Watch out for Scorpions in the desert

[KinkyTallBottom]

Great writing.  Please let us know how the night progresses?

[TustinBB]

Damn,  don't leave us hanging, keep it up 

[austin_submale]

Yeah, I really love the story telling style of this.  I especially like how all the noises are described, it really adds a realism.

 

[AZpighole]

Nice we writing Phxcub, I enjoyed it. I have to say,  being Phoenix metro resident, it sounds as though this may be based on a true story.  I've been to several of the desert/ city parks and have enjoyed the pleasure of breeding loaded. Hope to hear more. 

[austin_submale]

7 hours ago, AZpighole said:

Nice we writing Phxcub, I enjoyed it. I have to say,  being Phoenix metro resident, it sounds as though this may be based on a true story.  I've been to several of the desert/ city parks and have enjoyed the pleasure of breeding loaded. Hope to hear more. 

Damn!  I'd love to find a place like this!  I'd travel to Phoenix just for that!

 

[phxchub]

17 hours ago, AZpighole said:

Nice we writing Phxcub, I enjoyed it. I have to say,  being Phoenix metro resident, it sounds as though this may be based on a true story.  I've been to several of the desert/ city parks and have enjoyed the pleasure of breeding loaded. Hope to hear more. 

 

10 hours ago, austin_submale said:

Damn!  I'd love to find a place like this!  I'd travel to Phoenix just for that!

 

Unfortunately this is all fiction because I have never been able to find anything like this here despite always looking.

Maybe some day

[DaWhore]

Brilliant story, 5th reading....

[austin_submale]

13 hours ago, phxchub said:

 

Unfortunately this is all fiction because I have never been able to find anything like this here despite always looking.

Maybe some day

Alas.  Well, maybe someday.

 

[DaWhore]

more?

 

[Guest Rainmaker5555]

Not believing anyone wants to read their pages of fantasy in this page

[austin_submale]

36 minutes ago, Rainmaker5555 said:

Not believing anyone wants to read their pages of fantasy in this page

I'm not sure what you mean by that, but I liked this story so much I wrote another one based on this.

 

[austin_submale]

Here is my story based on this one:

[think before following links] https://breeding.zone/topic/61123-watch-out-for-scorpions-in-the-desert-2/

It's really not 1/2 as good as the original but it is the best I can do and maybe you might enjoy it and be inspired to write your own stuff, even if you are as uncreative and poor writer as I am.

 

[phxchub]

8 hours ago, Rainmaker5555 said:

Not believing anyone wants to read their pages of fantasy in this page

You realize this is the Fiction section right?

[phxchub]

Was just reminded I wrote this. I should write more stories again, been too long

[PozTalkAuthor]

21 minutes ago, phxchub said:

Was just reminded I wrote this. I should write more stories again, been too long

 

Yeah, takes a lot of effort, to write stories! And sometimes we simply aren't in the mood to!