No Risk... No Fun

[Scorpion]

4 hours ago, shinelover said:

I do find it hilarious how some guys read the 'Bug Chasing / Gift Giving' section and then complain about the content. Seriously? Don't let it get to you, Scorpion.

If I had to comment on this story in particular, we've just gotten Part 4 and he's barely been penetrated (unless I'm forgetting a part, which is entirely possible).  I would assume that most guys reading really want to get to the 'chasing/gifting' part. That being said, this is your vision so let it play out however you see it. Guys will come back to it -we love your writing!

Greetings to Canada shinelover and thanks for your comment.

Yes, it is not about likes only and I can see the 'hits' on the stories, but still - if there is something like a voting system, in my mind it should be used to acknowledge the

work of the writer.

My intention was to give the people a soft kick, to use that system.

Oh well.... the way I write the stories is the only way I would and could. I am so uninterestd (irl) in vanilla s.e.x.

I can be romantic afterwards, but during the act it might be hurtful to my opposite, but surely is joyful to me.

"... barely even penetrated..." made me smirk.

[Scorpion]

3 hours ago, aim2game said:

I honestly dont upvote or downvote posts ever so it is sad to see an author give up just due to votes. Keep writing. Also keep in mind people might upvote your first chapter and not think to upvote the other chapters since they already voted and told you they like it!

Hum.... good point. But unsatisfying for me.

I think it is common, that if you 'create' something, then you enjoy the feedback. It is only natural.

Get rewarded for the work or something like that.

As far as the 'first voting theory' goes.... that slows me down totally. I can't help it, but it is simply so.

And aim2game, I am not giving up due to votes. I wanted to encourage people to use the voting system, or comment system, with the meaning

of 'give and take'.

Just tried to let you know, what slows me down to develop a story. I am sure, there would be other 'writers' who feel similar about it.

I can and I will write a million 'first chapters' - don't worry about that.

[larfleezed84]

Personally scorpion (and I'm trying not to be a fanboy saying this) but you are one of the most talented writers on this site. There's a few guys like yourself who construct awesome in depth characters with motives, histories, passions, desires. It's proper erotica not just a wank story. 

 

Ive followed a few stories of yours and of some other authors on here and will literally come back every day for the next instalment. It's dark, it's scary, it's fucking hot and makes me shoot over and over again.

 

its porn for fucks sake and there are too many guys here who freak out because suddenly it feels too aggressively or real. This is all fiction guys.  fiction is suppose to create scenarios that entice or scare, push boundaries and challenge perceptions. If you don't like it then just don't read it and go back to your old favourites. But having a whine at an author because it doesn't fit your idea of sexy is ridiculous. 

 

Please carry on scorpion and please any of the other classic writers on here reading this come back!! There are pigs here desperate to appreciate your works! 

[Yeolad]

I would like to read more

[RotzBBengel]

5 hours ago, Scorpion said:

 

My intention was to give the people a soft kick, to use that system.

Think that soft kick worked out fine, Scorpion

Chapter 4 went from 4 'likes' to 20 within 15 hours.

Good thing we're not in one of your stories - instead of a soft kick, we'd probably all gotten a lash of the belt, wouldn't we?!?

 

To all those upset and distraught readers: there is (thank God) a difference between fantasy and reality. No one ever used a belt on me and I don't think I'll ever want that to happen in reality, but still the thought of getting brutally abused makes my hole quiver with (probably quite perverse) excitement.

Be assured, if I witnessed this happening to someone else in reality, I'd intervene no matter what. And I think most of you would do the same. But that won't stop me from jerking off to the thought of it...

 

 

[bjbottom]

Can't help it, but I love the story and would love to be the twink.   I get off on rough sex and the idea of not being in control of the session.

[TTFN]

12 hours ago, Scorpion said:

I wanted to encourage people to use the voting system

Another thing to bear in mind with the voting system is the limit of 10 per day, I quite often reach this.

[Scorpion]

1 hour ago, ponyboy238 said:

Another thing to bear in mind with the voting system is the limit of 10 per day, I quite often reach this.

True.... true....

wait a second.... if everyone uses his 10 per day limit and only a few 'likes' reach me....

*snarls dangerously*

Hehe.... nah ponyboy238. I know you like my work. Just teasing you.

But you got a valid point here. Sometimes we use the 'likes' for one sentence or so.

For example: "Was last night in the bathhouse and got 14 loads" *bling* like like like like 

or... since we are visual beings: a nice picture of a bottom getting fucked by a big black cock. *bling* like like like like

Then again, this is not a reading circle I guess... still - it is not just about me, it's about other writers or stories also.

But who am I to judge. I still think, it is not too much to ask for some attention and appreciation.

 

 

 

 

Edited June 17, 2017 by Scorpion

[Guest Beardog53]

Scorpion,

Writing is one of the mediums of Art and like Art it is a personal thing. Some people are not going to like your Art. 

I of corse, are not one of those people and being Australian I say to you "Just finish the Dam thing"! LOL 

I love your very dark writing it feeds the very dark side of my personality keep it up matey 

[Fistcumslut]

hi Scorpion,

I always found very kind when an author openly ask a comment about his work, I know yours only rewards are the readers feedbacks. But thousands of readers means also thousands point of view. So don't worry too much about your writings.

 

[Jackfoster]

What's this story about a blind think getting taken advantage of cuz i wanna read that 

[Guest]

12 hours ago, Scorpion said:

True.... true....

wait a second.... if everyone uses his 10 per day limit and only a few 'likes' reach me....

*snarls dangerously*

Hehe.... nah ponyboy238. I know you like my work. Just teasing you.

But you got a valid point here. Sometimes we use the 'likes' for one sentence or so.

For example: "Was last night in the bathhouse and got 14 loads" *bling* like like like like 

or... since we are visual beings: a nice picture of a bottom getting fucked by a big black cock. *bling* like like like like

Then again, this is not a reading circle I guess... still - it is not just about me, it's about other writers or stories also.

But who am I to judge. I still think, it is not too much to ask for some attention and appreciation.

 

 

 

 

Scorpion, when I saw you had written a new story I felt like a little boy who just stumbled in an abbandoned truck full of candies lol

I love your writing, its realistic and intense.

You are passionate about your work.

If I may don't give too much credit to one or two old queens complaining.

You have a hard core audience who love your stories and love your passion for writing.

Plus you are also an amazing guy, those who criticize you have no idea of how great of a guy you are.

You are a writer who writes about peoples deepest most realistic desires.

To those who criticize you I say, see he's stories as a cautionary tale, especially this story.

About the likes, I consumed them all while reading this story XD

You are an anrtist and your art is neither illegal or bad, so don't compromise ever.

If people stopped writing just because some one did not like their works we wouden't have had 70% of today contemporary authors, from Steven King to Lee Child, to Crhicton to JK Rowling and dozens of others. 

Write for youself, write for those who loves your work and don't care for people that on a poz breeding sex depraved forum feel outraged for a sex story, they can hump back to the bus to disneyland.

 

[useme21]

I will need a translator support for write a commentary.. I love your stories

[Guest pigSS88]

lucky kid in that tale, left this pigs stomach in knots wishing it was in that position, stupidly offering itself over...fucken nice

 

[Scorpion]

No Risk… No Fun…  (Part 5)

 

 

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Davis was on the floor, trying to avoid the beating.

I stood above him, with two of my pals and we were swinging our belts and hit his body in every possible spot.

He trashed around, but had no chance to escape the whipping.

 

The scene was filmed by the 4^th guy and he switched between close ups of the welts appearing all over Davis’ body and the scenery from afar. So we could enjoy those minutes again and again later on.

 

We showed no mercy. It was like the warming up before the main event. Our cocks stood out proud and hard, just wishing the rape would start right now.

 

Davis was not screaming at the moment. It was more or less just grunting. He clenched his teeth and almost seemed out of this world.

And again the lad tried to flee from the pain and the violence. He simply fainted on us. We were so in motion, that we didn’t notice it at first.

 

Out of breath we stopped our attack.

 

“You brought us a nice piece of meat” someone said.

 

“Wake him up” I said coldly.

 

Another bucket of cold water was splashed over his head.

 

He gasped for air and looked around disorientated.

 

“No more…” were his first words.

 

“No more…” he repeated again.

 

“No more… beating” I said.

“No more…” I stressed my words and crouched next to him.

 

“Move your body to the bed” I whispered to Davis.

 

“Move your fucking body to the bed and spread your fucking legs so we can start ripping your ass open.” with that I got up again and gave the lad a little nudge with my boots to make him more cooperative.

 

Slowly he crawled to one of the beds, accompanied by our booted feet, showing him the right way.

 

Every muscle in his body was tensed. It was such a great moment, hearing his soft sobbing, realizing he wanted to crawl away from us, but we gave him little kicks, so it would be easier for him to find our love nest.

 

We grinned at each other and jerked our cocks slowly.

 

“Good boy” I teased him

 

Davis looked around scared, when he got onto the bed.

 

“On your back cunt and spread those damn legs” I growled.

 

Davis assumed position, but didn’t look all too happy about it.

 

“Now… Davis… wouldn’t it be nice, if you would repeat the words you used, when you contacted me?” I asked soothingly.

 

“About getting fucked?” he asked timidly.

 

“About everything…” I answered loudly.

“Tell us how you wanted to be raped and your cunt busted.”

 

The 18 year old boy shook his head.

 

“You better tell us…” I warned him.

 

“I… I wanted to be raped. I… I wanted my cunt destroyed *sniffs*  I needed hard cock….” Davis mumbled.

 

“Exactly and now a little bit louder and say it in a way, that we believe it.” I ordered him to tell us the things a second time.

Before that, I told my pals to assemble on the bed, next to our little rape toy and let him stroke our cocks and lick two cockheads, while the 5^th fellow would film this great scene.

Davis looked around, not knowing how to react.

 

While Davis got a zoom up, jacking us off or lick our dickheads we gave him the opportunity to look straight into the cam and tell us his deepest desires.

 

“I…. *sob* I… want to be raped.”

“I am a useless cunt and need to be destroyed”

 

Tears ran down his face while he praised his hole to be torn apart and to be fucked bloodily.

 

“Good cunt…. we will give you, what you were looking for.” and we fist bumped each other, while using insults on the lad.

 

“So let’s get started. You must be delirious already” I laughed cruelly.

 

I went between the guys legs and arranged his legs to be on my shoulder.

Davis tried to push me away, but I was a lot stronger than this helpless little twink.

 

“Someone hand me the lube….” I demanded.

 

It was a lot commotion going on now.

Davis felt my cock nestling against his tiny hole, already probing to gain entrance.

He wasn’t happy about it and tried to push me away.

 

“Lube….” I shouted and tried to get the boy under control.

 

“Erm… nobody brought lube with him apparently.”

 

“We need lube…. oh well, spit and blood will do it also I guess….” I mused.

 

“This will hurt lad, but it will hurt you more, that it will hurt me” I cackled gleefully.

“As soon as you bleed, my cock will glide more easily into your twat. Don’t worry….” I added.

 

“Maybe this will help?” someone said.

 

A guy came out of the bathroom, holding a used toothbrush in his hand.

 

He looked at the men…

They looked at me…

I looked at Davis…

 

“We need to get your hole bloody…” I told him truthfully.

 

Suddenly Davis understood the concept and started wailing…

Edited June 20, 2017 by Scorpion