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Menbendovr

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  1. Very interesting! I love reading and hearing about real life stories just as much as fictional tales. Maybe more so actually!
  2. Welcome back! Love this story and your new chapter is just as piggy as the previous ones. It’s like there never was a gap.
  3. Where can I find this clinic?
  4. That’s right. Thanks for clarifying that we are into the second night of the escape. I love your story and look forward to each new chapter you post here.
  5. Hmmm… again I’m not getting any inconsistent monster abilities, but I get your point on the Connor timeline though as rushed as it may be it still works in the timeline of one night. As for Gray, I think of him as the protagonist too, and perhaps @PupLucky has a twist or two in store for us thinking one outcome will befall him when in the end we’ll be surprised by a different one. We’ll just have to let @PupLucky tell us that in his own way. I love the story and hope it goes into a lot more “meaty” issues too, but I’ll gladly take as many piggy sex scenes he wants to throw in as well. I’m not gonna complain about that. 😉😀 Chapters 14 and 15 may have been fillers in story telling but I loved them because in the long wait we had for new chapters, I had several fantasy scenes play out in my head one of which was a jogging scene. So when @PupLucky gave me that, I was thrilled and thinking we were clearly on the same wavelength. I would have found it ironic and beyond hilarious had the author had the 23 year old stud jogger been listening to Toxic by Brittany Spears when assaulted from behind and impregnated by the Grey.
  6. I suggest you read the previous chapters again. I perceive no inconsistent pacing. To me, it is all clearly still the first night of the creatures escape from the bio-lab. The setup we’ve been given about these creatures abilities makes it easy for them to spread their seed while pursuing Gray. The author has mentioned the pheromone trail they can detect even while very faint. I’m very confident that Gray will soon be a Grey.
  7. I love a positive true romance.
  8. Excellent new chapter! I like where you are advancing this story and introducing for us the culprits responsible for creating this new bio weapon. At least, that’s what it appears like to me.
  9. I just can’t get enough of this fantastic story.
  10. Hahahaha! I was thinking the same thing. It’s certainly a quick and efficient way to lose weight. I much prefer this method than the traditional ways.
  11. Welcome back @PupLucky! Fantastic chapter continuing one of the best stories posted here.
  12. Fantastic news @PupLucky! So glad new installments are on the way. And life does get in the way time to time, so you don’t need to apologize for that.
  13. Fantastic next chapter! Worth the wait. I’m loving this twisted story. Can’t wait for Joey’s new orientation camp.
  14. Awesome! I love this story. Keep going! These guys got to complete the mission of making their house another poz den. Another generation continuing the tradition and need that Omar’s house is providing.
  15. Well, clearly you can’t stop here. Majority teaser with this intro.
  16. Excellent poz love story!
  17. Fantastic story! Can’t wait for Aaron to entice and convince his house mates to join the club and make their group the next generation carrying on the tradition of Omar, Harry and Sid.
  18. Interesting start here!
  19. Good young piggy is being born!
  20. Perfect! Laser focus on the essence of what both men needed.
  21. You meant to say “oh the pozzibilties” I think. 😉😈☣️
  22. Fantastic story @ijoey! You have excellent ability to get us readers into each scene very vividly.
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