barebackrnb
-
Posts
219 -
Joined
-
Last visited
Recent Profile Visitors
8,020 profile views
barebackrnb's Achievements
-
I am now expecting the unexpected from you. Didn't see the BB twist coming, but it fits into the overall story line quite well! I believe you have captured the inner workings of some (through BB's story) of those in politics who express their dislike and even hate for members of the LGBTQ community. The one who pops to mind is a certain senator from SC...🤣 Thanks for this installment and looking forward to the next...
-
I agree...😃 This is why I have had a dishwasher in every place that I have lived...😉
-
Adding appropriate context in erotic stories is a difficult task to do while keeping the overall story line progressing at a good pace to maintain the reader's attention. This dream chapter provided a great way to develop the emotional bond between Zeke and Tommy--teaching them and us what really matters in relationships. Another well-written and thoughtful chapter!
-
Love the introduction of the twins to the story! I really like and hope that future chapters tell us how successful their plan to infect the R party's young and older men was/is. (They might even rename the party to the "P" party....🤣 ) Can't wait to read more!
-
I believe in rewarding people for doing great and pozitive things. Writing sounds easy, but it takes skill and talent to do it well, and you accomplish this with every new chapter! 😀
-
Outstanding writing with intriguing twists in the story line! Love how you develop characters over several chapters. (We are still learning more bits and pieces about Mike and Jeff. ) This takes tremendous skill and wordsmanship to do and keep the readers' attention, especially leading up to and through the Kip fuckfest! Well done, @Scanbu!
-
I must agree that you can write stories that are truly amazing and arousing! Your words bring the characters to life in my mind and take me along in their journey(s). Please keep sharing these stories. They are some of the best erotica on this site! 😀
-
Kudos for keeping us readers glued to your excellently written and erection-producing chapters. I really liked how you introduced and incorporated Jason into Tommy and Zeke's life and assuming his role as a gifter in the baths. Looking forward to learning how Alex responds to becoming Zeke's sex slave and how this will affect his relationship with Jason. Can't wait for your next installment!
-
Nicely written and a good transition for Tommy from a total bottom to a gifter! Hopefully, Tommy will embrace this new role and spread his gift to other neg guys both young and old...☣️
-
I think we all have an "evil" side just like Tommy. Most never get a chance to allow this side out completely. It's great to see Tommy allow "Evil Thomas" emerge and express himself in public. Your description gave me a vivid mental picture of Tommy in his leather gear walking through the festival led by Zeke and in the hotel with Ed and Zeke. I think having Tommy fuck Ed with his almost certain toxic cum would have further punctuated the "evilness" of Thomas in both Zeke's and Ed's eyes and increased Ed's desire to refuse no load as he returns to the festival. Looking forward to Zeke and Tommy's wedding and what sexy things it will involve. How will Zeke and Tommy consummate the marriage? There are so many pozzibilities?! Thanks again for continuing this fantastic story line!
-
Love how you have integrated these two story lines to make a very engaging and sexy chapter for Zeke and Tommy while keeping Mike and Jeff "alive" and giving us readers more details about their life together. Thank you for sharing these stories and your writing skills...😀
-
Enjoying this story line just as much as your others...😀 Each sentence keeps my interest. Looking forward to see where you take Zeke and Tommy!
-
Somebody to be mine forever.
barebackrnb replied to Scanbu's topic in Bug Chasing & Gift Giving FICTION
Like others, I was surprised with the ending. Not at all what I expected, but quite appropriate and thought-provoking for us readers. Thanks for the amazing writing and attention-grabbing story line! -
Somebody to be mine forever.
barebackrnb replied to Scanbu's topic in Bug Chasing & Gift Giving FICTION
The level of detail, in my opinion, depends on the characters and their importance in the chapter/story line, but I believe (since this is a gay sex-oriented site,), there can't be too much detail when it comes to describing sex scenes, especially the first pozzing of a neg guy.....😉 -
Somebody to be mine forever.
barebackrnb replied to Scanbu's topic in Bug Chasing & Gift Giving FICTION
Each chapter adds a new "twist" and dimension to the story line, and always keeps my attention and cock bouncing...😉 Excellent writing! Keep the chapters cumming, @Scanbu!
