Predators And Prey

[Brinxx]

13 hours ago, Scorpion said:

That's nice boy... better than hearing.... 'good that he's gone for good'     😎😉😋😆
I miss interacting with you too. 

No Writer is as good as Scorpion, I used to get so excited when I had seen him post. Wish you would continue!

[Scorpion]

4 hours ago, Brinxx said:

No Writer is as good as Scorpion, I used to get so excited when I had seen him post. Wish you would continue!

Best compliment I guess I could receive.... it was always a real pleasure for me, writing those stories, but also a pleasure posting them, knowing some of you guys would love those twisted chapters - coming out of my twisted mind.    
Thx Brinxx!   😏😋😎

[Syracuseboy]

I have read this story 3 times i love it. 

[worldfamous]

Long dead thread, but here’s hoping Scorpion brings it back to life sometime!

[Chubbytransguy]

Holy ffuck. Long dead thread but I’m glad I found it. 

[Scorpion]

On 1/30/2024 at 11:15 PM, worldfamous said:

Long dead thread, but here’s hoping Scorpion brings it back to life sometime!

The hope is merely the last thing to lose....    😏😎

[Scorpion]

12 hours ago, Chubbytransguy said:

Holy ffuck. Long dead thread but I’m glad I found it. 

Yes - when a thread is no longer updated it gets lost somehow. It is always nice, when readers find it and enjoy the plot I once created....  

[PozBearWI]

Indeed, it would be lovely to create a BZ Story Compendium where the story posts itself are put into a single document or thread absent commentary.  New readers could focus on the story itself absent the years old commentary; and thus take it in as a new read all in one start to finish place.  

[notinuse123]

Everyone would love this story to continue, so hot and horny. Makes me leak my pre cum

[bradhall]

4 minutes ago, JimInWisc said:

Indeed, it would be lovely to create a BZ Story Compendium where the story posts itself are put into a single document or thread absent commentary.  New readers could focus on the story itself absent the years old commentary; and thus take it in as a new read all in one start to finish place.  

I agree.  The commentary is in the way. But how the tiers are set up by the moderators people have to post comments to advance even to the level to send direct messages.  It's a flawed system just to move up in the breeding zone rank.

[Chubbytransguy]

The more times I read this, the more I wish the biker hadn’t gone back 🤷‍♂️ Still hot, but I don’t feel as much sympathy for Micheal when he obviously wanted it so bad. 

[Scorpion]

6 hours ago, Chubbytransguy said:

The more times I read this, the more I wish the biker hadn’t gone back 🤷‍♂️ Still hot, but I don’t feel as much sympathy for Micheal when he obviously wanted it so bad. 

The other ending would have been quite brutal for Michael. He definitively didn't want to die. Although I had this in my mind at first, I chose another path for him.

Maybe I should have left him there bleeding out of every hole possible - and leave it to your imagination, what could have happened next.
Would he return home? What would he tell his mom?
Would he recover from the blows and escape to another life? Even as a hustler or whore?
Would he become a cum slut or would this event change his inner course.... maybe he would look for love instead for sex?
Who knows....

By the way 'snuff' was (and is) not an option on BZ. 

And a little bit of romance.... can be nice too.