JWC1202
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I cannot wait for more! Bareback Austin is as expert at developing characters as he is at crafting sex scenes. I only wish we could all dwell in a world in which brutal, rapey doms faced so little consequence, naive faggot bottoms were always compliant, and the supply of tina never ran low.
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What a shame there was no follow-up to this well-written story. There are countless stories about the corruption of bottoms, either from their own POV or that of the tops guiding them into depravity. A story about a top like Blake coming into his own, learning his propensity for control and inflicting pain, is refreshing. I'd like to read about his intro to chems, especially as he seems to have fully embraced tina by that last paragraph, even as he resists letting it "control his life." It'd be nice to learn how far he allows himself to go as he grows into an increasingly confident dom.
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The title "Raymond" says it all, doesn't it? This is a story about characters, fully developed characters with distinct personalities and backstories. It is as if people from a great New Yorker short story wandered into a BZ scenario. It speaks to me especially because I'm a lot like Raymond: introverted, cautious, probably with a degree of Asperger's Syndrome. Unfortunately, I never met a Nelson or a Thomas, men who could really break me of my self-consciousness, manipulate me into surrendering my self-control. Raymond is so lucky: chemmed, fucked, broken, his personality surrendered to Nelson's dark needs and lusts. I hope he proves to be the boy Nelson has been seeking, someone he can really connect with both in and out of the sling. Oh, and Thomas? He's one scary motherfucker. I would love to follow him in his own story, or even a prequel, revealing the depths of what he did to poor, fucked Toby.
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And human trafficking gets such a bad rap! Mr Jackson is simply an exporter of exotic goods, and where supply is limited, he has no option but to create his own. I was hoping for a reveal that Jacob's Dad was selling his own kids into whoredom, or perhaps the family pastor was working with Mr Jackson to whore the boys out. Either way, this story is as much horror porn as porn. Unlike most forced chem and rape stories, neither Jacob nor Elijah ever fully embrace their situation. That doesn't bode well for their longevity.
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Seduced, Chemmed, and Pozzed by My Wrestling Coach
JWC1202 replied to rawrawraw76's topic in Chem Sex FICTION
Another first-rate story. The relationship between Pitt and Lance is sexy and nasty. I really enjoy how Coach introduces the subject of pozzing, and asks point blank, “Lance, I would so love to see this pretty virgin hole get knocked up with HIV. But are you sure you’re ready?” So blunt and direct, especially from a man who usually delights in stealthing. The only negative is that the ending is rushed, and that Strickland's role is so minor. He has a particularly nasty attitude (“We’re filming this, by the way. We want to document your initiation. I don’t care if that makes you uncomfortable") that I'd love to have seen more of. -
I used to work on Fourth Street, just blocks from where this story is set. Sadly, I never encountered a Sloane or a Grant to chem and poz me. Although rawrawraw76 has not written anything for quite awhile, he remains one of the very best on this site. I wish this story had continued, though, and that it had returned to Conrad, to find him taking more anonymous loads and Grant's daddy-fist. What I like about Sloane as a narrator is how up-front he is, conceding that he is an evil motherfucker. Dylan's rape is ugly, but the ugliness is made all the hotter when he ends up thankful for being slammed and pozzed, finally free. Such great storytelling!
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I fuckin' love this moment!
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Incredible. In the early chapters, it is simply a nice change seeing an older man corrupted by a younger guy, taught to fuck and party. It continues with Justin's growing eagerness for experience. In the later chapters, it evolves into a beautiful story of incest role play, eventually transforming into real incest. Justin's desire for Drew-as-Jeremy then for Jeremy himself is so hot. I love how he watches his son's corruption onscreen, hearing him beg to be bred, seeing him take his first slam. I am eager for the great reveal, for Jeremy's reaction to his Dad's handsome face, the obscene lust in his tweaker eyes. I wonder if Justin has any nephews he and Jeremy could convert...? Anything to keep this story rolling.
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Fucking The Passed Out Quarterback
JWC1202 replied to pervinmt's topic in General Bareback Sex Stories
This story has all the wonderful sexual brutality that characterizes most of Pervinmt's work, but at its heart is the tender affection between Cole and Mitch, a love story. Although their relationship started with Cole using Mitch much as others would use him, it evolved into something deeper and more honest. I'd like for Cole to outwit Mitch's tormentors, freeing his lover to be a cumdump or not on his own terms, not as a perpetual rape victim of Jenkins and his asshole frat bros. I'd love to see this story continued, and with a happy ending for our heroes, even if that includes whoring Mitch's holes every weekend. -
As John rapes and force pozzes his own son, we are left to wonder: is he just an evil prick or does he know that his actions will free Andrew, allowing him to be truly happy? Most likely both are true. Either way, it is a well-written, gripping story that I only wish were longer.
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This is one of the most relentlessly cruel stories on this site, as young TJ's boundaries are broken down, one after another. Following his transformation from a cocky teen skater into a barely human junkie whore threatens to awaken the sadist in even the most sedate of readers. The faggot's destruction is intoxicating. Although the story has not had a recent update, we have received a glimpse of TJ's eventual fate: "Big Sam will keep him until I give him his next boy, then the current boy will just "disappear". No one ever looks for the used up piece of trash again." Poor, poor TJ.
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As I read Good Christian Boys, I realized something about this author's stories in particular: I do not read them initially or mainly as porn, but as stories: really good, well-written, compelling stories. Sure, there is a ton of sex and chems and poz loads in each story, but what drives them forward for me is the narrative, the evolving relationships, the deepening characterizations. Lots of writers here try to convey the feeling of sex on chems, but I cannot think of one who makes a slam sound as convincing or appealing to a chem-virgin like myself. With each of EarlyStart's stories, I devour them first, beginning to end, without jerking off. With a hard-on, yes, to be sure, but the story holds every bit as much interest for me as the sex. That is rare for this kind of writing. Chris and Tyler's initial naivety, their overpowering Christian guilt, their gradual opening themselves to experiences both wise and questionable make for powerful storytelling. The characters and relationships are so important here that I would love to read an epilogue of sorts, even or especially one without sex. How does Tyler react to the news that they have all been pozzed? Can he forgive Chris for letting him be stealth pozzed? Will they, can they remain friends? How do Chris and Tyler feel about their religion after discovering a different kind of paradise in Hunter's bed? Have they relinguished their guilt? The story leaves these questions hanging, and while resolutions may not be possible, I'd love to learn where these two stand with each other (and with Casey, and with Greg) a few weeks or months later. Thanks, EarlyStart! This is powerful and rewarding stuff.
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In one of BZ's darkest stories, Cory's Dad is a monster of dick-hardening proportions. There is no compassion or tenderness in him, for his son or anyone else. Even his dealer is shocked by his inhumanity. It is such a great detail that he went to prison trying to steal money to abort Cory, then, eighteen years later, set about systematically destroying his loser of a son. Not that it takes much: Cory is pathetic, a waste, just waiting to be controlled and manipulated and reprogrammed. The faggot snivels his way through the story, making his abuse, from gang rape to castration, seem inevitable. One just knows that if Cory's body is finally discovered beside a backalley dumpster, his Dad will shoot a contented load over his son's long-delayed abortion. I long for a chapter or two that bring us to that kind of happy ending.
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A fantastic story, very hot, impossible to stop reading. I enjoy the hints of something sinister at play: Mr. Kelly pretending to get his bag, the phone call, Justin having Jake's cell, the ever-decreasing seeking of consent (inviting others over, the extra-strong dose, drugging the Gatorade, the double penetration). I confess to being afraid for Jake in this company. I don't know that these elements need a payoff or explanation, but they do hint at more going on than what our narrator Jake suspects. This is really first-rate, as both storytelling and porn. I might have done better at math had a teacher like Mr. kelly.
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There are not many things I enjoy more than a Dad betraying his own kid; betraying him to a life of bareback dick, chems, and meds is the best. John has no regrets because he knows the best possible life for his son is being a pozzed tweaker cumpig.
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A great story, well-written, perfectly paced. So much is left unsaid as Coop is slowly corrupted. His Dad eases him into it, but there is no doubt of his (evil?) intent to get his teenage son hooked on dick and tina, to poz his virgin hole. The story stands complete as is, but I'd love a sequel, perhaps revisiting Coop a few years later, experienced now, perhaps converting others the way he was converted. I'd love to read about him continuing his Dad's mission, fucking, slamming, and pozzing the innocent. I don't want his journey to end.
