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leatherpunk16

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  1. When I get close, I generally let the guy know. He has a chance to say no because I don't want him freaking out later when he didn't verbalize that he didn't want that. They are usually okay with it. In a related story, I got pounded really hard by a Daddy in October 2015. I was cheating on my boyfriend who had a small dick. I had an itch inside me that he couldn't reach, but this Daddy could. So we fucked. It was one of the best fucks of my life. I let him bareback me. I trusted him, and it was amazing. But I had also opened myself to risk. He gave me gono that didn't show up for nearly three months. It ruined my relationship with the boyfriend when I had to tell him so he could be protected. This hurt a lot less when I met the great love of my life two months later. If it hadn't been for the Daddy sticking his gono dick inside me, I wouldn't have met my amazing late husband. I say know what you want, but be open to possibilities when letting a guy nail you raw. You never know where it can lead!
  2. I joined this site last week. I spend most of my time in the Fiction section. It entertains me, but that's about it. I'm not the sort who posts on here daily or something. I just don't have much to say, but when I do have something to contribute, I'll do it. Feel free to say hello. I'm a nice guy, and #bareback4life.
  3. I was at a piss party in Rogers Park last month, but it was very dry. Turned into a barebacking party pretty fast. Give those a try, even if piss isn't your thing.
  4. Hi guys. Long-time reader, first-time poster. I've been following this story with interest. It's quite good. Might I make a few comments? ChiLoads, at the outset you say it's your first attempt at such a fiction. Excellent start. The wide variety of characters keeps it entertaining, and hot as fuk in many chapters. You clearly thought about what you wanted to write and how to tell each incident. But I think it's starting to suffer from repetition. Joe has become the main character now, and Mark disappeared into the background. I thought he was the more interesting of the two. To add to the variety, I think the narrative might be improved if you insert something a little different than just breeding and seeding. What makes a story interesting is conflict, a problem for the characters to solve. Something of a dramatic and sensational nature would do, something to break up the constant cycle of meeting new characters who want to get charged up. It was hinted at when Eric wanted Mark's seeds, or when Kyle kept his hookup with Mark a secret. I think if you took it in a new direction, it would make a compelling tale. Give it a try, okay?
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