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  • 1 month later...
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Wow! I came across this story only recently, but I have to hand it to you for grabbing my attention and not letting go.

My only quibble is that in the last installment, you did not expand on the sex in a couple of situations. When Tom and Brad were alone, fucking several times, around the RoseWood pool, and in Bora Bora, t'would've been great to hear about how several bung holes were filled up in that overwater bungalow, when Eddie spent more time in theirs than his own.

No matter, this was a great story! Now I find myself looking around for more of your work.... Thanks!

(Around the pool, I like the idea that Jacob and Marcus had solid furniture as well as several pieces of decorative sculpture, abstract art, all of which were sized, shaped, and placed to promote male ass fucking. Some have the bottom face down; others, face up.  All promote deeply planting seed. Brad's high sex drive was in full force and it combined with their mutual curiosity, as it dawned on them what they were looking at around the pool, to drive them to use each piece, in turn. Tom's hole would have been leaking Brad's cum by the end of that fuck-fest....)

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  • 3 years later...
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I can't believe that I never finished this story when it was first published. I started re-reading and found now that there was so much more. I was totally hooked. What a great storyteller you are. Thank you for sharing your talents with all of us.

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