Hmmm… again I’m not getting any inconsistent monster abilities, but I get your point on the Connor timeline though as rushed as it may be it still works in the timeline of one night.
As for Gray, I think of him as the protagonist too, and perhaps @PupLucky has a twist or two in store for us thinking one outcome will befall him when in the end we’ll be surprised by a different one. We’ll just have to let @PupLucky tell us that in his own way.
I love the story and hope it goes into a lot more “meaty” issues too, but I’ll gladly take as many piggy sex scenes he wants to throw in as well. I’m not gonna complain about that. 😉😀
Chapters 14 and 15 may have been fillers in story telling but I loved them because in the long wait we had for new chapters, I had several fantasy scenes play out in my head one of which was a jogging scene. So when @PupLucky gave me that, I was thrilled and thinking we were clearly on the same wavelength. I would have found it ironic and beyond hilarious had the author had the 23 year old stud jogger been listening to Toxic by Brittany Spears when assaulted from behind and impregnated by the Grey.