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JWC1202

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  1. Oh my! A new chapter of a favorite story I thought long abandoned. I'm very excited for Raymon'd journey to continue. I love how seemingly little interactions--the eye roll, the gut punch--take on a larger significance in the sadistic duo's breaking of Raymond. What is going on with Raymond is as thought provoking as it sexually exciting: Raymond, having lived a life apart, an observer more than anything, discovers that the brutal sex and the drugs, Nelson and Thomas, are forcing him to experience his own physicality much more directly, not just from the outside in. I am thrilled and thankful to see where Raymond's story leads him!
  2. Well said! Rawrawraw76 is an amazing talent, the author of my absolutely favorite stories on BZ. Pacing, character, dialogue are spot-on perfect for arousal. I hope that he and others we no longer hear from are well, and their absence from this site simply indicates a change in lifestyle and personal choices. The very nature of BZ's content means people might drop away when they set different priorities. I like to think that is the case for raw76, and that, given his talent, he continues to write in other modes, on other themes, somewhere.
  3. Wow! I don't know how I missed this, but so glad it's on my radar now. Even without the purged chapter, this is a great read. I love the character voices, especially: conniving Omar, sadistic rapist #4, Nico's playful Dad. There is the promise of Nico taking more family loads, at both Omar's family reunion and from his own uncles. You write too well Spermedhole to not develop these threads. Nico is a sick little fuck, and he deserves all the dick he can get, toxic and otherwise. And we readers deserve to see him fully converted, whether by anonymous DNA or by the very juice that made him.
  4. I love this. Verbal tops are the best, but they are rare in porn and difficult to convey in a story. This top's patter is excellent. Would love a sequel in which the bottom does knock up his "little boyfriends," applying a similar verbal litany to that he endured when he was knocked-up, filthy and debauched paeons of depravity to accompany his now toxic babies fucked deep into neg holes.
  5. Straddling the line between fuck fiction and horror porn, and doing it expertly.
  6. I have jacked-off to this story probably hundreds of times, but only just today realized that the video Sloane plays for Conrad is of Lance's pozzing is from the author's other great story, Seduced, Chemmed, and Pozzed by My Wrestling Coach. How I wish rawrawraw76 were still contributing these minor masterpieces to BZ. He elevated the art of bug-chasing/chem jack-off fiction to unparalleled standards. Now, I have to review his entire oeuvre for Easter eggs similar to this one. Boy, is my dick gonna raw!
  7. Wow...first thing to note: this is very well-written, even gripping. Dark-themed stories are not uncommon here, but they usually revolve around the corruption associated with drugs. The drugs in this story have been almost incidental. The feeling of menace is what moves it forward. I love the physical abuse: the relentless slaps and punches. "You'll always wear one of my blacked eyes..." Fuck, yes. I am torn between fearing for our narrator's safety and wanting to trade places with him. Bruises, after all, can be quite beautiful. These Mayhem Riders have great possibilities. I wonder if we'll learn what their "final way" entails....I could hazard a few guesses.
  8. Oh...and the photos....often a distraction to a good story, are a touching addition.
  9. Wow. This is an unusual thing to find here, an actual love story. Not romantic in any usual sense, but a love story all the same. "One of these guys is gone" suggests that this is an exercise in grief, and, if so, it is a privilege to be allowed a glimpse into this powerful relationship. The flow of the story, even its patter of repetitions, give it a feeling of confessional poetry. Although I was hard throughout the story, especially at the erotic language describing the slam, this is something other than mere porn. It is raw and sad and powerful, something to reflect on, not just jack-off to.
  10. Jeff is going to have a great summer, lucky boy. I love an initiation story, and this one is off to a promising start. In every good story there is usually one line that grabs me and pulls me in. Here it is: “I just want to make one thing clear, little bitch. When you have sex with us, we will hurt you. And I will sometimes hurt you a lot." Sexy and sinister, a winning combo.
  11. "And my faggots don't get safewords because I own them." Nick has such great dialogue. I wish that tops in porn could convey this level of authority and menace. So sexy. I'm looking forward to more. Much more.
  12. "You look so pretty, Chase, bent over my stool....wearing my ropes.....crying for me." Mm, very hot beginning with lots of promise. I suspect that Chase's innocence will not remain intact for long, going the way of his formerly tight sphincter. The best narratives have a convincing storytelling voice, and that is just what Chase has, which pairs well with Nick's subtle menace. (It doesn't hurt!, either, that the author is fucking sexy!)
  13. I so desperately need this story to be continued. The pictures only heighten that necessity. Please, please, please: more Justin and Jeremy!
  14. Awesome! I like that the story subverts expectations. Rather than the older, gay guy with drug experience corrupting Mark, it is the young, straight, inexperienced Mark leading Kyle out of sobriety and into a world of sexual degradation. It's hot that this young dude is finding his Dom persona with the help of tina, and is unapologetically using his father figure to explore this new side of himself. A fun read.
  15. Yes! I swear, I compose sequels to this story in my head constantly. There is real magic between Cooper and his Dad, and I only wish there were more chapters of them together. A Cooper and Grant sequel would be amazing. The story hints darkly at Coop getting excited at the thought of raw dick. I'd love to learn that Paul recognized that Grant and some of the others using his son's hole were poz, and allowed, even encouraged Coop's stealthing. Paul loves his son, but is eager to covert him into a poz slampig. One of my favorite stories by one of BZ's best authors!
  16. Just when I think I have exhausted the hottest stories on this site, I stumble on a real winner like this one. Sammy's tale of being re-cunted is rare among the more typical stories about young pigs being corrupted. His conflict is compelling, but he cannot resist the urge to have his cunt filled after too long and resuming his proper role. An exceptionally well-written story.
  17. So jealous. I wish someone had taken me in hand and initiated me that way.
  18. My favorite story on BZ. I hunger for more. It's been awhile, and I hope and pray that does not mean that the story has been abandoned. Justin and Jeremy deserve at least a few more chapters to deal with the revelation, their incestuous desires, and where they go from here. And their fans deserve a bit more fun from this great story and this terrific storyteller. Please, please, please...!
  19. A surprise and a treat to find this fun story resumed unexpectedly....!
  20. I'm eager to witness Jason's "journey of discovery." I love a slow burn story that takes its time with world and character building, and this is one. Blake's confidence practically drips off the screen, and is as palpable as Jason's naiveté. I am eager for more!
  21. I began sucking my cousin off shortly after I turned 15. He was 14. The first time was in my family's basement rec room during a family Christmas get together. He had some experience, having jerked off with friends before, so when I told him that I was gay, he asked if I wanted to blow him. I sure as hell did! Weirdly, when he asked if I wanted him to "do it" in my mouth, I assume he meant cum. When I nodded yes, he started pissing down my throat. 😲 So, I'm the unusual fag who tasted piss before ever tasting cum. We would continue screwing around, mostly oral, for the next 8 months, culminating in him fucking me for the first time in his family living room (while my parents celebrated their 25th anniversary with all our family right across the street). By this I had started seeing a 25-year-old dude, so I cooled things with my (otherwise straight) cousin.
  22. 'Tis the season for a new chapter to this promising story! Robbie knew what Baby Boy was getting. We seem to have a family tradition here in need of some exploring.
  23. In Breeding Season 3, Dayton O'Connor slices his sub's chest with a blade, leaving it covered in blood. After unloading up its ass, he slugs it in the face several times, which I love! There is a scene in another TIM movie in which Brad McGuire gives John Sullivan several post-coital face punches, too. So hot. I saw that someone else said that Christian seemed very unfriendly when encountered in public. By his own admission, Christian is extremely shy. As a rather shy dude myself, I know we sometimes come off as unfriendly or rude without meaning to. I adore Christian. Watch his getting fucked by Sean Hunter in Built to Fuck. Christian is simply beautiful.
  24. A definite yes. The main problem being that I love swallowing nut so much that I usually slurp the load down before I can share it. The best scenario is passing a top's nut back and forth with another cum-greedy bottom while he looks on, enjoying how much we relish his seed. I have not done that anywhere near enough. Just thinking about it has me rock hard.
  25. Wow! A fully original story here is unusual, but this one is just that. A vampiric love story with an AIDS subtext and a touch of hardcore raunch make this a great read. Lucas was chosen to partner with Demitri, unlike the lesser boys, who are simply drained for nourishment and disposed. Beautiful!
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