, so I did a bit, and who knows? If I find myself bored, perhaps I'll go back and do some more.
Guest JizzDumpWI Posted June 26, 2013 Report Posted June 26, 2013 what i would do is seaech for "chad" which should be "kyle". Looks like you fixed the location where instead of beingin Kyle's bed they weres suddenly in David's... I will go back and look for that.
Guest JizzDumpWI Posted June 26, 2013 Report Posted June 26, 2013 Actually Kyle starts out as Chad. So just choose one and be consistent...
Guest JizzDumpWI Posted June 26, 2013 Report Posted June 26, 2013 paragraph beginning with " "Fuck!!!" I cried out as David... (25% to 33% thru story where David is now finger fucking Chad... "Kyle" in that paragraph should be "David".
Guest JizzDumpWI Posted June 27, 2013 Report Posted June 27, 2013 Hotload84, you really did a good job. Not many - just hat i found i n posts above. Grat read. One of the hotter stories here. While I dont like stealth - I didnt experience the story that way, even though it is definitely there. Probably the ending where Chad is glad to be pozzed, and David clearly stuck by Chad is what moderated the stealth... Anyway, thanks for the fixes!
Hotload84 Posted June 27, 2013 Report Posted June 27, 2013 what i would do is seaech for "chad" which should be "kyle". Looks like you fixed the location where instead of beingin Kyle's bed they weres suddenly in David's... I will go back and look for that. Good idea, JizzDumpWI. I've copied the story into Word, and am making my corrections in it, then, when satisfied, I'll replace the original posting with a somewhat smoother version. It has occurred to me the language in this story reads like a Harlequin romance. It would be interesting to know if that genre contributed to the composition.
Guest JizzDumpWI Posted June 27, 2013 Report Posted June 27, 2013 You're right, it does read that way... But, it really evolves well as a story. So in that respect i wouldn't change a thing. Be careful on change-all. In one case "kyle" s/b "chad". In another case "Chad" s/b "David". So editing would really take a careful. Maybe 'find' command in WORD and then read discovered text to decide how it should be...
DocThor Posted July 1, 2013 Report Posted July 1, 2013 Thank you for bringing this back from bugshare. Leave the original, post a revised if so motivated...just leave the original.
Hotload84 Posted July 1, 2013 Report Posted July 1, 2013 Okay, here goes, guys. Hope this version is as well received as was the original. --------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- It was the first night I had ever been away from home. I had just gotten settled in my dorm and David, my roommate and I, were watching a little TV when he wanted to take a shower before bed. I sat there and idly watched as he stripped down and grabbed his shit for a shower. I couldn't help but notice how nice David's 6'1” body and chest were, and as my eyes moved down his body, I admired his beautiful six-pack abs and the treasure trail that made its way to a gorgeous set of cock and balls. He looked like he was seven inches soft, which lead me to speculate what his length was when erect. Just as quickly, however, I realized the whole line of thoughts was a bit strange as I had never had a gay thought before today, but for some reason David made me think these things. I just thought something must have come over me when David showed me his body. Anyhow, as David took his shower I decided to hit the rack, so I striped down to my boxers and slipped into bed. I normally slept in the nude, but didn't think David would be hip on the thought of a naked roommate in the bed next to his. I started to drift off to sleep when David came back in our room. Although the only light on in the room was the light from the closet, I could still see David's bod and I thought for a second his cock was no longer hanging between his legs, but was actually jutting out somewhat. Then David turned-off the light and headed for his bed. I recall that he never put anything on when he was in his closet. I floated off to sleep and was half in and out of sleep when I felt it, maybe around midnight, maybe a little later: it was David's hand. He had climbed into the bed with me and was lying behind me, his hand on my stomach, and moving downwards towards my belly button, down to the waist band of my boxers, touching and rubbing me through the fabric. It was getting in his way, and I knew he was going to move it, I knew he was going to try and put his hand in there. "Please..." I whispered, "Please, don't." David stopped rubbing, but he held his hand there, right at the waistband of my boxers, his body spooning against me. I could feel the bed move as his body touched mine through the only thing that was between us, namely, my boxers. His mouth moved almost up to my ear, his warm breath touched my ear lobe. "It's okay, Chad, no one will know. I just want you to feel good," and after a tiny pause, he continuing saying "I want to make you feel better - I want to make everything okay. I want to MAKE you......" a pause, and then I felt his tongue and mouth swab the inside of my ear. I involuntarily moaned, deeply moved, as I had never felt anything like that before. My body started to shake, my entire insides responding. "Besides," he whispered again, "I know you want this. I saw how you looked at me when I took off my underwear. Just let me do this you...please let me take you, I know you want it." Again his tongue encircled my ear as his hand traveled into my boxers. Within seconds I was hard, my whole body shaking from the heat, from the images of David, and from David's tongue in my ear. "Please," I pleaded, "please don't!" David responded by kissing down my ear to the side of my neck, where he suckled there for a second. The sensation of his lips sucking me was even more exciting, and when he tossed-away the sheet and kissed the middle of my neck, rubbing my stomach and kissed his way from my neck line to my chin, and from to my lips, I didn’t resist – at least not much. His lips were full and hot, almost on fire, and the sensation of his body rubbing up against me, his naked, hard body pressing into mine, caused electricity to shoot through us. As the kiss turned into one I was eager to return, he began massaging my crotch, and I surrendered to his masculinity. As his lips sought-out my mouth, my lips parted for him, and, without any thought, on my part, I was thrilled when I felt his tongue enter me. I moaned really loudly, completely lost in whatever was happening between us. "Shhhh," David said quietly his hands tugging at my boxers, "we don't want anyone to hear." I just kind of nodded as he looked into my eyes. His blue eyes were so intense - so bright in the soft moonlight. I knew I didn't want this, but I knew it was going to happen. My boxers slid down over my hard cock, and his full lips were on me, sucking mine, then probing me with his tongue, feeling my own tongue and sucking deeply at it. Again, I moaned, and David kissed down my neck line again to the area between my pecs, murmuring “It's so smooth, and your little body is so hot," as his tongue started touching each pec, each nipple, bathing them as I squirmed and moved against his briefs, his engorged crotch unabashedly grinding against me. He touched my abs and then kissed them too. "It's gonna feel so good, these tanned abs moving when you feel me inside," he said as his tongue moved to my belly button, and he lightly sucked down my stomach my hard, throbbing cock. I moaned again, and got completely lost in him, not even really understanding what he was saying. "Oh God, you're so fuckin' hot," he announced as we kissed each other. I came back to myself for a second, and half tried to extract myself from his hold - shit was just so fucked up, half-whimpering "Please, David.... please...", but he just smiled at me, moved back-up, and this time his lips were on mine in less than a second. I could feel his strength, his whole body, full of athleticism and stamina pushing against me as his tongue demanded entrance into my mouth. The kiss was so deep, and so full, our bodies tightly clasping each other, our bodies one, not two, for what seemed an eternity, our mouths quickly moving, tongues touching and swirling, my body crying and moaning as David tasted all of me, as we both sweated-up a storm. David broke the kiss and smiled at me, his teeth so white in the light from the moon. "I'm going to suck you, the way only a man can." Again he kissed me hungrily, his tongue probing deeply into my mouth. I moaned as I felt his hard tongue, his hard pecs against mine, his strong hands feeling my abs, rubbing my torso and my chest, trying to press himself harder and harder against my body. I just closed my eyes, and felt his strength as my head moved back while David broke-off the kiss again, licked down my neck and sucked, sucking so hard noise reverberated in my head, not unlike the sound of someone quickly sucking on noodles. I intuitively knew a hickey was going to be there long afterwards, but just didn't care. I was so overwhelmed by David, by his strength, by his kisses. He kept sucking his way down, licking my sweaty chest, tongue kissing my stomach, my heaving abs, the area below my belly button. He licked down from there to my pubes, and stopped. I passively lay there, my eyes closed, but registering his pause, I looked-up to see he was staring at me, and as our eyes met, an amazing electrical charge shot between us. After a second, he smiled and I felt my rock hard cock getting ready to spurt on my crotch. He smiled again, and went back to licking my black pubes, then tongue-kissing the head of my cock, which was now leaking pre-cum like a faucet. "Oh, you taste so sweet" David whispered as his mouth and lips plunged down my six inch cock, which, of course, was at full staff. "Uhhhh... Ohhhh.. Fuck..." I cried, as I felt David licking and tasting me. His mouth was so hot, and he clearly knew how to pleasure a guy. He knew how to use his tongue, and knew how much pressure to apply as he went down and came back up, moving faster and faster, and I felt myself really leaking, as little moans kept escaping me. "Uh, uh uh, ehhhh ehhhhhh uhhhhhhh" I moaned as his eyes looked-up at me. His lips were so perfect and my cock was rock hard solid. I totally stopped worrying, and just let it happen, my cock and balls were so tight, so ready to blow. I wanted to push his head all the way down on my shaft when he stopped at the end, but he did it for me, moving so quickly, swallowing all of me, his nose in my pubes. "Shitt..." I moaned, as I looked down at him again, holding it there, and I trying to fuck into his mouth, trying to give him what he wanted. My balls welled-up, but David quickly stopped sucking me, grabbed my balls, and held them still, whispering "You can't cum yet. I have more lined-up for you." "Ohhhh fuckkkk," I cried, trying to turn my cock towards his mouth, frustrated he didn't finish me. He just kept hold of my balls and inspected them, slowly touching my hairless sac with his tongue, then took my nuts into his mouth, alternating between them, first one, then the other. "Uhhh, owww..." I moaned again, this time in a mix of pleasure and pain. David moved down my sac, and this time used his tongue kisses in the place below my balls, before my asshole. Nudging my legs apart with his strong hands, his tongue touched me in a place I had never been touched. "Ohhh," I whimpered, feeling his tongue go lower and lower wetting me, giving my hairless skin a bath as he was going towards my ass. "What are you fucking doing?" I blurted out, never having felt anything like this before. "Just lay back, I know you're gonna like this" David said as he lifted my legs, leaned over, and inserted his tongue into my asshole. "Ohhh" I cried. His tongue scraped along it while David's muscles kept me propped up. His tongue touched my outer hole, and then swirled around the inside, tasting me, giving me a warm and hot feeling, something I had never felt there before. "Ohhh dude, you don't have any hair here.... It's so hot..." he whispered, as his tongue darted around the lips of my asshole. "Ahhhhhh, fuck dude," I cried as David darted it in and tried to stick his tongue completely in my ass. I was still rock solid hard this feeling only made me hornier; I whimpered in pleasure, and David, of course, knew I was in ecstasy, and as such, was totally vulnerable. He knew I was his for the taking. Coming up for air, David looked down at me, and I felt his hard cock prodding my asshole, and, having made his expectations clear, he positioned my thighs against my chest, my legs around his body, and lay directly on top of me, face-to-face, kissing me really hard, and coincidentally giving me a taste of my cock and ass. "Ehhhh, ahhh.. nooooo... MMMmmm, ohhhhh" we both moaned. The kiss was hot and deep, and our bodies, all muscular and strong, prepared for the next level of pleasure as his hard cock rubbed against my ass. David continued to kiss me, probing the back of my mouth, his tongue trying to reach down my throat. I returned his passion, and he held me with his arms, even as he reached under the pillow to locate a bottle which he had apparently placed there, flicking it open in one deft motion. Now sitting on top of me, his knees controlled my torso. I remember thinking the moonlight made his pecs and stomach look extraordinarily white, as I admired his heaving muscles and his treasure trail, which glistened with sweat and pre-cum. I felt his hands move down me again as he shifted his weight to my right side. His hands were slick with something now, something that smelled of coconuts and he touched my abs with it, rubbing them slick with some sort of oil. "MMmmm" he moaned as his lips met mine, the kiss turned directions, and sped up as his hand moved to my belly button again, then down to my pubes and then my cock. "Ohhhh... Ohhhhh... uuhhhhhh...Shit" I groaned as his hand slicked it all up mixing my sweat with the oil. My balls reared up again, and the kiss went deeper. "Uh Uhhh...." David moaned into our kiss as he quickly moved his hands to my balls, coating them with the lube. I wanted to cum so badly that I tried to my best to jerk off, but David grabbed my wrist, giving me a look that told me was a clear ‘no’, as he positioned them on the side of his torso, just above his slim waist. His fingers moved lower then and touched the smooth area under my balls, and slicked it moving his hand even lower. I broke the kiss, not understanding what he was doing... "Dude, fuckin’ stop, what the fuck are you doing? Don't touch me there," I said, gasping for breath, as his hand kept moving lower. "It's okay," he said, "I'm just touching you, just feeling you. I want to touch you with this lube the way I touched you with my tongue." He smiled, and his teeth were so white, so beautiful to me at that moment, and I knew then that I was attracted to David, that I wanted him, that I wanted this. David spread my legs with his knees, and kissed his way down my chest, licked my abs (which, I briefly though, must have tasted of the lube), and settled on his knees in between my legs. I was completely hard: I needed him to get me off. His hand started lubing underneath my balls again, and immediately, he took my cock in his mouth, bobbing slowly as he used his lips up and down, looking up into my face. "Shit... Ohhhhhh" I groaned as I squirmed feeling his mouth on me. His fingers were moving lower at the same time, and before I knew it, one was touching my asshole. David moved it around the ring and pressed at it, wetting me with lube while trying to push in. It was obvious that it was hard for him, and I moved back, trying to push it away with my hole. David just held me tight, and kept up the pressure. He started rubbing my slick torso with his other hand, and licking my cock with his tongue. "Uh, Owwww ... Please stop!" I cried as David's finger kept putting pressure at my hole, his mouth completely down on my shaft. I groaned again when he used his mouth to suck me, and almost came as bucked into him. He grabbed at me again with his free hand, and held me in place, immobilizing my hips and stomach. He just had me deep throated when the finger finally penetrated, and he slowly pushed his way into my hole. "Fuck!!!" I cried out as David held me in place with his hand on my stomach, his finger in my hole. "Shhhhh... Dude, you gotta be quiet,” David whispered as he brought his mouth from my dick, then went straight back down again, sucking me all the way deep. “Uhhhh..." I moaned, as his lips moved up and down, his finger prodded and pushed, filling me, pushing something, putting pressure in me that I had never felt before. The finger pushed harder, and this time it went further inside me. I groaned really loudly as he touched something inside there, my most private place. "Owww, Ohhhhh" I cried as David's touch sent a shock through me, his finger deliberately playing with something he knew. He held me there deep throated with his hand still rubbing my tummy, I felt his other fingers tracing my asslips, and once more I groaned, a mixture of pain and pleasure, as David pushed harder still to slip yet another finger inside my ass. "Ohhhhh, owwwww, stop” I groaned as his middle finger met his index finger inside my hole. The two fingers moved in unison, in and out of my ass, making a soft liquid noise, as David’s mouth slurped at my cock, his saliva made a somewhat louder slurping sound. “Uhhhhh.... take it out David, please take it out”, I whispered as David looked up at me, his mouth still slurping and full of my cock. I felt him remove his fingers, and this time his tongue moved down my dick. With the removal of his fingers I felt a sense of relief, yet at the same time, a weird sense of emptiness. David, however, knew what he was doing: my cock was still so rock solid, and David kept playing with it, sucking me, then holding me in limbo. "Oh, shit, shit! Fuckin’ finish me, David, please finish me!" My balls started to well, and I could feel the cum building. Again though David came off me, and grabbed my balls with his hand, squeezing them hard, halting an orgasm. I winced. "Not yet, bro... You're gonna cum, and I want you to feel it. The way I know you want to." I moaned loudly in confusion and lust, and instinctively knew I was being too loud, but the sweat, the sex, the muscles, and the stud made me stop caring. Once more he took my balls in his mouth, slowly bathing them with his tongue. "Ahhhhh..." I moaned louder, stopping David in his tracks. He came off my balls, and used his strong arms to back his knees up a little bit. Then he moved his power under my legs, the muscles and veins straining in his biceps as he got under them, lifting each of them on his tight shoulders, using his power to position my body to his liking. Instantly, I felt his athleticism and strength, felt his ability pushing up against me, holding me. His strong body reared forward, moving my legs to my chest and forcing our faces together, going in for the deepest kiss we had shared. "Ugh, oh, " I moaned as his tongue touched me all the way deep, probing me, pushing up and back against my tonsils and my throat as his throbbing dick pushing against my naked ass. “Ah, oooh” I moaned as David passionately kissed me, and, after breaking-off the kiss, looking deeply into my face. He was now covered in sweat, his face was red, but the rest of him was pure white in the moonlight. His chest was so hard, and the light made him look so strong and powerful, as his veins were moving in his arms, his six pack breathing quickly and his veins leading down his tapered waist, to his still throbbing cock. In the light, I could still see his treasure trail was glistening with sweat. My eyes wandered back to his, and David smiled, his teeth so white and so beautiful to me in the moonlight. I never would have thought something like that about a guy... not until this. "Chad," he said lightly, "now you gotta be quiet, I don't want anyone on the floor to hear us, I don't want anyone to find out...." he said, moving his body back hard against mine, pressing into me, pressing his six pack against my cock. I was still so hard. "Now I'm going to take you. I'm going to give it to you and I am going to make you cum. It's gonna hurt at first, but you're gonna cum while we fuck, I'M GOING TO MAKE YOU..." he whispered hard. His mouth met mine again and he was on me, our bodies completely hard against each other, my legs anchored against his shoulders. I was utterly lost in my connection with him. The lube and the sweat was making it slick between us, and he rubbed his cock against me, his tongue battling mine in my mouth, trying to push even farther, even deeper than he had been before. His chest raised a little and I felt him rub my nipples as we groaned lightly together as he pinched and moved. His body went further back as we kissed, and I watched in the moonlight that shone through our dorm room window as his hands moved down. And that's when I realized what was going to happen.... it came to me literally as David's hard sweaty cock came rubbed against my lubed asshole. He was going to put it inside me, and I immediately groaned a "noooooooo," even as we kissed. David, however, was not one to be put off. He simply took control and used his body weight against mine as I wrestled and squirmed, but he held me tightly, his slick and strong body holding me in position. I felt his cock starting to touch my ass, and immediately I was amazed by the heat it generated as it moved against my ass. I struggled a bit more, perhaps with decreasing vigor, as my hole dripped wet from the sweat and lube that David had used to loosen me up. He started to bear down, using his weight against my body, his leverage keeping my feet secure in position, using his kisses as a distraction, even as I continued to squirm out of his grasp. I felt his cock touch the lips of my hole, and I looked back to the mirror, helpless, watching as David’s tight bubble ass moved his cock up and down my lubed hole. Ahhhh fuck" I said into our kiss again, trying to turn my mouth away. I turned toward the mirror over my dresser and saw David taking his free hand and moving back to his cock; he was trying to change angles now. He was no longer moving it up and down the lubed lips of my hole, he was pointing it straight at my hole trying to push himself in. "No, pleeeeaaase.... I don't want this..." I murmured into David's mouth as he finally broke off our kiss. "Ssssh. It’s okay. You're really tight, bro, but I'm gonna have your ass, and you'll like it," he whispered as his mouth went to my ear, adding “I’m fuck you, and I'm gonna make you cum," he promised as his cock made its entrance into my hole. "Ahhhhhhhh.... fuck....."I cried out as David's tongue went all the way into my ear, and his cock started passing my ass ring, slowly pushing and burning as David held himself in place, his cock lodging itself in my hole. "Breathe out.... fuckin' breathe out, Chad.... I'm pushing, you need to take it!" he growled. I just cried out as he pushed, and David put his free hand over my mouth to muffle the scream. "Oh you're so fuckin hot Chad, you're so tight dude. I knew you would be this tight when I first saw your ass in those shorts you wore today." He gasped as he sucked on my neck, holding me in place with his strength while the pressure intensified. It was like I was being filled with something so deep inside me, the pain was hard, and it was pressure, but it also sent shudders and waves through my body, waves that made my cock fuckin hard. "You need to be quiet or everyone on the floor will know," he said, as he held me there for a second, his cock half-way in. I could feel his heat inside me and my ass muscles clenched, and yet as I was determined to go the full course. We both groaned in pleasure as David began rocking his hips - just a little bit. He was poking and prodding my insides, trying to get me more used to the intrusion. I cried in pain, and could feel the sweat dripping' off us. It was falling and swirling around my hole, I swear could feel it cascading down into my hole. I looked in the mirror helplessly again, and saw David's tight ass moving, rocking around as he sent waves of pain, mixed with pleasure, through my body. I was really grunting then with every movement, feeling the pressure, the strength of David's body, his ass, and his cock. He was so athletic and so strong, I could feel it in his cock as he pressed in me. David moved again, and brought his mouth to mine, kissing me as I just laythere, with my lips open, breathing heavily from the pressure, the pain, and impact of his movements. I wasn't kissing back I passively lay there, breathing convulsively, as I felt him resume his gyrations. Again he stuck his tongue into my throat, and, as his hips pushed all the way forward, burying his cock into my ass, an involuntary cry burst out. "FUCK!" Please take it out David, please..." I moaned, but David just held me in position, and never broke-off the kiss. He was held-off with his thrusts, but his pelvis was just pressed all the way against my ass, as his mouth kissed me, and his hands explored my lubed abs and tweaked my nips. After a few seconds, he started slowly rocking his hips again, lightly moving his cock around my insides. "Oh, ugh, uhnn" I moaned from the pain and the exertion, the sweat pouring down our bodies, down my back and all over my body, but this time he kept lightly rocking, and it felt like my insides were moving with him. "Please... please... don't..." He didn't listen, (or maybe he was listening, and knew what I really wanted), because he lightly pushed a little to the left, then to the right and downwards then upwards. And that's when it hit me... that upswing that made my whole body shake, as we both grunted out loud. It felt like lightning struck my body - my whole head spun. David stopped kissing my open lips. "I'm hittin' it now, bro. I'm touching it. I knew you were a bottom, and now you're gonna feel it. Now, you're gonna take it." David pushed his lips against me deep then, and pressed on the upswing one more time, deep up in to me. "Ahhh, ahhhh ahh." I moaned and breathed quickly into the kiss as David pushed HARD. My whole insides shook again as the lightning turned to something. It was like that wave when I came during orgasm, my whole body +going tense as I would cum. It was that upswing, that feeling that gave me the lightning, that got me rock solid hard. "Ahhhhh.... ooooooh" I cooed as pain mixed with the feeling, and David started to pull out really slow. I was completely in the moment now, the room smelling of the coconut lube, our sweat, and our sex. I felt his cock move outwards and leave that place inside me, the pain feeling harsh again, as I groaned. "Mmmm, Uhhhhh," David grunted as his cock pushed hard back in to me, and I whimpered. "Owwww ahhhhhh, no, no," I moaned again into the kiss, but David didn't break. He pushed upwards again and the lightning hit, both of us letting out a grunt. "Take it," David growled into our kiss as this time he pulled out almost all the way of my hole. I felt empty and strange until he pushed back, long dicking me into an upward movement. "Ohhhhhhh Fuuuuck" I cried into our open mouths, as my cock went totally hard. I just completely turned now from complete pain and fear, and was so turned on now from the pain and the pleasure. I fought using my muscles as David pushed against my special place, his tongue mirroring the movement of his cock in my ass. "Ahhhh..." He started rearing again this time pulling almost totally out, leaving the head at my entrance, then jamming upwards, shaking my tight body as he fucked. He moved faster again, this time keeping the strokes closer together, fucking me in a rhythm as my bed started to shake with it. The room getting even hotter as he pulled out and pushed, fucking me..."uh, uh uh," I cried repetitively with each thrust. After about two minutes, each thrust started getting me harder, the pressure was becoming heat, and the heat was becoming sex, really fucking hard sex as David forced his athletic body deep into mine, and his tongue remained lodged in my mouth. Even so, with each stroke, we both grunted our approval. "Uhhh Uhhh Uhh" he grunted as his strokes were moving so fast now. All I could feel was the lightning ripping into my ass, and David's tongue as he fucked me hard, the sound of our moans and my ass squishing from his cock and lube making the only noises in the room. Our bodies were moving so hard, the exertion so tight. My abs rippled with every stroke, David's muscles strained as he shoved in to me, fucking me ever deeper. In between kisses, David started whispering to me periodically, telling me I was tough, that my body was so tight, and that my fuck was so hot. I looked in the mirror again, and it was David's bubble butt that was fucking into my hole this time, the force and the athleticism completely overpowering me, his muscular back moving so fast now, dripping with sweat. He moved his mouth to my ear again, and sucked my earlobe, as we both grunted. "I'm gonna make you cum now," he said as his hands grabbed mine, and he pushed all the way inside me, holding -- then starting – the fastest, hardest fuck he could. "Oh, Ohhhhhh" I cried as each stroke was so fast and so hard, the feeling just multiplied over and over and over again. We hit this rhythm that moved in milliseconds as I cried out, my abs contracting with each deep down stroke. His body moving like a frickin stud, his muscles sweating and moving as he fucked. "Ow, oh oh oh ahhhhhh!" I growled, as I grabbed David's tight ass, feeling his strength as he plowed in to me, the bed shaking and our grunting getting louder. "Uh Uh Uh Uh" he repeated as he fucked, his ass flexing under my hands. My balls tightened without me even touching them. "FUUUCKKK" I cried, as he reared up again, this time shoving so deep, to that perfect spot. My whole body stopped shuddering, my balls swelling all the way up, as David shoved one more time, slamming our bodies against the bed, moaning as we met as one, the sweat, the smells, the breathing, the muscles. Our orgasms were unbelievably intense. My balls shot their load, shooting everywhere, all over David's chest, in my face, and in my hair, as my asshole squeezing David’s cock. "Oh, Oh, Oh" I cried as David pressed all the way against me, his cock so hot and deep. "Fuckin' take it!" he moaned, as he collapsed against my body, shooting volley after volley of cum into my body, filling my insides, mixing with the lube. "Ohh fuck" I cried as David held me tight still, his dick still deep inside. He moved his mouth down to mine, and we kissed fast at first, then slowing, tasting each other, as our lips moved and pressed, touched and parted, allowing our tongues to push in to the others' mouth. I felt him putting his hands on me then, slowly caressing me, my abs, my sides, then my smooth ass, as he moved me to my side, keeping his cock still firmly inside my asshole, still hard as his cum seeped deeper into my hole. He spooned with me with his strong arm, and we laid there as he kissed my neck, whispering to me, telling me how hot I was, how I was tight and small and strong, how good he could make me feel, how good we could fuck and that he impregnated me with his seed, his dirty, charged up seed. I stared forward blankly, still feeling his heat --- his cum in my ass, trying to comprehend what he meant by 'his dirty, charged seed?' “You are now mine, I own your ass. Soon you will get the fuck flu and when I take you for your first HIV test and it comes back poz, we will celebrate. I was shocked. David made me his poz bottom fuck bitch. The feelings became so strange as he kissed my neck and stroked my abs, then my pecs, then my pubes, and back again. I just started drifting off, utterly exhausted, as I stared into the dresser mirror, in which I saw two naked, muscular boys laying together in the moonlight, the atmosphere permeated with the smell of sweat, sex, and cum. Then I felt another motion, and realized David had slid his cock back into my ass again. “We need to make sure the seeding takes Chad.” I took four loads that night and every night after that until I got sick with the flu. David took care of me through my sickness and three months later I tested poz. David is the best roommate with whom I could have ever been paired.
Guest JizzDumpWI Posted July 3, 2013 Report Posted July 3, 2013 WOW!!! FUCKIN WOW!!! I want David to find me now....!
mike43 Posted March 22, 2014 Report Posted March 22, 2014 Hot story wish I could be converted like that
MackyJay Posted March 22, 2014 Report Posted March 22, 2014 This is definitely one damn hot story and would love to find a guy like David for sure;
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