chargedodger Posted September 5, 2018 Report Posted September 5, 2018 Well written and thought provoking story.Kudos!:)
Guest Posted September 8, 2018 Report Posted September 8, 2018 Would love to know of and volunteer to go into service at a hospice like this if one were located in my area, great story and hope there are more chapters to this.
suckerboi Posted January 17, 2019 Report Posted January 17, 2019 I wish there were still AIDS hospices around. I would love to imitate the narrator here.
haireebear Posted January 18, 2019 Report Posted January 18, 2019 This needs to be made into a mini-series on HBO.
fucknfeedme Posted January 18, 2019 Report Posted January 18, 2019 Hot story - I would love to find a few full blown studs to worship
sse4me Posted January 19, 2019 Report Posted January 19, 2019 Excellent writing! A great story line, well developed and "polished!" 1
mattg Posted April 24, 2019 Report Posted April 24, 2019 I just squirter in my eye thinking reading this 1
Sluttttboy Posted October 27, 2019 Report Posted October 27, 2019 Me too On 4/24/2019 at 9:22 AM, daveinkent1 said: I just squirter in my eye thinking reading this
ScorpionFF Posted October 27, 2019 Report Posted October 27, 2019 This is the BEST thing I have read here hands down. Absolutely no contest. I was there in the hospice room with Ken and the narrator. I was there in the sling room with Ken and the greedy marine guy. Captivated! The entire story structured to an exceptional level writing skill. As 'ejaculaTe' said; [ But there's a sensuality and tenderness between Ken and the narrator that takes the story beyond mere bug-chasing porn. ] And as 'Monster5-8gPA' said; [ ... to show they are worthy of love and kindness it at times the best thing you can do for another human being ] Those comments resonate with me. Yes, we are all horny fuckers, yet, at the end of the long hard day, we are human beings, with feelings. I have never read anything on here until now where my heartstrings were tugged, and, emotions bubbled to the surface. Then, the narrator manages to yank me from that place with; ''Until Mark.'', which caused a loud audible laughter. And that in my book is a sign of tremendous talent and creativity, managing to take someone on a journey where the story flicks their emotions from one emotion to another in a split second. Thank you VERY much 'Spermpig' 😎 7
jackdaw Posted October 28, 2019 Report Posted October 28, 2019 I, too, loved this tale. For those who get off on Hospice stories, I've written several which are in this forum. Let me know if you like them. 3 4 2 1
AnonPerv Posted August 28, 2022 Report Posted August 28, 2022 On 10/27/2019 at 9:38 PM, jackdaw said: I, too, loved this tale. For those who get off on Hospice stories, I've written several which are in this forum. Let me know if you like them. Hot damn. I’d bend over for you. 1
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